Date: June 10 2020 5:02 PM Title: Shortfalls
This is fantastic. Lana strikes the right balance between concern toward and detachment from her subject. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! At the end of the day, the science is too important for Lana to let feelings get in the way.
Date: December 30 2019 12:26 AM Title: Shortfalls
Cool beginning. Is there some cruelty in Lana? Will she dominate or punish him for disobedience? What will she keep him in?
Author's Response:
Is cold indifference discernible from abject cruelty, and is it any better? These tests will, at the very least, be uncomfortable.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2019 2:07 AM Title: Shortfalls
Now I'm going to imagine that she didn't only crumble the DARPA letter at the beginning, but also their entire hq.
It seems Lana has the right idea and this tiny is actually a good tiny and works together with her. Combine that with supposedly indestructible and I think Gina would love to get her hands on that.
I'm looking forward to the tests and I would like to thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Lana's gonna show them, she'll show them all!
This is why they have to keep the serum a secret. If it got used on someone with less to gain, they'd be a lot less willing to go along with it.
And thank you for reviewing! Testing will commence soon-ish.