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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2019 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

  You really have a way with words, Jack. I was so looking forward to this chapter and it was well worth the wait... Poor Sam, he still has no idea how vulnerable he actually is ~ Now!

 Rachel's sence of humor is so elequint and subtle, yet demanding enough to send chills up your spine... she could crush him into a flattened out paste, with just a slight flex of her pretty little toes. But yet, she simply holds him inside there, as gently as a mother Croc holding her miniscule babies inside of her terrific mouth...

  Love it!  Can't wait to see how she plays with him when she gets out of her office! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Rachel is definitely still finding her footing here.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm probably (re)repeating myself, but if we ever meet I need to offer you guys  a drink.

You and the guy who commissioned this story, "Another Day at the Office" and "Ultimate Late Fee" that is.

 

... make it three drinks actually.



Author's Response:

I've got another couple pseduo-sequels in this universe that'll be released in time.

Reviewer: Serviceslave2020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well written, love the Professional Women aspect of the dominance



Author's Response:

Professional Women is definitely the vibe of this one in capital letters.

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