Reviewer: Waldo Signed
Date: February 12 2013
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Flesh Sin
Jeez... story is brutal. I like it though. It's a more realistic take on what would actually happen in this situation. Like kind of exploring what the character and mental state of people would have to be for a) the perpetrator (julia) and b) the victims.
Someone mentioned comic relief and another questioned Jack's sexuality... I'd say after the chapter with Beth getting viciously murdered, any chance of comic relief at this point would feel forced and out of place. As for questioning Jack... Um... I can't imagine any reasonable human being finding any sexual satisfaction in the acts he's being forced to do, especially considering he is the only one that can affect the outcome of his friends' lives. I'd say, his actions are perfectly normal. It would be odd if he didn't react in such ways and kinda paint him as being a bit psychotic too. Which actually brings up a good point. If you're going for a darker ending... Could be that none of them get out of this and Jack kind of loses a bit of grip on his sanity and is forever captive to Julia.
PS: Deleted my previous comment because I forgot to rate and put it on the wrong chapter. =P
Author's Response: thanks for reading/reviewing. i'm glad that you like the tone i'm using here, and that you get my reasoning with avoiding explicitly comedic stuff. as i continued writing this and found it getting bleaker and bleaker i decided my best bet was to just go all in and make it a darkly depressing slog of giantess content. while i don't want to give away the ending, it's probably no secret based on the previous chapters that the conclusion won't be the prettiest thing