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This is my first storyvplease leave feedback and sorry my English isn’t good 

 

Steven was excited to be moving from his small country of peachville to the massive super country of megaville a country with hundreds of cities towns and known for its massive cities each with millions of people living their lives in each city. It took him weeks to travel to from his home to his new city. He traveled past forest mountains and everything He was excited to finally be starting college and get a room to himself. He moved into his building in the center of the 3th largest city in the country (10th in the world) with well over 55 million people. He was amazed to see the massive mile tall buildings. Looking out his window way in the distance he could see a massive structure. He got to online search and found out the struct is known as space needle… a massive structure that stretched over 15 miles in the sky. He also heard of a massive mountains towards the southern counties where these mountitains (the largest one being 5 miles tall) but this needle dwarfs those mountains.  He took a deep breath and knew everything was going according to plan.

 

C was moving into her apartment right by college today. She was super excited to finally get a small place all to herself.  She came a week in the summer before school and wanted to check the place out. The woman she bought it from said it might be a little dusty but it should be easy to clean up. C didnt care for a little dust since its hardly noticeable anyways. When she got her keys out she took a deep breath before taken to steps into the apartment and smiling looking around. She then notice a small little dust cloud around her feet. She bent over to get a better look. Huh she thought to herself this place is dusty but this dust is weird looking. C noticed that the dust was dry think but was green and brown in color, she then noitec little crumbs everywhere and some weird shiny grey dots. When her shadow casted over the grey dots they seem to slightly shimmy and glow. Weird she then a rather large crumb and disced to pook it with the tip off her fingure. When she extended her index finger forward she then notice just how small these crumbs where the biggest of them now in the shadow of her tip of her finger was barely bigger then a gain of salt. She then noticed several of those grey dots surrounding the crumb. Which also lit up on the shadow of her finger. She then slowly and carefully lowered her finger until she could feel the cool floor. She watched as dust blew in every direction, crumbs that weren’t directly under her finger collapse like nothing and several grey dots around the impact zone blew away and disappeared. She then dragged her figure a few cm to the left before lifting it up to inspect while she did this she bulldozed several more tiny crumbs and many more grey dots. But she barely felt anything. She stood to her full height and saw that her figure was covered in a thin layer of grey and brown dusty. Gross she thought as she wiped off the dust on her skinny jeans. She then proceeded to walk several steps top her bed room and shut the door. 

 

 

Phil was one of the best mountain climbers in his country his goal was to climb mega moutain a massive 5 mile tall mountain that drawled the neighboring vcities and towns that surrounded it. Mega mountita was  in the neighboring state and from his currently vantage point (on top of another large mountain he could see the mega mountains 100s of miles away dominating the land scape. However admitting the view was cut short when a massive BOOM and earth quick was felt. He heard a loud screechy sounds and what sounded to be a key in the lock. He along with billions looked to see a massive being larger then anything appear. he was in awe he watch the massive being take two steps forward each with.= a loud BOOOOOOOOM and worse earthquake ever to man. He saw down entire states disappear under and around her dandle covered feet. The clouds barely whwent a quarter up her form soleof her candles. He kept cramming his head up but couldn’t see past he knees due to tteh atmosphere getting blaring in “space”. He then watcher the massive being slowly crouch. He then relized he was looking at a young college age girl wearing skinny jeans a white blouse and breaker stocks. He was in awe by her massive size. He then saw her curiasoly hover her finger above mega mountain and the several smaller motions that surrendered it he watched as the lights of several cities lit up due to the massive finger. The finger itself was 100s times larger then mega mountain. He thought she was pointing at them and had some hope that maybe she saw them. But then watcher as she carelessly lowered her finger onto the worlds largest mountain snuffing it and many cities and towns into dust. A loud BOOOM ws heard and felt has her figure “softly” mad einpact. PHIL slowly stood up in horror as he saw she efforousley crushed the worlds largest mountain and cities with a finger tip then she slowly moved the figure towards his state. He watch as the digit tour through mountains and cities like they were a line of dust on a counter. Right bore the finger reach his state she stepped and stop =d up. PHIL then heard her announcer her disproval with an yuvck gross followed by a WHATEVER. He then watch in awe the massive being walk passage over him and felt the loud BOOOOOOOMMMMM ad her foot came down f=crusniing connti;ess cities in other Staes then another BOOOOOOM BOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOM BOOOOM until she was in her room though even that far her terrors were still felt. PHIILL looked back tp were mega mounts once was and saw nothing moe then a massive figure print that made new even larger mountains. He then looking over at where she stood and she 2 enter states were s=gone benefit her feet. He then passed out

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My first story don’t judge I don’t speak much English 

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