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Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.

The story is complete. We have two endings for those who prefer one over the other.

 

 

This is orginally Sm7in story but I found it on writing.com as an interactive story. I tweaked a route and created a new option.

All the credit is to Sm7in for this story.

 

Bonus chapter out.

 

I take reviews, suggestions, and comments and try to add them into the story. so if you want something to happen, review.

 

 

Disclaimer: This is the original authors work and property, all character and stories are his or her property. This is a work of fanfiction or tribute to the original author. All other characters or scenarios are properties of other authors. No money was made from the creation or continuation for this story.

You should check out this author, Sm7in, and his stories elsewhere

You can also add your own routes and options at writing.com

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129478 Read Count: 562186
[Report This] Published: November 10 2020 Updated: October 14 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2021 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Friends not coming over brings you down

I would go with Aunt Maria. it would allow the whole family to be Steve's mothers.



Author's Response:

"thank you for the review. Steve is going with Aunt Maria.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: January 02 2021 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: An unexpected child

I would like to see Alesha get Steve sometime soon. She has been waiting a long time for him. Alesha would be more of a torment for him being the one who shrunk him to this size.



Author's Response:

Alesha will get her chance with Steve soon, Julia just wants a little bit more time wth him. 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2020 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Cracking In

Great chapter! Steve is back inside a womb. I expect Alesha not to be to happy about Steve being in her mother. She wanted Steve to be inside her and would try to get him out. Making Steve have even more mommies.



Author's Response:

I do believe that Alesha was trying to get Steve in her womb. I will try to get the confontation between the mother and daughter about what to do with Steve.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling

Great Chapter! I would go with warm.



Author's Response:

Warm it is

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: After Credits Scene

Great story. I choose going to Garrett's house because Allison will be able to mess with Steve a whole lot with his best friend. I will also go with that Steve can't really control himself. I hope to see more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Steve will be having problems controlling himself in the future.

Summary:

Alex is a young genius scientist who has created a lot of inventions at a young age. His sister, Amber, and her friend have started a livestream to not feel inadequate to him. Alex has created these Nanobots to enter into a body and change it. Alex tries to put some in his family's cat but things might not have turned out so well.

 

This story is back by demand from reviewers so enjoy the story.

 

Alternate Ending is out. Hope you all enjoy it.

 

Some of the Tags:  Transformation, Mind Alteration, Unaware, Lactation, Dominance, Impregnation, Anime Catgirls, Age Progression, Gender Bender.


Categories: Vore, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Furry, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65368 Read Count: 69738
[Report This] Published: December 27 2020 Updated: August 19 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A cat's body

Good story. will be interesting to see how this ends



Author's Response:

Thank your very much for the comment. The story is now complete unless readers ask for more.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Cat's Tail

Great Story. I loved how they began to enjoy the transformation as it went on to the point that Amber would not change them back. I wonder what will happen since the nanobots are offfline if you continue the story. Will the little catgirls get bigger or the parents? There are a lot of possibilities. I hope there is more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I plan to continue the story but do not have schedule for when. There are more things that will happen with the catkittens and the parents. I can promise that there will be bigger catgirls.

Summary:

Inspired by: The Tiny Tinder Testimonials, The TF App and many more 

 

This story follows Nick a highschool student and an incredible app

 

This is my first ever story so let me know what you guys think


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Futanari, Gentle, Incest, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11090 Read Count: 93715
[Report This] Published: June 15 2021 Updated: December 21 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: June 16 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Features

Great start. I like how there are different levels to the app of what you can do and chose from. It gives Nick options to chose from. We are only seeing Nick features for the app. The girls could have some different features. They could have a point system that they can spend to change things they want. Like change Nick's size or extend time of date. Those kind of things. I hope you continue to write.

Summary:

A step sister proposes a unique solution to her pervert brother who is trying his best to catch her out.

Please be advised this is a shrunken transformation story that may not be suited for all as there are some explicit/suggestive gore parts. 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Unaware, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4930 Read Count: 3688
[Report This] Published: July 12 2021 Updated: July 12 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Story

Good Story! I hope you continue this story!

Summary:

Michael is a free lance camera man. He just came across an add for a young woman looking to film adult videos. The question is, will he size up to the job?


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2749 Read Count: 9585
[Report This] Published: October 24 2021 Updated: November 02 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Interview

I love the concept. The desire for at a job only to lead to being captured. I like the air of authority that Katie has. Makes her willing to shrink Micheal and use him.

Summary:

A brother and sister's relationship will forever change when the sister returns home and is gifted a tool allowing her to control everything she wants about her brother.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11302 Read Count: 41942
[Report This] Published: November 05 2021 Updated: April 15 2022
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 02

This is a great story. I like how the app doesn’t just change Mike. It can change Clare. I hope Clare decides to add a little bit more to herself as she dominates Mike starts to get to her head. Maybe she enlarges her breasts again while he is in the cleavage to torment him some.

