Reviewer: LaChocola Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2020 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Date

Got a handful of typos and grammar mistake in this one. Seems Joe suddenly turned into Mike, lol. But pretty good other than that, and excited to see where it goes. Just maybe have some spellchecking and proofreading before posting. As hot as its starting to get, seeing names suddenly change and grammar mistakes can break the immersion and make it less cohesive imo.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and catch. I have fixed these errors and hope I can meet your expectations.