Date: August 07 2019 9:52 PM Title: And Then There Were Three
Yes! Drama with giantess and there feet! Thank you! Since the last chapter with memories I keep thinking about the part where Megan grows to giant size... and I think it would be an interesting if Max where willing to play along with her... they even build a city together so that they can role play... So, about the two new chapters (21 and 22)
I was imaginig things differently, I would have done things differently... AND I AM SO GLAD YOU DIDN'T DO AS I WOULD! Let me explain
This is more of a theory than a review. A little of both. And, I must say, even I didn't expect to come up with those ideas but, these last two chapters where, in my opinion, a game changer. I even changed my initial outllok on the barista kkkkk. Hope you find it usefull as to draw inspiration. I am just having too much fun imaginig diferent scenarios for your story!
This two chapters gave a lot to think about. At first I thought that Alexis would be the 'goddess' cliche character, finding pleasure in power... but this passage - "“If only I were a little shrinky. Oh well.” Alexis laughs." - rises many questions. Maybe the pleasure she fells doesn't come directly from the sensation of control but of whatching said control while she fantasize herself as a tiny person.
About Megan, I am pleased the first thing she does after getting her hands on the toy she so eagerlythought she wanted, is to start looking at and worrying about Max. Why? Because, there is obvious tension betwen all 3 main chracters. Max find both Megan and Ashley more than atractive. There are times where he simply puts Ashley in a pedestal as every lover would do. For Megan, the scene where he peeps at her in the bathroom (ch. 3 if i remember right) speaks volumes.
Meanwhile, the sisters clearly compete to see who is more loved as to who Max prefers most. We can se that in the latest chapter, but also in the times Megan makes fun of how Max thinks Ashley is perfect. We can see that since chapter 1, specially with Megan, but now also with Ashley. She gets upset thinking that Max prefers Alexis or Megan over her and is starting to have fantasies with him, all while fagging ignorance and inocence. All that amounts to an interesting confllict. I started this story thinking that Ashley would get jealous of Alexis atention to Max, BUT, it could be the other way around!
We can not forget (if my memory is right - I need to read the chapters again to be 110% sure) that Max choose to go living with Ashley and Megan followed in their footstep. As I said in another comment, the Devil is in the details.
Only time will tell, but I am willing to bet this wasn't the last fight (nor the first) fight Ashley and Megan have over Max. Wich brings me to my last two points: the barista and Megan ex-boyfriend. I thought I disliked her. I WAS WRONG (MAYBE). She will eventually try to take Max out of the house and I don't think that is something the sisters will allow. Yes, I am thinking of antagonisms and deep revelations for the future, where the focus of the story may shfit, from Alexis playing the sisters, to Alexis shrinking and becoming a paw in a game to see who will get to rule over the protagonist life.
There are two parts of the chapter very important that weren't shown: Alexis talk with Megan and the first part of the fight between the sisters. But, it was hinted that Alexis wanted to stir drama. What drama, remains unclear BUT I wouldn't be surprised if at the center where the tension all 3 main characters don't want to adress. This drama, this tension, I believe caused Megan to break up with her boyfriend. Yes, she got what she wanted and then the trill was gone, just like it is implicit in ch. 21: she did all sort of things with Max to get a tiny slave. She got. And the next day she just wants to go back home WITH MAX? Shoundn't she rejoice and just enjoy the moment, seeing everything in a good mood? But she doesn't. She looks guilty, she doesn't want that anymore and, without a good reason, starts to dislike Alexis. Why?? She did all she did and now wanted to just leave with her tiny brother? I am with Max on this one: although the worry was real, she had ulterior motives and the fact tha she didn't got it rised the stakes and lead to an emotional outburst.
Thank you for the story and the answers. Hope you enjoy this comment as much as I enjoyed writing it. It has been a long time since I have found a story on this site that got me so invested in the characters!
Author's Response: Well I can tell from the size of your reviews that you genuinely enjoy this story, and that brings a tremendous amount of joy to my heart. So thank you very much for that. Now.. on to the review. I don’t want to spoil anything so I’m going to be very vague, but I will say this. On some points you’re nowhere close, but on a couple of things you’ve hit the nail on the head. Based on the review that you’ve left so far, and the fact that you aren’t upset by shocking revelations, I would say that you are going to enjoy where things are going to be when the story ends. As always I appreciate you reading the story and taking the time to leave a genuine review! Stay tuned!