Reviewer: stanleysfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 11:21 AM Title: Finale! (Ending 1)

my favorite character is still Ashley

Reviewer: Juliodragon69 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2020 4:27 AM Title: Finale! (Ending 1)

the best story I've ever read about shrinkage !!! I'm not a big fan of foot fetish but even I loved it, it's a masterpiece. the only defect and that the story ends. loved the ending !!! I wanted to see more details about the protagonist's new life.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm incredibly honored by the praise. This story was such a fun one to write. And I think you might be happy to know that I'm starting the story back up. I was never fully content with how it ended so I'm going to be ret-conning some chapters and starting a new story arc. Hope you stick around to check it out.

Reviewer: Uroborus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2019 11:40 AM Title: Finale! (Ending 1)

How pleased I am with the finale. Throughout the story, I was worried that Max would become a slave, and Ashley would become cruel. And I'm glad that this did not happen.
Goddess Day 2 times a month is too few :3
One more question. What happened to the other RP that lived with Alex? (hope they escaped)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the finale! And I appreciate the feedback throughout. I do plan on adding some Goddess day chapters down the road, so keep an eye out for those.

 

And as for the other RP's with Alex, I plan on writing a side story about that, but Ivan and Liz were both captives of her's that ended up escaping.

 

Thanks for reading my friend!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 10:15 PM Title: Finale! (Ending 1)

So its here... the final chapter. Ok... where to begin? First, you deserve all the praises for your dedication, expetacular writing, patience in reading and responding all reviews. But, above all, thank you for making our days better with your story and characters.

About this last 3 chapters: First, I loved Max interaction with Liz and Missy in ch. 42 and how you semented their relationship with a sex scene. It seems to me she really wanted to be big so she could have Max betwen her toes... but lets not get ahead of ourselfs.

Second: Megan, Ashley and Max... I loved the chemestry you created betwen them. The fraternity was clear, but their respective stands were ambiguous enough to create conflict and doubt. In other words, space to grow and develop their personality. By far the one that most surprised me was Ashley. Her change was the biggest, the most evident but I never felt it was rushed or out of place. All fitted perfectly into the story plotline.

Then there is Megan. She is my favorite character for a couple of reasons, mainly her outspoken and apparently troubled personality. I expected Max to play a bigger hole in her development while getting more glimpses into their shared past. That didn't happen, as only one chapter centered around Max interaction with Megan and Ivan got introduced. If I had one problem with the story, was this: Megan development/change was unexpected... her hypocrisis and contradictions, her childish behavior, all that was solved in 2 or 3 chapters by Ivan that apperently is the perfect guy... yeah I don't like Ivan. I don't believe in perfection kkkkkkkkkkkk. Moving on.

I think Max is a very interesting character and is with gladness and hope that I see you've left his arc open for a continuation. He finally adressed his feelings for Ashley and so did she. I was even more surprised to know that both sisters wanted to participate in the "goddess day" deal... is it... is it possible? Ashley x Max is cannon?! And there is still hope for the ship Max x Megan??? (you really sent a liferaft kkkkkkkkkkkk)

Seriously,  this last chapters wrap up things letting the stage open for continuation. I know Liz seems to accept the whole "gooddess day", but we know for a fact she didn't liked at first. She accepted to exact vengeance on Alexis, which means she lied to Max. And what will happen to Alexis? And what about her father?

I must say, you made my days much more fun with your story. Your talent ended up as inspiration to me and I really hope to see more from you. Now that the main story is (apparently) finished I will read the spin offs.

I wrote this review very late at night (were I live) and very tired, but I had to read and comment once I saw the update. Sorry if the text is a mess. Now that we are finishing, I just would like to know if you have plans for a "Losing control 2" or if you plan to write a new story. If you ever need help coming up with ideas, contact me (I have no idea how the private contact works on this site, but I will learn kkkkkkk)

Once again, thank you my friend and don't disappear. The site needs talents like you :)

 

Author's Response:

Thank you my friend for all of your support! I enjoyed very much going over your reviews and seeing how you experienced the material for yourself. It was 100% easier to write consistently having people like you showing support. My one comment for anyone who finds a story that they like is to leave a comment for the author to show their support it means alot. Unfortunately my free time is a lot less these days, but I'm hoping to get a new large scale project going. I'm eager to see what you think of my next stories.

 

Thanks again for all the kind words! Take care!