To begin with, I appreciate the in-depth descriptions of your chapters.  Actually, although I don’t have a feet obsession, I am captivated by the emotional feelings in your creative writing.  

In my works of fiction, I’ve integrated the various events of my daily life to make the narratives to be more true-to-life.  My friends often contribute to my writing by giving me their viewpoints.  And so, I’m able to persist with my imaginary tale.   In my story, I’ve been successfully shrunken to merely 7 cm (2.8 inches) tall.  Plus, I’ve the benefit of the Nano Intelligent Cells, while it won’t reduce the physical damage & pressure, it will stop the major blood loss.  This enhancement will significantly boost my survivability.

Humorously, my friend is a keen hiker, she asked me to write a chapter to describe a narrative of me being utilized as an extra arch support for her foot.   

Since you wrote that the story is "already planned out" (as I remember, the plan was to finish a few chapters ago...), here's a bit of overall criticism :)

It's too wordy! That's *great* when a new chapter appears because there's a lot to appreciate, but it's bad for re-readability, and whenever I felt like going back because I couldn't remember some detail, well, I often gave up... in fact I kinda lost myself re the party (Amoe etc), I will have to reread the whole thing someday.

Sometimes the way the "good" giantesses in both substories fail to realize their tinies are in whatever kind of discomfort is... not sure how to define it, but one would expect them to be more intuitive, especially when they are not drunk.

No normal sized man... As a giant-male hater it's a bit weird that there's none of them whatsoever (something small, like "omg an unshrunken male", or take a picture to show friends when they come back etc); even assuming they travel there often because of their job.

With that out of the way... just in case I didn't make it abundantly clear in my previous comments, I absolutely -L-O-V-E- this story, and it's nice that we have come to the point when he's finally making a certain important decision.

Aaaaaaand with this comment we are breaking the int7_t barrier! 128th!!!

Allow me to make a suggestion, as I suppose that it would be comical if the stewardesses decided to take Marky back to his native country, where it is legal for women to use miniscule men as insoles.

I loved it! I can't wait to go back to the stewardesses

Many thanks for your helpful feedback.

I added various qualities to a new chapter, enjoy a read.  I would appreciate your comment.  

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=22&textsize=3

Honestly feel like hes been trapped in this shoe forever, hopefully he'll get out soon and amoe and crystal can tease him. Also significantly enjoy that college story arc over the other one with Sarah is it? So hope you focus more on that one:)

Had to come back and read back over this chapter. And am every bit as amazed at how incredibly well written it is. The way that the mother revealed the fate of the fellows family members. And spoke to him throughout the chapter was award level devious. Especially considering that these were some of the earliest men to have been shrunk in the program. So they likely had never even heard so much as rumors of the things that darker things that women were putting the shrunken ones through. 

You truly are a master of your craft my friend. This story takes one of my favorite sizeplay scenarios to the absolute max, and I love it!

Excellent chapter yet again! I'm definitely a bigger fan of the flashback half of this series. And I think it was a wise decision to split this current arc up into multiple chapters. It'll make it more easily digestible.

I think you did a great job paralleling the perspectives of Amoe and Mark. It made the unaware action feel more dynamic.

Personally, I think you've struck gold with your college arc cast of characters, and I hope you consider doing more with them after this whole story is finished up.

Looking forward to the next chapters in this arc!

Glad to see you're back with what is in my opinion easily the best story not just on here but on any size related site. Definitely a plus to see more of Amoe, love her accidentally causing harm and how she feels after. I always come back every now and then basically just to see if you're still here haha. Totally understand having real life stuff to attend to though, especially in these trying times.