Penname: Viper07 [Contact] Real name: Snek
Member Since: August 13 2021
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Summary: Feature

Andrew is a simple office man, seeking a hassle-free, organized life. A marriage to a brash, hygienically-challenged giantess proves to be an imposing situation. Yet, in a way, opposites attract, and Andrew finds that his devotion to his marriage, and his wife, outlives his own personal sense of cleanliness.

This is an episodic tale of fluffy one-shots, of differing scenarios Andrew finds himself in.

Previously called "Welcoming Home".


Categories: Slave, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Muscle, Odor, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Massive Mutagen
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100479 Read Count: 346244
[Report This] Published: February 18 2020 Updated: October 30 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home

Just got around to reading this. Such a lovely relationship shown here. The type that, even with some presentable hurdles, it's clear they care for each other a great deal! They are a wonderful couple and I very much enjoyed watching as Andrew pushed on in his effort! 



Author's Response:

Fancy seeing you here Viper! I've enjoyed your own couple's tale immensely. Andrew's going to have a far larger hurdle in the next chapter, whenever it will come out.

Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 589456
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Reception

Very nearing the point of no return here. With Ruiwen close to one of her targets, under orders of Jisoo no less, and Maddie so near then things are almost certainly going to spiral out of control. 

And this is why you gotta let bygones be bygones Jisoo. Shoulda listened to Eren. Now we are so close to an issue that could be avoided had you never given that order. 

Really noticed how plenty of the Fang ladies go on about how what they do is for the benefit of the world, only to give in to their vices in the name of the "greater good". Sounds like some people ain't practicing what they preach lol.

"Hypocrisy is the audacity to preach integrity from a den of corruption" -Wes Fesler

Maybe their intentions were good at one point but they've definitely fallen to some of the seven sins yessir. 

Great chapter as always Kardo. I always look forward to when you update. 



Author's Response:

There are lots of things that would never have happened if Jisoo had managed to let things go, right from the beginning if she had listened to Eren and not gone after Mikayla, Alice and Sylvia it's very possible she and Eren would have had a comparably 'normal' relationship. The Fang ladies are definitely revealing their true colors as more about them is revealed! When they aren't 'arbiters of justice' their moral ethics are very questionable to say the least.

Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 51: Results

The best plans are always the most ludicrous, as Maddie clearly saw for herself. Now she got a taste of what the other women of the corporation possess, and boy did she benefit from it.

I do wonder though how this is going to affect Ren in the coming future. She knows she's in a very tough spot. A clear rock and a hard place situation. The rock of course being Jisoo and the hard place being...the rest of the corporation. Eager to see just what's going to happen when everyone discovers the situation with Eren. 

Carnage is coming. And a whole lot of it.  



Author's Response:

Ren struggling between her newfound guilt and care for Maddie is at conflict between her family, which as we've seen doesn't treat her very well because she's just a low ranked member. Whether or not her decision to listen to her consciousness comes back to bite her later we'll have to see!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: July 03 2022 Title: Chapter 54: Fall From Grace Part 3

Even after everything she's done, I can't help but pity Grace. She lacked what Jisoo had, and that's a drive to become a better person. Grace knows that she's a monster. She can lie as much as she wants, disguise the truth in any way she sees it, and even deny it to her last breath. But she knows that she is one. Whether she lives or dies it'll come about because of her actions. So, I pity her. That said I cannot resist saying this. 

Grace


Get, and I cannot stress this enough, FUCKED



Author's Response:

Grace this entire time has deep down resented Jisoo because she was living proof that even a monster can change if they have the heart for it, but Grace due to a combination of her upbringing and personal moral failures could never cross the boundary to the 'light side' and sought to drag Jisoo down with her if that's what it took. It was important to make sure she was not so despicable throughout the story that she was hated completely by the reader, but also enough of a villain that her downfall was satisfying. 

Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2022 Title: Chapter 55: Fall From Grace Part 4

Grace had this coming for a veeery long time. Kinda surreal though to see this once seemingly invincible woman be reduced to the very thing she's preyed on since her introduction. In her eyes, and even to her supposed family, she'd now be seen as even less than human. The very same humans they've mocked for so long. 

