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Reviewer: dailyduke Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2020 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 4b: The Last Lesson - Artoria's View

Loved this short story. The naughty teacher using a powerless student is always a great recipe for some prime giantess moments. I thought the shrinking as he fails each lesson was crafty and having each chapter be their POV was a nice touch.

One other thing I have to say is that dialogue takes up most of this story, and it would be neat to see some more 'descriptions' of what was exactly going on.

All in all, awesome story.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review. I will try to describe more of what is going on the epilogue. I want readers to imagine the world this is taking place in. Thank you for the criticism.

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