Date: August 06 2019 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have done a wonderful job showing these characters to us! It's only been three chapters but I am very much rooting for this plucky little hero and his sweet southern giantess.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: August 04 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
As it is now, it kinda reminds me of "sweat & tears" by Kyary.
Which in my language is a big compliment :)
Date: August 03 2019 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Eager to see what comes next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m eager to write what’s next!
Date: August 02 2019 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey great work so far!
I’m a fan of footplay, and I don’t see that tag, but I’m still very excited to see where this story goes. Being a short guy myself, I love romance between a short dude and taller girl, especially in a story where the guy becomes much shorter. ;)
Can’t wait to see how Des and Jackie’s relationship progresses, how he shrinks, and how she reacts! Keep it up!
P.S. I love the name Jackie for a girl! Very cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m not really into feet myself, but perhaps it’ll be in here in a small way later on. We’ll see what happens. I wanted to explore a shrinking story at college. Hopefully you enjoy the future chapters. I already have a lot written, so expect regular updates.
And I totally agree on the name Jackie. I’ve known a few smoking hot Jackies in my life, which is why I probably have an affinity for the name. Really glad you’re enjoying it!