Grace was given a punishment far worse than being killed, she was humbled. A false got cast down. What a wonderful wake-up call, not just for her but for the rest of the corporation. Oh, they'll be shaking in their boots now. 

A wonderfully cathartic chapter. 



Author's Response:

We will definitely get to Grace's mental state a bit later, after a few more events cement her new place in the social hierarchy that she considered herself the apex of! As Jisoo stated this is a fate worse than death for Grace, since to her power is everything and she considers it worse to be 'broken' rather than dead. Hence her earlier actions in the story where she was obsessed with proving she could 'break' people like Thomas and Alice.

And she's had this one coming pretty much since her introduction I think! It'll be exciting to get back to how her arc concludes in a few chapters. 

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2022 Title: Chapter 63: Stolen Scheme

As it would turn out Suji did have an alternate plan

The immediate thought which came up after finishing this chapter. And just when Jisoo wished that she would propose an alternative. Talk about timing. Ultimately, this was sort of inevitable. History had a way of repeating itself and once again the original influencers of the diminution are finding themselves on opposite sides of the playing field.


Jisoo has the clrsr advantage in most cases no, seeing as she's practically all-powerful. The one thing holding her back from putting a stop to Suji then and there would be her vow to never harm another living creature. A vow I am more than certain Suji is banking on. I don't think the scare tactics Jisoo used prior will have much affect on her sister. 

There's also one variable who's own opinions should be addressed that I think Jisoo is overlooking. What exactly would her mother think of her decision?

Jumping the gun again, Jisoo. Just like you did in a past life and just like you did with Maddie. 



Author's Response:

You're spot on in this analysis ^. Jisoo pretty much did exactly this in her past life as Daiyu, and Suji basically did exactly what she did as Baochai. This time Suji is trying to pre-empt her sister and using her knowledge of Jisoo's willingness to hurt other people, intends to do things her own way. 

As for Keqing, she's more or less content to let whatever her 'daughters' want play out and focus on her monastery and the people there, and now she's responsible for reincarnating Satsuki and raising her properly. But she's definitely got her eyes on things.

Summary:

A young boy goes against his parents' wishes to receive a normal high school education after years of homeschooling. He was subjected to a virus three years ago that was nearly the death of him and multitudes of others, but he lives on strong at the one inch that the virus left his height at. Has he made a good or bad decision?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11637 Read Count: 116300
[Report This] Published: July 13 2021 Updated: September 24 2021
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: September 16 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Free at Last?

Hohoo the plot thickens for Richard Cothmire. He ain't out of the woodwork yet. Side note, Heather did nothing wrong! Straight up decked Kristi first chance she got. Respect.

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

Story: Completed


 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 345909 Read Count: 270771
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: August 27 2024
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: August 27 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?

So I noticed an issue where when I'm logged in the story kinda disappears from the chapter, but when read looted out of an account it's visible. Really strange. Not sure if everyone having that issue but I guess if it happens try reading while logged off of your account? Not sure if it's a 100% solution but it's worth a try.

Cape-tivity! by AIumni Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

In a world of superheroes and superpowers, Catherine Denise -- codenamed: Caldera -- is having a bad day. On her first outing as a proper supervillain, the heist went wrong, her powers overloaded, her team left her, and worst of all, she's been handily defeated by the city's greatest hero, Imperia, a woman with the power to change the size of anything she can touch.

Rather than send her to the wolves of the criminal justice system however, Imperia offers Caldera the chance to join her, train with her to put her powers to use.

But once safely in the hands of Imperia, sequestered away from the world, Caldera realizes this shining hero has her own motives. And she soon comes to learn that the deepest, darkest evils have the potential to hide behind the brightest facades...

What could Imperia be planning? And will Caldera escape in time to avoid her wrath? Find out in...

CAPE-TIVITY!


Cape-tivity™ is a subsidiary of A.L.U.M.N.I. Productions

sf-id-16



Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Humiliation, Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26120 Read Count: 46958
[Report This] Published: May 19 2022 Updated: July 30 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2022 Title: Chapter 7: #6 Suiting Up

Finally caught up to the latest chapter and HOOOOO BOY is this an amazing story! Emily's methods of torturing those under her abuse are some of the most unique I've ever seen. I mean....just look at the phone charger scene. NEVER would have thought of that. She's a definite BEAST and I am down for that!



