[Report This]Date: August 11 2020 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Lonely Night
TinyJosh, you are amazing!
I can't believe I am saying this, but this story is already better than your other "Torment of Mankind" story. I also find it easier to follow where as the other one I kinda have to look back to remember who was who.
I love school settings, especially when a teacher is involved which is also what got me into writing my own story on this site. However, as I look back on my story, it feels mediocre compared to this one.
It's also interesting to see that there is a Tom character and I like what he is currently going through. Being trapped all night wrapped up to Aliesha's ass is kinda hot. However, you are right. At least he is not Luke.
Holy shit, I would be in heaven if I was in Luke's position. I mean, even from the beginning it was sexy. Mrs. Eve is a goddess and the way she just decides to have Luke as her partner was completely surprising and erotic, especially when we see tiny George on her chair. And then later on when she tells him that he will bunk with her, yes! My heart was pounding fast! You made her one seductive teacher. Furthermore, her daughter even states that Luke is a goner. Wow, and her mom won't let Luke go? That's incredible! I must take this class! In addition, this final paragraph in chapter 5 was one of the hottest things I have read on this site. Being trapped inside the front side of a sexy teacher's panties all night and forced to lick her until she wakes up. This is basically my fantasy, it's almost as if you read my mind. Maybe she will make him lick her while she teachers the class. If Luke and Tom switched names, I think I would faint, haha. Yeah, as you can tell, the Luke and Mrs. Eve dynamic is my favorite and I don't think that's going to change anytime soon. I look forward to seeing Mrs. Eve turn Luke into her ultimate shrunken sex slave.
The other characters were great too. I just have a complete bias in favor of Mrs. Eve since she is one sexy woman. I like Kairi's character. She has layers and you can see how she tries to deal with school while her mom is in control. Also, Jack has to be careful since Mrs. Eve wants him to please her daughter. Now that's kinda hot since while she orders Jack around, Luke is probably inside her. Lol.
Also, Amy seems to be getting into being in control. Rare to see a human have control, so I'm interested to see how that goes.
Josh is alone, right? Well, for now. I wonder who is classmate/roomate will be. Basically anything could be possible with that.
I'm adding this story to my favorites, because that's how much I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks once again for reading and for leaving a review. Your reviews always lighten up my day and inspire me to keep writing! So I thank you for your continued support.
I have found this series much easier to write, focusing on a smaller group and story. Less back and forward and more experimentation with established characters.
And yes! Tom has alot with his partner but Luke is compelty in a different category.
And I am glad you the story, I have a few surprises coming up I am sure you will enjoy, especially regarding Tom and Luke. Your words of praise mean alot to me!
And yes, the Jack/Kairi/Eve relationship is the heart of the story. While Jack might have ended up with a more tame Kairi, he has the much worse out of them all Ms Eve breathing down his neck.
And yes! Amy was a way to change the dynamic, have a human be on the other side, have her torture and not be tortured.
As for Josh. He is no longer alone, I look forward to his new partner in the chapter I recently released.
And thank you once again for your reviews! I take all your words into my writing and it inspires me to keep writing and keep making it as best as I can be.
Thank you and hope you enjoy the new chapters as they release!