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Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 5:15 PM Title: Infallible

Read it and loved it! Very surprising ending, and very well deserved! I'm mortally curious about what happened to all those who disappeared and knowing Tabitha, I'm sure they met a very grusome ending. I like the fact that it's only implied so you can imagine it yourself, but perhaps that can be a nice idea for a short spin-off story? What Tabitha does to her shrunken classmates would be great



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'd like to note that their story isn't over yet, though.  They're going to college, where they just might meet some familiar faces.

Tanisha's victims might make an interesting short, but for now I prefer to leave it to the readers' imaginations.  Maybe if I think up some particularly nasty things, or people send me some things they imagined she did, I'll have something to go with that won't disappoint.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2020 2:49 PM Title: Infallible

I didn't expect this end to happen. Poor Tanisha, I expected her to put something nasty in that drink to knockout Meredith or something. Or maybe she did that but Meredith is so used to being poisoned that she didn't notice.

Well, at least Tanisha can learn how it is to be a bit smaller and she can learn to put that award winning personality of hers to good use. You don't have to be talk to be a nice person.

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

Tanisha was so naturally superior though, the odds were already in her favor.  Having to cheat would mean admitting she might not win here.

Maybe she'll learn her lesson, but I wouldn't count on it.  She's very insistent on getting her way.

You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2020 10:51 AM Title: Infallible

Hmm, I hope he elected to do online only classes if this is his condition in the foreseeable future. A little disappointed we didn't see what happened to the handful of people Tanisha's taken. Would've liked to see them survive the ordeal. Maybe see all but the one where Tanisha learned how to permanetly shrink people beyond another's power be regrown by Meredith as an apology for teaching Tanisha the power and making them victims.



Author's Response:

He's definitely doing distance learning, can you imagine walking to class at an inch tall?  You'd have to wake up at midnight just to make it to a noon class.

As for the others, there's not much left of them to find.

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