By the way I’ve been meaning to mention that my sympathy for her father will completely depend on what we find out when we finally get her details ( which by the way u are a total tease,( and I do mean that in the nicest way).  But her father up and disappeared for a year after her sisters death, that for me is grounds to be dishoned as a father, I lost one child u still have another u don’t just up and vanish especially after giving your remaining child a wrong phone number and, and depending on who’s mistake that was ( meaning annelles for calling the wrong number for a year or him giving a wrong number) may even make his abandonment even worse. 

So I will wait judgement on him, but if he is found wonting I will say this, Anne should stop protecting him and let girls do what they will.

my opinion of fathers who abandon their child is very low.

I do apologize but I was wondering when the next chapter might be.  I don’t usually ask this question but your story is incredible and I am very ready for what happens next.

Does she decide to actually unload to one of the girls ( very unlikely), does she get in touch with dufert( poor guy). Does she decide to become a willing pet ( again very unlikely,).I can’t wait to find out the answers to these and more questions.  

  Also I do have a question, let’s say some how situation reversed at the current point in the story, pst chapter 24, I mean Anna becomes big and the 4 become small, would she kill them at this point or keep them alive.  I think she would at this point keep them alive if reluctantly I do think she is starting to care for them. Early in the story yeah no question dead.  But after the zoey incident and the Bennett’s incident I do think she does somewhat cared for them if still hates them. I also think hate and love are two sides of the same coin.  So hmmm yea.

so yea I don’t normally ask the question of how long but i am very much looking forward to the next chapter.  Also hope u had a good holiday.

I do have one more question, in the past u said u thought this story would be wrapped up around thirty chapters, now is that still going to happen u think or will it be more now, just asking cause with all the balls u still have up in the air I can’t see it being done in under ten more chapters at least, which is totally fine, I love this story and really want it to go the distsnce. I have no desire for this story to end anytime soon is what I am saying

Well as it turns out I have one more question and if it’s spoilers that’s ok I can wait but is Izzy a type-0, the reason I ask is because a little bit of her section very much reads like Anna’s just prior to her shrinking, what with all the bad vibes she was getting. From the 4.  Now the big thing against this is that she didn’t consider a shrunken being captive if she felt a vibration from inside the crystal and I would think a shrunken would consider the possibility of a cause being a shrunken, but yea I read her section carefully ,( I love POV changes) and I get some interesting ideas from her POV.

Ok first off I’m still reading but I have a few things to say first off 27k words good lord dude I was expecting maybe 15-20k words, that is an crazy amount, love it and what I read so far, I am not surprised they don’t want her reading but  seesh, Also Harper communications really of all majors she is communication, I just don’t see it.

Back to reading

Ok well first off congratz when u said this was a game changer, it really was, it takes it being a small number of bad things to a world wide disaster, and honestly every one of them deserves to burn, I mean the families and the daughters, the PRincess ( i do love them as villain's, but damn i dont thing there is any redemption for them any more, i was foolishly hoping there would be, but yea that isnt a thing i think anymore for me.)  

    U took this story in a very interesting direction that u did very litely hint at with the mother being so difficult to find info on.   

     OK so shrunken are having children ( that is in my opionion highly stupid and irrisponsble of the shrunken, u do not want to perpeatuate this damn disease ( which i now am beginngin to think was manufactured just like in a another story)).

     Ok so i am going to try not to ramble with this but i probably will.

This story has just grown well past any boundaries i thought u might have had.  So I was thinking there would be the bad end where she imprints on the girls. the not as  bad end where she at least maintains her humanity.  The end where she gets back to her Big family.  THe end where she actually ends up with some one who can properly  love her and take care of her.  That is now in doubt.  

    As i said earlier I was hoping that the 4 would in time be revealed to not be complete monsters and that there was hope for them, I see that now from this chapter and the previous 5 chapters that this is not a thing beyond the fact that for the first time in there lives they have someone they are actually caring about.  Like u said it is so toxic.  Now don't get me wrong i love the 4 as villain's ( and I love a good redemption story) but yea they need to die.  

