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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2020 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great story.  Very graphic but well written.  Especially like the cock vore scene.  Can't wait to see what else youcome up with. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wish there was more stuff like this out there already >_>

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2020 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

I agree with you 100%! I reeeeally wish there were more stories like this out there! My favorite kind by far are where guys shrink random women and have their way with them. Thank you so much for this story, I enjoyed it a lot. One of the only negatives I have is that I wish we got to know just a little more about who each of the women were before they were abducted. We got a brief detail about Sharon about how she had just been to the bank and was about to go to the store when she was abducted and just that little detail added so much enjoyment to her demise. Can’t wait to see what you write next! (If you plan on writing anymore lol)

Author's Response:

Great point! I'll try to keep that in mind if I write any more.

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