Date: December 29 2021 7:59 AM Title: Making your case
This one moves pretty fast. Love the concept and the story is really fun to read. But I’d break down the interaction jussssst a little more.
Date: July 25 2019 7:23 AM Title: Making your case
From what I can tell, Max and Megan have a lot in common. Both are not honest about how they fell and think.
Max obviously doesn't have much contact with other girls, and thinks Megan is very beautiful, what obviously ignates an inner conflict. Does he crave for her? Is he a pervert? To top it down, deep down he thinks she sees him as Alexis sees, as a burden and powerless, so he tries to assert his authority over her. Then, there is Megan hipocrisy of geting angry at Max for peeping but using her butt and underwear as "punishment". Hell, in the first chapter she wanted to put him inside her shoes and smell her socks!
Don't know if I am reading far too much into the chracters. I tend to do that. Either way, those are my thoughts on the last 3 chapters. Please keep updating regulary! It doesn't need to be every day, but, once a week maybe? As you can see I am invested in the story and characters :DD
[Report This]Date: July 24 2019 8:41 PM Title: Making your case
I'll admit I jumped to the end here. But the butt action is amazing! I love these sister gf dynamics, and trying to change everyone to viewing him as a perv. I'll need to start from the begging, but this is a great story and I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Well it seems in this sort of format, that is quite a compliment to the writing haha. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review.
Thanks & Stay tuned for more!