Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2020 6:54 PM Title: Introductions

One of the best story lines currently going.  Bravo!

A question, why didn't he inform Meredith that Tanisha had just watched her shrink him?  Wouldn't he have warned Meredith of such a danger to them?

This leads to two more questions.

First, has Meredith shrunk or tried to shrink anyone else?

Secondly, wouldn't Tanisha demand Meredith give up her secret to shrinking people?  If Tanisha does, will Meredith shrink her too?  {Ok, a third question}

You have a nice to read writing style.  It's pleasant to read your story, as opposed to reading through confussing grammatical errors.  Great story concept and execution.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  He didn't tell her because, in her hand, he felt very safe and unworried about it.  Besides, what's she going to do about it?  She can't take the knowledge out of Tanisha's head.

As for your questions, you'll have to keep reading!  It seems like a bad idea to spoil my whole story up front, but if those are the sort of questions you have I think you'll enjoy it.

And again, thanks!  Part of the reason I started writing was I wanted to make stuff that's easy to read, and I try not to fall into bad habits.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2020 9:31 AM Title: Introductions

Hmm, the question rattling in my head have is if Tanisha has the same powers as Meredith or if she's normal. I think that will determine if she approaches Meredith to threaten or beg to be let in on the fun with the little toy. The other scenario I could see is her overpowering and knocking out Meredith, taking her "posession", powers or not. I'm curious to see if Tanisha has a sadistic itch she wants to fill or if she turns into an even bigger softie then Meredith with a tiny at her disposal. An "I deserve to torment you even more then her" or an "OMG, is she abusing/raping/threatening you little guy?!" situation. You havent added a F/fm tag to the story, so I'm anxious to see what twists you've planned out.

Author's Response:

Naturally I don't want to spoil too much, but it's good to see you're invested in the story!  I'll just suggest you keep reading, and encourage you to review it as you do.