Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2020 7:18 PM Title: COMPILATION I

I want to start off and say the changes in the translation are so much better! It flows so much better as well as the additons, I do like them with the non-canon chapter being very neat to see. As the story goes on, I do hope that we get to see a bit of mouth play mentioned. Feet, ass and the like are nice but something about a tiny that small being near a mouth seems exciting. Do look forward to seeing the next chapters!

Author's Response:

Hi!, thank you very much for your review, I am glad to know that the revision in the translation really produced an improvement in the reading! Don't worry, more chapters will come in the future and all the points you mentioned will be explored in depth as the journey progresses, aimed at fulfilling the protagonist's goal and finally, an outcome. 

 

 

Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2019 8:18 PM Title: COMPILATION I

I really do love this story, even with the minor grammer errors. Such as going from 'her' to 'his' and then back to 'her' throws off the flow of the story. As well the over use of commas and run on sentences is a minor gripe.

But that doesn't detrack from my love of this story. I love that the people are so small, almost microscopic, to the girl that towers over them. To be that small to a girl that doesn't know you're there is incredible. A single hair could crush a man and it's not something you really see beyond giga stories where the giantess is thousands of miles tall compared to a planet. The world building is also really well done. Having cities or colonies of people trying to survive in this harsh world over ruled by a goddess that can easily step or sit on hundreds of them with feeling anything. And the fact that there is so much weight being put on the people that get stepped on or sat on that there leaves nothing but a black silhouette on the ground makes the hairs of the back of my nech stand up. 

 I also love that the main character has one goal. To get to the goddess' legs. To be a regular man again as well it's written from a journal. I can only imagine the life he had before he was brought to be shrunk this small. I enjoy the aspect of the journal and the inner thoughts of the main guy. No diolouge and it's just him and his entires. Love that. Reminds me of a post end of the world situation where the threat is still there, hunting you but for future people to learn to adapt better in this world. Love the concept. 

Anyway, long review over. I do hope you continue this story to its end because it is a  gem on here that people have been sleeping on. Any way, good luck and have a good life.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review, I have about half of the history I have written even without uploading, and I hope in the coming days to make a thorough review of all the errors to correct them, as well as the rewriting of certain parts, I hope you continue reading what I add later, thank you very much :)

Reviewer: baaronz12 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2019 11:55 AM Title: COMPILATION I

I love the size concept in this story! Giving accurate size measurements helps me understand her sheer size. The translations read rather well in english by the way.

 

Keep it up!

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for you review and sorry for the time that have passed, I made a general review of the translation to improve it and I'll add in the next days more information and comparations to understand better the sizes in the scenario