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You have to admire her enthusiasm. Once you get to the line you finally have a chance to catch your breath and talk. "Pampa Naga Pampa Rapunzel" by Dave Matthews plays full blast and you have to speak up to be heard.

 

 

 

"So, what's your name?" you ask.

The story so far, (obvious ripoff Star Wars music plays) The silhouette of the orchestra can be seen in the distance. Just imagine the text is scrolling through space as you read it and try to keep up. I hope your imagination doesn’t make it move to fast.

 

She gives you an "are you serious?" grin, "That's a stupid question. How long do you think it'll matter to you?" She points to the ever-shrinking line. There are only three couples ahead of you.

 

 

 

"Well, my name is," You start.

 

 

 

"Don't care. You are now Tiny Guy A," She says.

 

 

 

"Um, k," You say. There is now only one couple in front of you.

 

[wait quietly] [go to chapter 77]

 

[suggest a private room] [go to chapter 78]

 

!!---key---!!

may be more relevant now than earlier.

If you’re here for one of the crush related deaths (or are trying to avoid them because you don’t like that sort of thing) they are located in the following ending choices

 

  1. 1,2,3,4,5,105,104,121,9,20,24,75,78,83,86 END foot crush
  2. 1,2,3,4,5,105,104,121,9,20,24,75,78,83,84 END foot crush
  3. 1,2,3,4,5,105,104,121,9,20,24,75,77,82 END  foot crush
  4. 1,2,3,4,5,105,104,121,9,20,24,75,77,81,90,91 END butt crush
  5. 1,2,3,4,5,105,104,121,9,20,24,75,77,81,89,92,91 END butt crush

seriously, dudes. Don't say I didn't warn you. I've put a few cameos in here. See if you can spot them.  I may have to compress the chapters to five a page after all. Seriously feedback from readers on how this affects the general flow would be appreciated.

The story so far, (obvious ripoff Star Wars music plays) The silhouette of the orchestra can be seen in the distance. Just imagine the text is scrolling through space as you read it and try to keep up. I hope your imagination doesn’t make it move to fast.

 

You’ve wanted to go to Forbidden Dish for a long time. Your friends decided to come with you. You aren’t sure they know what the deal is, but you let them come anyway. After exploring the restaurant, you've decided to go upstairs and see what the fuss is about. It is like a different world. If you aren’t familiar with Forbidden Dish, most things will be explained throughout the story, but it still wouldn’t hurt my feelings any if you read the other stories. If you like this story you will undoubtedly want to read the others. They are available on girlfood and oishi1’s individual portfolios. Feel free to explore. Let us know what characters you liked and what could use more or less detail. I’m adding this to the story notes on short chapters because the dealio will only accept chapters of five hundred words or more and I don’t want to make it hard to poke around.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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