Date: June 06 2020 6:01 PM Title: Interdiction
Dang... I know it was unlikely but I was actually kind of rooting for tanisha on this one lol...
I actually had this picture in my head of a different scenario coming. Like Tanisha advancing on the shrinking power and gathering a whole house of people together and shrinking it all at once along with everyone in it and winning. Something not even Meredith could possibly have seen coming.
Maybe i'm a bit biased on the bad gal winning tho... but i'm probably not the only one XD
Author's Response:
lol, can't please everyone with an ending, and I've come to accept that.
That is a pretty wicked idea though. If there's a break in my writing schedule, I might write it up as an alternate ending for people who want to see her win.
I think the bad girls win often enough in my stories though, so I'll let the nice ones have this victory ;)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2020 5:31 PM Title: Interdiction
You know, I kinda figured everyone got what they wanted after remembering a throwaway line. Tanisha can now fit in more fashionable clothes(Though she doesn't realize this yet), the hero gets to stay small, and Meredith gets a permanently small boyfriend that cares for her as much as she does for him.
Author's Response:
Somehow I don't think Tanisha appreciates that blessing, especially when her mom's credit card could custom order whatever fashionable thing she wanted to wear. We'll find out how happy they all are the next time we see them!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2020 8:05 PM Title: Interdiction
I wonder how worried meredith is for her boyfriend and I hope she has a plan to defeat Tanisha....I really want them back together and maybe meredith will realize how important he is to her and this will make them a stronger couple.
I thought maybe Tanisha had a crush on our boy but I guess that's definitely not true...
I dont really get how eve is so nonchalant about a tiny boy....but I guess it doesn't really matter lol
P.s. intresting ending would be that meredith shrinks tanisha and is about to crush her in rage but she is talked out of it by her boyfriend and Tanisha is so grateful that she becomes his tiny slave. Just a thought 😁
Author's Response:
Meredith has a plan! It just might not be what you expect. And Tanisha's crush on him just might be a little more literal than you'd think.
There's more to Eve than just being Tanisha's sister, and she might know more than she's letting on here.
I think the ending just might surprise you then ;)
[Report This]Date: May 25 2020 6:24 PM Title: Interdiction
Tanisha reminds me a bit of Tamsin from the Big Friendly Giantess stories. They both see the abway to gain power and use the main squeeze of the female lead as a way to get that though Tamsin and Jessica in BFG were the same height once Tamsin got big.
I do have a intuition that things won't go the way that either Meredith or Tanisha can forsee but I will keep reading
Side Note:l how Tanisha's sister is like "Oh cool, youwyou have a shrunken guy as a study partner. Whatever"
Author's Response:
If Tanisha lerns how to shrink people, she's definitely not going to put herself on the same level as Meredith. That'd be giving up one of her key advantages!
One of them is bound to get more of what she wants, the only question is who?
Tanisha's sister might have a secret or two of her own if she can see that without batting an eye ;)
Date: May 20 2020 1:21 AM Title: Interdiction
Well the last two chapters threw out my "Tanisha is concerned for him after witnessing Meredith's powers" theory. So maybe it will fall on either a general sadism streak (woe to any future victims) or she shares a similar desire drive as Meredith. That of an overly domineering/dominate relationship that still retains reciprocated affection. And she just really wants the chance to experience it and gain the means to live it out. It is really vexing if Meredith is unable or unwilling to use her power on anyone other then her boyfriend, though I feel she would've used it when he was finally snatched away right in front of her if she was able to use it one other people. Personaly, I'd be fiendishly delighted if it was revealed to be a genetic power like inherited witch's bloodline just to infuriate Tanisha.
Author's Response:
Tanisha had it out for the protagonist from the moment they bumped into each other, if it weren't for Meredith she'd be bullying him with absolute impunity instead of getting distracted by her every now and then.
There's a reason that Meredith didn't shrink her, aside from being lightly concussed, that'll be explained shortly! However, as has been alluded to, it's just a skill and not attached to any sort of bloodline. That said there are limitations, but I try not to make them explicitly spelled out since a long treatise on "This is how shrinking powers work" isn't what I'm going for.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2020 10:57 PM Title: Interdiction
No No No No! God! I Hate Tanisha so fucking much! I want Meredith to shrink her so bad! She cannot get the power because people will die! Meredith is a tease but Tanisha is a psycho! I need meredith to save her boy!
And I fucking hope Tanisha gets some horrible punishment!
Sorry for the meltdown...i really like the couple in this story and i really want them to go public at the end and Tanisha to get some karma.
Great story! I haven't felt such emotion come from me for a awhile from a one of the stories on here....
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're so strongly invested in this! Honestly I never figured it would cause such an emotional response from readers.
Will Tanisha get what's coming to her? Do Meredith and the protagonist go public? You'll have to keep reading to find out!
[Report This]Date: May 14 2020 10:08 AM Title: Interdiction
Huh...I didn't know you started a follow-up already.
Now that Tanisha has stumbled onto their secret( but probably doesn't connect the dots that they're actually dating), I can see this going the blackmail route or going a weird way that everyone "wins" in a way.
Author's Response:
I'll just suggest you keep reading so that you can see just how weird (or not) it gets. Tanisha can't keep her cards close to her chest for very long though, I can say.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2020 1:37 AM Title: Interdiction
Oh good! I was hoping you didnt abandon this story! Good to see it back! Please keep going!
Author's Response:
I never abandon stories, just run out of steam for a bit :) Glad you're excited for it!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2020 7:26 AM Title: Interdiction
How is this a healthy competition? I don't really think injuries and getting crushed are good for your health.
But it's nice to see these characters back and hear more from this story. And I'm also curious what Meredith will respond to the threat. Also, this tiny guy seems to be really popular in school. You would think that nobody would notice such a tiny person.
Thank you for writing and hopefully until next time!
Author's Response:
The main character isn't the competition, he's the prize ;)
He's very popular! Very good student, nice to everyone, even has a cute girlfriend even if no one knows about her. He's a testament that you don't have to be tall to be well-liked.
And thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2020 1:31 AM Title: Interdiction
Nice! Good to see this story Back!
I'm wondering how this is gonna end....hmmm...be kind of intresting if meredith shrinks the new chick smaller than her boyfriend. That would be a very intresting dynamic...so he had a toy for himself and maybe she falls in love with him too? Hmmm...many good possibilities just as long as no one gets hurt
I just hope our Mc aand Meredith come out on top and get even closer.
Author's Response:
I can definitely say it'll be interesting, but I can't promise no one gets hurt. Tanisha can be quite forceful, and Meredith may not even be able to shrink her. I do think it'll be interesting though, so please keep reading (and reviewing!)