Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2021 4:33 PM Title: Chapter X-47: A New World

 

Amigo, que história incrível. Quando você postará o próximo capítulo?

Author's Response:

Hey Tinyguy,

According to google translate, I dont speak Portuguese :) 

But to answer your question, I just posted it!

And yep, sorry for the slow turnarounds, but i have a quality and scope standard i want to reach, and real life keeps me busy, so it's tough to do any of this quickly.

 

Anyway, glad you are enjoying it!

-kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2021 4:57 AM Title: Chapter X-47: A New World

Ohhh, you have no idea how happy I was to log onto the website and see that you had posted another chapter. This story has definitely become one of my all time shrunken men fictions. And one that I'm always anxiously looking forward to reading more of. So as nerve wracking as it can be, waiting to see what will come of our poor hero. I for one, never want you to feel as if can't take your time with things. :)

This chapter teased at something that I have desperately been wanting to see happen for quite a while now. In that you were given a glimmer of hope that one of Mark's would be tormentors will come to their senses and realize just how horrific their treatment of Mark really is. All the while wrestling with the notion that they love the idea of having someone so tiny and vulnerable willingly worship them. 

Much like with Amoe, there is a part of me that would love to see something far more deep and sensual develope between Mark and Diane. Perhaps the preassure that Sarah has been putting on her back fires. As she discovers the by now, largely broken Mark. Responds far far more strongly to acts of kindness, than cruelty. And that by simply easing up on him. He comes to truly see her as the first, real goddess in his life. Deserving of every ounce of worship and care that he could give her. To the point where he actually does want to stay with her. 

Would make for a heck of a twist, that's for sure. ^.^ But that's also the romantic in me talking. No matter how the story unfolds, I'm sure it will be amazing though. Please keep up the good work! 

 

On a side note. Please tell me that you aim to do a chapter at some point. Detailing the events that lead up to marks rescue from his "Friends" And his savior setting up his meeting with Diane and the Railroad. :) 

Author's Response:

Hey Theodous,

Thanks for the review once again.  Glad to hear you are enjoying it.

As to the side note, I'm really just trying to finish the scope i have aimed for the story.  This takes quite a bit of time for me to do, and I already have life outside of this, so for now, I'm only trying to finish this story.

That being said, i have written (or atleast planned out) some stuff involving the overall timeline or perhaps a related universe (perhaps not the same one) that is similar to the story.  So perhaps when i am done this i may publish some of that stuff.  

So there are certainly some concepts I've thought about that are similar to what you mention above.   But, alas, i can't promise anything, at least not anything in anything but the relatively distant future.

-Kenny

Reviewer: Skye509 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2021 8:39 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Hey, Kenny. you're easily one of the greatest writers we have today. PLEASE continue this story, or work on something. Anything.

I'd love to see actual crush of another character, but either way, I just want to see you keep writing. C'mon bud. It's just the summer. There will be plenty others!

C'moooooooon ;)

Author's Response:

Hey Skye,

Haha, thanks for compliment.  

I'm not done writing this, just been busy, so sorry for the delay, but it will, eventually, be finished.  Hopefully you enjoy this longer chapter i just posted.

Otherwise, glad to hear you are enjoying the story.  

I can't promise anything in terms of content, but i will say that i do have some things written that are pretty brutal that i may end up posting at some point, but it probably won't be part of this story per se.  Same universe, just don't think i will include it in this story as the rest is going to be very mark centric in terms of tinies. (both storylines will really only have mark at this point in terms of non giantess characters)

anyway, thanks for reading and enjoy!

-kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2021 4:41 AM Title: Chapter X-45: Sarah's Sole Mate

Was starting to fear that you would never add another chapter. But this one as always, was worth the wait. The first half of the chapter felt almost poetic. In the way that you described things from Mark's point of view. 

Author's Response:

Hey Theodous,

Sorry didn't see your last review so this response will be for both.    

Yea. something about the idea of a friend unknowingly torturing a friend i find really compelling to say the least :p  It's the kind of strange nightmare fuel that exists in the weird corners of the mind... 