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed figuring out creative ways to use their superpowers in their torment. After all, why else create a ridiculous superhero pastiche to put a bunch of hot ladies into??

Summary:

Micha is planning on proposing to his longtime girlfriend, Juni. A nerve wracking endeavor for anyone, and even more so when you barely measure up to her ankle. Mix-sized couples were still a bit taboo, but her gentle and playful nature washed away his concerns. And despite their physical differences, they’re just like any other couple, they share romantic moments, the occasional fight, and even a fair share of teasing. 


Their relationship was flawless– well except for one tiny detail: she had a bad habit of torturing tinies behind his back. 


But nobody’s perfect, and what he doesn’t know can’t hurt him. They should stick together for better or for worse… right?



Categories: Butt, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30341 Read Count: 57208
[Report This] Published: July 18 2022 Updated: July 10 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One, Heaven

Micah and Juni are such a cute couple and share a very tender relationship. Kind and caring but there's also room for some teasing, as Juni demonstrated. 

And despite there differences in size there's no real sense of Micah or Juni being superior over the other. They treat each other as equals for the most part which i find just sweet. 


A wonderful story overall.



Author's Response:

Thank you for a wonderful review!! I'm so happy you're enjoying their relationship. Making sure Micha and Juni really felt like a couple instead of just a big and a tiny was one of my main goals. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds :)

Summary:

Macintosh has resigned himself to the fact that he would live a quiet, solitary life. A cosmic entity with apocalyptic power, however, disrupts this destiny, in her pursuit of an eternal companion.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Gentle, Muscle, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4402 Read Count: 5818
[Report This] Published: August 16 2022 Updated: August 16 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: World-ending Proposal

Can't think of much better than a devoted apocalyptic eldritch sweetheart. A destined beloved who is given the choice of being with such a powerful beauty. Who could possibly say no?



Author's Response:

I can, if I was promised a flustered, muscly shark grill that can bend space and time. And who's name rhymes with "Zilla".

Fathomless by Kardo, Viper07 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

All myths have some basis in fact, and the origin of a utopian underwater civilization is a story of legend.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2809 Read Count: 4956
[Report This] Published: August 17 2022 Updated: August 17 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Fall of Atlantea

A wonderful representation of the legend of Atlantis. The idea that it's now little more than a collection for a curious monstrous girl is just too good. 

Though, anthill may be more appropriate XD

Seeing as she can now observe them at her own leisure. That is should they survive the trip into the sea. 

Author's Response:

She’s stuffed a lot of the humans into her “sensitive inky areas” which is up to the reader to determine what exactly that is lol. The rest she’s put in her stomach, and others are in big globs of slime on her tentacles which act like protective bubbles.

We’ll see if there’s much of a city at all when we eventually get to her lair at some point!

Summary:

Henry was in a rough place. Forced into a pirate crew, he encounters a creature of the deep when she’s captured in their net. Wishing to set her free, Henry and rest of the pirates are woefully unaware that there’s another individual who wishes to see the creature go free, and she’s not going to show mercy. 

Who would’ve guessed that gigantic axolotl humanoids have strong familial bonds?


Warning: There is some heavy violence and gore ahead, so either batten down the hatches and brace for the storm; or turn back now! 

Created from several conversations with people on the giantessworld discord. 


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24964 Read Count: 31888
[Report This] Published: September 02 2022 Updated: August 13 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

Here is the carnage I was promised! And boy did you deliver on it! Abyssus is far more monstrous than I could have imagine. And her mother's even more so. Truly beasts worth fearing should you get on their bad side. 

But despite their monstrous nature it's the much smaller Abyssus who shows restraint. Even with her gore covered face she somehow shows herself to be an adorable creature. 

Top tier content!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing

Funny to see Aby unaware of some of the things humans are accustomed to.

Don't know if I've said it before. In case I haven't, Abyssus really feels like she embodies the jovial and curious spirit that comes with being someone so different from humans. A large contrast to her mother who, while caring a great deal for her daughter, doesn't see her most recent interest in the best of light. With Ira around Henry gots his work cut out for him. But so long as he with Abyssus then I'm sure things'll be fine.