     So now the resistance, they are interesting and i look forward to seeing more about them.  I will admit that it took me alot longer to figure out what was happening than it should have, I honestly thought it was either annabell hallucenating or losing her damn mind from the massacre.  Then things happened and i was blown away.   I disagree with the guy about not killing every one, they had them uncouncious they shoudl have killed them.  It really doesn't take much to kill us bigs and they could have doced their weapons with poison to kill every one their.  ( but this isn't a complaint against u)

     OK Annabell number one priority now is to get the imprinting stopped and kill poppy, because she is now a threat to the resistance and maybe a threat to normal shrunken beyond her precious Goddesses.  I dont know how to interpret agent x saying she killed all the shrunken at the former massacre (plz dont let that be true).  Poppy is to damn dangerous, but at that same time info can be kept from her, hmmmm she doesnt neccesarily know all that annebell knows ( zoey), so maybe annabell could learn to keep info from her.  BUt yea Anna needs to really get this therapy going.  Also I now retact my preivous statement that she needs to stay with the 4.  She needs to get away from them and stay gone, but i get why she stayed.  

     Now i have a statement here and i hope no one takes offense to this ( i understand if u do)  I view something like the HDD (the disease, not the people) as an existential threat to humaninty , and so while i would not take the extreme measures exterminating all who have it, i would ban all from having kids, and there would be massive penalties for those that did.  Including death.  I would take no pleasure in it like these monsters, but this disease would need to be wiped out.  I would also push for massive funding in elimanting the disease viah cure. I also dont believe for one second any of them actually believe that clap trap about saving the world except maybe Leah ( Naomi flat out told her she didnt.) 

     So about her mother  i thought she was going to be estranged from a family that was actively fighting the big bads and she just wanted peace, but now i dont know. I do think beth is the commander ( i really hope so or that she is alive at least).  

     Honestly i thought this chapter was going to deal with Oliver and the friends, not what this turned out to be.  I loved this chapter, for the first time i actually believe Annabelle actually has a chance to escape and find a refuge, and maybe have a good life ( if scarred).  

    I have no idea what to think of this whole blessed blood thing, personally aside from the imprinting thing it sounds like a good deal, really tired of the trope where just because u can heal your a freak.  U have hinted that those who come in contact with type 0s imprint on said type 0, and at first that's what I thought had happened with byte, (once I realized that there was something going on).    

     SO this turned into a big review, in addition to my other reviews, hope u don't that i have reviewed alot lately and will probably continue to do so i keep having thoughts.  Like I said this is the best story on this site and honestly i think u could get this published, ( u would need to do some editing and stuff but its that good).

SO this was a pretty small scope story that just got blown with open and I am very here for it.  I cant wait to find out where this goes.

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Ok I have thoughts for later but first off that was hot as hell, ummm I really liked that spicy scene and hot damn I felt for Anna but damn did I ( honestly if I was in generals position there would be no way I could resist doing that( does that make me a bad person to)?) find that hot.  

The bear scene is very worring for Anna.  Also yes  just like Anna I found Harper to be the most immature of the lot prob followed by Naomi ( really u attack your sister, and then call her immature and dramatic) Also yes I was right about her being drawn to the whole working out thing ( swimming in this case) just not as strong of a pull as I at first thought.  

So we have started to learn about their back story and some of Anna’s ( what’s up with the mom) so this should be good.

Well Jisoo looks like u finally have to face your hipocracy as well as your families,.  Poor Maddie though it looks like she maybe ok for the time being.  Now what about poor Maeve.

Well that’s sounds a lot like people being people to deal with the situation and now erect finally sees Kirov for what she is and also what she could be someday, aka a monster but the kind of monster that keeps the other monsters away.  She very much deserved the mental anguish but damn if I know where u are going with this

If it ever hits u I would like a proper follow up seeing Evie and Tina being a good master and pet