Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2020 12:27 PM Title: Detention Sucks

I think the focus change fron Alyssa to Camilla is a nice thing. I think Camilla is a pretty good giantess and I'm looking foward to when she will have her own shrink ray ready so she can do even more.

Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I appreciate the support!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 10:54 PM Title: Detention Sucks

Wow, back to back chapters! Did not expect that, but I’m glad. The more the merrier and more fun to read.

Love the progression on how Zack is handling his detention. He was shocked at first and is reluctantly, but slowly obeying Alyssa as each day goes on.

I also like how Zack is enjoying every part of Ms. Crowell so far. Feet, butt and now her mouth. If she decides to be naughty and play with Zack in some other places, I would trade my own life to be in his position.

Even when Zack’s friend Nate showed up, and Alyssa asked him if he wanted to join Zack, I would have said yes. Alyssa’s dominance not just in her methods of torture, but also how she addresses her students makes her extremely sexy.

One thing I want to point out about Camilla is that I like how she just shows up randomly and messes with Zack. She even suggested trading Adam for Zack, which I think is actually not bad of an idea in the future. For me, it’s not the Camilla/Zack combo that enthralls me, but rather this leaves poor Adam back at the mercy of Alyssa. Alyssa and Adam are so different in the dominant/submissive dynamic that I believe Alyssa could convince him to be her personal toy forever.

Right now, it seems that Alyssa is enjoying a little fight in her pets and Zack is fighting a losing battle. Meanwhile, Camilla has Adam wrapped around her finger and basically making him her slave. Camilla knows how to use Adam as well.

As for which giantess I prefer; I think you already know that I love Alyssa. Ever since she sat on Adam in the first chapter, I have been waiting for her to make that comeback in this story. Camilla and Kerri took over early on and I kinda enjoyed their chapters as well. But there was always something about the way Ms. Crowell portrayed her dominance that I so craved in the beginning that led me back to wanting more of her. The previous chapter, she resumed her tormenting and I’m glad you say she is just getting started.

You did mention that you might take some of my previous suggestions into account so I’m always looking forward to that. You already do such an amazing job writing these characters and you even gotten me to fall in love with this sensual and dominant teacher. Sometimes I wish I had Alyssa as my teacher. I’d be in detention for the whole year!

I think you should write about whichever character you enjoy the most. I don’t mind if you write about Camilla or Kerri, but since you asked for an opinion, I have to once again go with Alyssa. She is my favorite character and I’d love to see more of her.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hmmmmm the issue with an Alyssa/Adam combo is that Camilla is very protective of her little plaything. It would take a hell of a confrontation to get her to give him up. Maybe we’ll see some giantess conflict in the future. But for now you can rest assured that Alyssa will remain a central character. As always my friend thanks so much for reading and for the substantial reviews!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 7:25 PM Title: Detention Sucks

I would like to see where Camilla is going with her unhealth fixation and bullying. I am impressed by how you can manage several characters story lines at once, maybe Zack and Adam will figure out a way to help each other in the future...

Thanks for all the hard work.

Author's Response: Hmmm a tiny tag team? Sounds interesting, I like it :) As always I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for the support!