As to what happens, well, that will be clarified "soon" enough.

Speaking of soon, yea, sorry, i've slowed down my writing.  But i do plan on finishing this.  I could just get sloppy and write the facts without the detail that i think makes these stories, uh, good? but then i think it would be a waste anyway.

So if it takes longer and the quality is still there, that's my plan.  Hopefully i can stick to monthly update but i can't really promise anything.

Kenny

Reviewer: Tso9234 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2021 7:21 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

This is my all time favourite story on the site and reason I keep coming back to the site. Similarly to the last reviewer, I frequently check for updates! I love how detailed your writing is. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Hey Tso,

Glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for the review

-kenny

Reviewer: Skye509 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2021 6:26 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

This is easily the best series I've read, and I normally prefer more violent content. Frape and Frape 2 are my favorite chapters, hands down. You're a magnificant writer, and I just hope you keep this going. I'd love to see another chapter with Ani, and hopefully that would include David as well, or maybe some other crush content to help heighten the suspense, but really, I can't even feel comfortable making a suggestion given the overwhelming high quality.

Truly a masterpiece.

I'm waiting on baited breath for the next addition, how's it coming along? And you should probably set up a Patreon.

Author's Response:

Hey Skye,

Glad your enjoying it.  Yea, as i mentioned in frape foreward, I also really enjoyed those chapters :p 

THanks for the kind words!

And noted on Ani - like i've mentioned, i'll consider it your pick in regards to the college girls bonus chapter, but i can't promise anything - it will be one of the characters.   

And yep, new chapter today.  

As to patreon - i appreciate the thought but i have no idea if i would want to go down that rabbit hole.  Perhaps, at some point, if this story evolves into a series or write alternates, i would consider that.  I think for now, this story will remain free for the next 8 or so chapters until i'm done.

Reviewer: F00tprint Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2021 8:58 AM Title: Chapter X-42: Experimenting

Fuck me.  Where this segment is going, is erotic to me beyond words!  Just walked on - his trampler completely unaware he is under her!

Your writing is fantastic, kenny224!  Your story keeps me coming back to the site, to always check for more!

Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: Zingers Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2020 12:41 PM Title: Chapter X-41: The Hike - Part 2

Another phenominal chapter! Eager to see what's up next

Author's Response:

Hey Zingers,

 

Thanks.  Glad your enjoying it!

 

kenny

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2020 12:20 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Something I'd like so see explored are the consequences of Amoe being so clueless being thrown in her face.  Maybe mark finds the crusted remains of a tiny that she never noticed in her slipper, and brings it up to her later on, tearing her apart. Maybe that's why she doesn't choose to take care of her friend, because she decides that she can't trust herself around tiny people given her lack of situational awareness.

 

Another idea that comes to mind, since you like unaware, perhaps if she gets her own chapter we get to meet another tiny that she "protects" only for Mark to watch powerless to do anything as she accidentally crushes him, perhaps while sitting in a chair fidgeting around to make it extra slow.  Just spit balling ideas lol

 

Of course, if you don't end up writing them, I'd be happy to commission a chapter. 

Author's Response:

Hey Wutt,

lol, I like those ideas! so...noted!

kenny

 

 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2020 4:52 PM Title: Chapter X-39: The Hike

Just a bunch of quick notes, and a couple of typos that confused me:

• "No standing in my shoe" - she's really a natural!
• "Mark tiny body to pulsed"?? and btw, is he supposed to pulse? is that what his duties feel like to Diane?
• "my burnt cut lips my distinctly"??
• I was almost expecting Sarah to remind her she's forgotten to let him drink both now & before leaving (or that he doesn't need to because she's providing plenty of liquids); I'll forgive her because it's her first tiny, and he loves her!

 

PS

In case I didn't make it clear already, I absolutely love this story!

Author's Response:

Hey rooto,

Thanks for the notes, it's seriously appreciated.  Went back and updated those mistakes.  I try to edit, but sometimes i do better than others.

And glad to hear you like the story!

kenny