Date: December 05 2019 7:11 PM Title: Unaware Giantess Claire Dearing in Jurassic World
Bryce Dallas Howard / Claire Dearing, nice choice for a main character / protagonist. I think every guy fell for her after watching "The Village", I did.
Good story developement; but too early to know how the story will play out.
One suggestion, you name Gates as the guy in Claires' slipper, which is fine; but it's hard to imagine oneself in his position if you define the character / player so specifically. We're all thinking Microsoft rather than "Joe Schmo, hey that could be me in Claires' slipper!"
Curious how this will play out. Oh, I like all the camera angles for at home viewers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Hmm I agree, next chapter I will leave their names hidden and call them Patrons.
I wanted to make this realistic and have everyone wishing this show existed in real life. Hopefully it worked.