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Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2019 6:19 PM Title: The Game

Megan is such a great character! It's delightful how she uses her odor and athleticism to torment Max.  It'd be great if you could describe her soccer outfit a little more.  Can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I did not initially plan for Megan to really play that big of a role but people love her already!

 

Her college uniform consiste of a jersey and shorts combo, mainly a black base with gold accents. Beneath the top layer, Megan always plays in a sports bra and her favorite "lucky" pair of spandex booty shorts. She insists that this specific garment is what helped her be the leading scoring forward on the team this year. And because of her inherent laziness, these shorts will occasionally go multiple practices or even games with out getting washed. 

 

I think you have just inspired a new flashback chapter featuring this info. Stay tuned!

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