Penname: slave4ever [Contact] Real name: David R
Member Since: March 20 2011
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Family Reunion by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

A mother and daughter find themselves in a uniquely beneficial situation when their snobby and selfish extended family shrinks down to a few inches tall.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Family Reunion
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67655 Read Count: 271000
[Report This] Published: June 30 2011 Updated: August 14 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Food for Thought

Oh I just love how Anna and Alison are being so cruel. And being so cool and casual about it. I love this chapter. You are doing a fantastic job. I really love your writing style.

Dave



Author's Response:

thanks man, hope you continue to enjoy

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Date: July 10 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Dress for Success

No they don't annoy me at all. The longer the better. MORE STORY MORE STORY MORE STORY YAAAAAY.....LOL 

 



Author's Response: Haha ok. I thought I should ask since if I'm in a hurry, I tend to prefer shorter chapters on stories

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Sock Party

Loved the sock scene. I loved the whole chapter really. I hope Alison does some butt torture as well as the foot torture stuff. I don't know why but butt torture stuff in these kinds of stories is one of my favorite things.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Wine and Shoe Tasting

Great chapter as usual. I really love the humiliation Anna is putting her in laws through. A very fun and well thought out chapter.

Dave

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Date: July 03 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Belly-Up

Another fantastic chapter. I love the way Alison is treating Ashley.



Author's Response:

as does Alison ;)

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Girl Time

That was gross but fun and well done. I loved it.

Dave



Author's Response: Thanks. I was trying something a little different in this chapter, going more for a good-because-its-so-humiliating vibe

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Hanging Out with Alison

I love the way Alison is getting even with her cousin. Ashley is such a Bitch. Great Chapter.

 

Dave

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Date: June 30 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Grown-Up Discussion

This is a great story so far. I'm really liking it a lot.

Dave

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Date: June 30 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Nice Get-Together

Uh oh. I have a feeling the shits gonna hit the fan in the next chapter. Grest chapter.

 



Author's Response:

hey bud good to hear from you on my new story.  And you are correct, there will indeed be shit-hitting on the fan.  ;)

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

A very good start.

Dave

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Date: July 12 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Field Trip

Wow that was a close one. I'm glad the cop let them go. A very exciting chapter. Great as usual.

Dave



Author's Response:

I figured it was about time to throw a threat at this story's ant-heroes

Kate's Detention by newschool2626 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Kate spends yet ANOTHER detention with her teacher Mr. Pedolla.


Categories: Butt, Feet, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4305 Read Count: 21472
[Report This] Published: July 03 2011 Updated: July 03 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story so far. I hope there is a lot more torture involving Kate's ass.

Dave



Author's Response:

Short story is complete. Kate will not be doing any more torture except in your own mind.

Sorority Prank by newschool2626 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jennifer's brother visits her sorority for a weekend where he gets the royal treatment.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3035 Read Count: 16953
[Report This] Published: July 22 2011 Updated: July 22 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sorority Prank

Silly me. I think I'd like it.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sorority Prank

Awwwww you could do so much more with the story. That was a great first chapter. Why stop? After all he's there for quite awhile. And there are all those girls. Just think of all the things they could do to the boy. Any chance you might reconsider and continue?



Author's Response:

There is a small chance. I thought about doing a chapter about each night, but I know I'd get carried away with it and end up spending months on it so for now I'm ignoring it. I like the size of this story because it's still goes full circle. It starts out about the girls thinking of a prank, and then them getting away with it. Everything else would just be icing on the cake, and there would be a shit ton of frosting if I continued.

A Mothers Decision by namiofan101 Rated: PG starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Timmy 13 years old is shrunk by his 35 year old blonde mother and forced to be her slave


Categories: Slave, Incest, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 703 Read Count: 38883
[Report This] Published: August 05 2011 Updated: August 05 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a very good start.

Dave

Goddess on the Mountain by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A young boy in a secluded village is selected as the annual sacrifice to the land’s powerful and unforgiving goddess.


Categories: Sci Fi / Fantasy, Entrapment, Feet, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9714 Read Count: 64210
[Report This] Published: August 17 2011 Updated: August 23 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this story quite a bit. Great job as always.

Dave



Author's Response: thanks man

The Warning by Northgate Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

When I do my boss a favor by house-sitting for a her for a couple days, I had no idea what I was getting myself into or when it will ever end.


Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13158 Read Count: 71130
[Report This] Published: August 21 2011 Updated: January 30 2020
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

Loving this story so far. I love how Samantha is treating the guy.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed
Date: August 26 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Favor

Pretty good. But I'm waiting to see some action before i give a rating.

Dave

A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 693800
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: When Giant Cousins Attack

Wow great chapter as usual. Jack seems to be in more trouble than ever. Chloe is nuts.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Great Escape

This was a very exciting chapter. I'm glad to read in one of your responses that the story is only about half done. I really think this is the best series on this website. I will be a little sad when it ends.

I really think you have a great charachter In Carly. There are times I find my self hating her. But then other chapters have me liking her. I do feel bad for Jack most of the time though.

Dave

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