....hopefully

Summary:

In a world beset by monstrous creatures known as Kaiju; Valkyries are humanity's shield and greatest oppressors. A series of anthologies about some of the Valkyrie's and their (mostly cruel) shenanigans.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4661 Read Count: 15372
[Report This] Published: September 26 2022 Updated: February 25 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Sixth Sovereign - Akira I

That beginning 
Getting some House of the Dragon vibes there lol
Some very nice carnage and brutality here. All this is just one big bother for Akira and I just love that. 

Summary:

An ambitious Sith apprentice has been dispatched to a remote planet to hunt down a powerful, yet reclusive Jedi Master. Her strange abilities, however, end up cutting his ego down to size.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Sci-Fi, Gentle, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8722 Read Count: 4808
[Report This] Published: May 30 2023 Updated: May 30 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Confrontation in the Forest

I don't see why Severus is in such a foul mood. Man gots the golden deal here! There or worse places he could have found himself in. Shrunken before a master who doesn't care for him, or worse a BEACH! Sand already gets everywhere at normal sized, imagine the hell it'd be for him!

A fun story that was well worth the wait. Truly you are a user of the force. A master of the Dark Size.



Author's Response:

Severus's old master was a beach. Lots of sand for him to work through there. Since we're in a forest, I, unfortunately, cannot work in any sand-related scenarios (cue Darth V sighing in relief).

Summary:

For years Arthur dreamed about being shrunk and dominated by the powerful mages of the Elven realms, and his dreams came true when the Archmage Tyrael recruited him into her household. Now he serves as her live in manservant and shrunken toy on command, exploring his desires at the hands and feet of the Archmage and her apprentices. Life seems idyllic, until one day without warning Tyrael announces that they are embarking on a dangerous journey across the Human realms, and into the wilds in pursuit of a goal she won't reveal.

A story about an elven archmage on a quest with her favorite human, and all the kinky uses they find for shrinking magic along the way.


Categories: Odor, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Fantasy, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25754 Read Count: 36251
[Report This] Published: June 10 2023 Updated: July 31 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Observatory

As always the smut is incredible, but beyond it I found the interactions between Tyrael and Arthur cute. 

Dare I say... Adorable!?

They got a lovely bond there, one that I very much enjoyed reading beyond the smut. Always enjoyed characterization and the characters you write never fail in that regard. Clear to see with Tyrael's moment of silence over Arthur's mortality. 

A great first chapter.

That said... That constellation do be looking very familiar. Almost like looking in a mirror. I'd advise staying on that star's good side. Been know for its temper.





Author's Response:

It's a very traumatic constellation to observe! Anyways yeah they do have a bond, they're both people with very strange desires that compliment each other perfectly, it's clear why Tyrael is acting a little more foolishly than she might by pursuing certain magical paths that she'd normally avoid.

Divine Right by Neon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When two aimless stoner roommates discover a miniature city full of tiny people in their home, they’re faced with an impossible choice—treat it with reverence or revel in their newfound godhood. As one descends into megalomania and the other wrestles with guilt, the tiny civilization struggles to survive under the whims of deities who see them as nothing more than entertainment.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4235 Read Count: 2858
[Report This] Published: March 11 2025 Updated: March 11 2025
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2025 Title: Chapter 1: I: Genesis

I think, for what I find most appealing here, is how the story doesn't immediately dive into the kinkier bits of these usual scenarios. The interactions on Jade and Cass's part feel real, in the sense that, while the latter more readily leans into having fun, the former is more cautious and reserved. There's a build-up present, the sort that I haven't often seen these days in nano stories. On top of that, I quite like how things are set up currently, so as to fuel potential future chapters and the fun that can be had in them. All in all, enjoyed this first chapter here. Would love to see more. 

On that note, Cass is best girl here and deserves to be treated like a queen/goddess. Anyone who states otherwise is unquestionably wrong. Them's the rules.



Author's Response: Thank you, I do try to set my work apart in that way! No judgment to those who like to jump right in to the action, but I like to take my time setting the table a bit. The characters have to feel somewhat real in their thoughts processes and motivations for me to really get immersed, and I'm pleased to hear I could achieve that with you. Jade is given a lot more attention since we're privy to her thoughts, but Cass has her own resume for being the way she is too that I intend to show with time. Much appreciated!