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Reviewer: Giantessx12 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2021 7:18 AM Title: Fabric Wasteland

I love unaware/micro stories!  A bit on the short side, but this is a great read so far! Are you still continuing this?

Reviewer: M_White Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2020 6:38 AM Title: Fabric Wasteland

Great story so far. I wonder if she'll put the thong on with him inside or on it. 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2020 4:44 AM Title: Fabric Wasteland

A story with lots of potential. I always like first-person stories. Unfortunately, the chapters are too short. I understand that its a first story, but each chapter needs to contain more than just one or two interactions.

Keep trying. Take a look at other stories on this board. With practise, things will likely improve.  

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