Date: September 18 2020 7:20 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop
Loved this story with all the toys being demonstrated. The only comment is that I would have preferred that Abby kept Jason in her panties for a week rather than her boyfriend's chastity belt. BTW, what guy names Spike would wear a chastity belt with a tiny guy inside no matter how hot his girlfriend is!
Everytime I read your stuff, I want to write a Ryan and Tess chapter. Since she knows him and likes him, she'd be careful not to kill him because he'd be her special shrinkee. Just let me know !
Date: September 18 2020 5:14 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop
Great read. Looking forward to more chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 11:45 PM Title: Tess
I loved this chapter! Unique and in theory I'm hoping Mike survives as the toy was placed back in the drawer and perhaps began to drain...? Only an idea. Keep it up! I love everything you do!
Date: August 14 2020 5:52 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 1)
This story hooked me from start to finish. On the one hand, it's hot how his guardian/girlfriend took him to work, forgot about him, unawarely killed him, and just tossed his unrecognized corpse out. Like "whew, it's not someone i know" toss.
On the other hand, that neglect, and betrayal of trust he had in her and how he was getting upset at her for being so forgetful, hot but also understandable. Part of me wants to see a follow up of her eventually remembering she took him to school and forgot about him, going back, and asking her students about him, growing more concerned when she can't find him. Like a sort of revenge or something.
Still, your stories are not known for being gentle and they are compelling enough that I keep coming back. :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 9:59 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 1)
Quite interesting how Emily is so easily able to forget bringing someone she knows to work and then forgetting about him completely even though she see it's an older person she killed.
I would have thought that wasn't plausible till i recenlty had someone forget a large transaction they did for over a month and a half. Had to see themsleves on a security video to realize it was them that performed the act and not someone esle. So it is definitely possible.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2020 2:31 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for sharing this! A little criticsm I have is that here, you began a lot of sentences or short paragraphs with the same wird, like mike, mike, mike, mike. Thats just a tip for other work not to do, you actually didnt do it that much in previous works, and all those were awesome written.
Date: August 05 2020 8:51 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for writing this. It was a very nice job and I really enjoyed this chapter. Love to see more of Tess I had an idea for a chapter with her that follows the premise you set up here. I'd be happy to write the story and post it if you don't mind me borrowing you Shrinkism universe and the Tess character. If you prefer I don't mind submitting an outline for you to write. Just let me know however you'd like to see it.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2020 12:26 AM Title: Tess
Wow, just wow. I enjoy reading all of your work but this one was just something special. Loved how you were able to incorporate the objects that we saw in Shrinkism and show how cruel this world can be for people who shrink. I think another interesting idea would be to see the outcomes of the tinies that Allison bought in chapter 4 of Shrinkism. Keep up the great work!