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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 2: The game didn't stay home

Definately one of the more entertaining stories I've read in a while.  I do recommend a little more proof reading but for a first story it's going well so far.

It be cool to see Judith or Lily land on black and have them end up with a pregnancy.  Or maybe judith could be come a baby, Lily lactates, and Phillip could be unbirthed and end up as Lily's unborn baby in a 6th month pregnant belly.

Either way, will be interesting to see what you do write.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am glad you enjoy it. I will try to proof read it more in future. I am looking for ideas for more interactions. A black tile shall appear in the future.

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