Date: July 11 2021 1:46 AM Title: The nightmare
What a pleasant surprise to see an update from you! But, to end it with a cliffhanger?! I am an anxious guy! I need more, please! XD
Date: October 28 2019 7:34 AM Title: The nightmare
Good story so far. I hope that little Jones meets Isabella again and that they have a nice romantic love relationship with lots of cuddles and kisses.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. The future is unclear Jones could end up meeting the love of his life or the end of his life.
Date: October 28 2019 4:39 AM Title: The nightmare
Interesting foreshadowing... Let's se how he will survive the ordeals that are to come.
The beach is a dangerous place. Maybe he will meet Valeria again. Or maybe Lisa is the one that ends up steping on him without realizing it.
Thank you for sharing your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
The beach is a very dangerous place anything could happen hehe
[Report This]Date: October 27 2019 10:17 AM Title: The nightmare
It's quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Also, I'm from Spain and I like you choose my country as the scenery for your story.
Author's Response:
I've visited Spain a few times and had tonnes of fun. So i thought it was the best place to do my story.