Author's Response:

I do read feedback and try and use peoples suggestions within my story wherever I can, so who knows we may see this happen in a later chapter.

Summary:

Levi decided to stay home while his family went on holiday. But as he shrinks himself with a forgotten shrinkbox, his sister decides to take him along as her secret plaything. 


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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109392 Read Count: 236826
[Report This] Published: November 06 2021 Updated: January 02 2024
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

This is a great start. The scenario that the rest of the family won’t know that Luna has brought her shrunken brother is perfect, probably blaming that Levi is still a teenager for why he won’t text his parents. It will be fun to see what Luna does with Levi.
A suggestion would be an interaction involving the nipple. Either Luna would use it to make Levi more obedient by saying she would make him so small that he would get lost inside her breast. Or she puts him on there and puts a tight swimsuit over him. Letting her nipple harden to push his small frame against the fabric

Author's Response:

Thanks! He'll definitely end up in her bikinitop! 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Settling in

Love this chapter! It is great to see that Levi is enjoying her sister a bit too much. I like the addition of the tongue piercing to carry him in her mouth. I wonder what other sort of places she put the bead. I wonder what Luna would think when she notices Levi’s erection. Maybe play with it to make him cum.

Since she doesn’t have her usual toys to please herself, she is going to need a new set for the three weeks. Maybe a new product pops out in that store. A dildo that is customizable for whatever a person wants to do to a tiny person. An inside compartment for them to watch from the outside, check. A tip point to allow them to feel it, check. A pod with liquid to shot them inside, check. There are additional features that can be added but she can purchase those later.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2021 Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

Great second chapter. I like that Luna knows already what she can do with tiny people and decides to make it extra special because it is her brother. A sibling bond like never before is growing.
The part that there is toys to use tiny people with at a stop is interesting. It will be fun to see Luna possibly seeking out more toys and jewelry to keep Levi safe while having fun with him.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! If you think of something she could use him with, just let me know :)

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: November 15 2021 Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

An interesting idea for something for Luna to buy is an earring depending on how small she can make Levi when she can use the device again to change his size. If the earring had a glass bead that was hollow and one way visibility. Luna could have herself hearing the little voices of Levi without her parents know he was there. There are other ideas but it depends on how small and how much control Luna has over Levi’s size.

Author's Response:

Great idea! Luna has pretty much unlimited amount of control of Levi's size, so keep the ideas coming! 

Summary:

Daniel manages to sneak into Annabelle's (his girlfriend's) bedroom, he intends on surprising her. He has a shrinking device. He shrinks himself down on her bed, but then realises that he should have made a bit more of a plan, because Annabelle's sister might find him instead and she used to have a crush on him...


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18795 Read Count: 165511
[Report This] Published: December 02 2021 Updated: February 29 2024
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Part 4 - Chapter 4

I think Grace should have Daniel play with her nipple. Either where he cums inside it or inserts his dick and than put a bra to keep him there. Let them recharge with some time there before going at it again.

Like the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback and interesting ideas

Summary: Dwayne is watching Sarah, the little girl next door, as her mother has to take care of some business. As he watches her, she suddenly grows bigger and older before his eyes. Dwayne will have to figure out what is going on for this shy girl. He soon discovers that there is more to her than meets the eye, as well as the whole town. Additional tags not mentioned: Age progression, Succubus transformation, magical powers. Now containing artwork. My Little Neighbor is a Succubus

The interactive is located at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2069009-Endless-Beauty
Categories: Instant Size Change, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 298437 Read Count: 159172
[Report This] Published: January 25 2022 Updated: November 21 2023
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A New Succubus Friend Created

Interesting concept. Being able to create more succubus could make intriguing interactions and situations later on. Especially if Dwayne gets more than one girl.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Dwayne is only going to get one girl. He can be teased with other girls for things.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2023 Title: Chapter 38: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach: Ch 5

Nice story. I hope she gets really big like she says. It would be cool to have a giantess succubus.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You will have to wait and see if that comes true

[Report This] Published: February 10 2022 Updated: August 31 2022
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Really awesome chapter! The story is amazing. I can’t wait to see what the shots bring.

I do wonder if Erika gave such a good performance for the amateur hour that people want an encore. Will Marc happen to be on her so he might actually feel those colossal tits like they were an entire city?

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I didn't do anything sizey with the shots, but I think it will still make for a fun adventure for the main character.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Summary:

An accident with some pool chemicals leaves you shrunk and at the unaware mercy of Nadia, your swim teams main attraction. Whether or not she notices you is your first problem, but the second is deciding whether or not she'll let you go ... 


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Unaware, Odor, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2949 Read Count: 11438
[Report This] Published: April 21 2022 Updated: August 24 2022
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 22 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. I would wonder how he will get into Nadia’s hands or on her body if he is home, unless his body will shrink later.

Maybe you can have Tyler ride on her nipple for little bit as an idea