The pure novelty and humanity of the very concept is remarkable.

There is humor, suspension, some good exposition and world building... All good tings!

But in the end, as with most good storytelling; it's the interplay between the characters, and the details of their personality that connects the most.

This story is entertaining from the start and just when you think the character's have plateaued their development, a side interaction or surprise twist reveals hidden depths.

As for the intimacy; it gets emotional, it gets sexual and, at times, it gets cruel.
While featuring, and sometimes allowing the reader to revel in, cruel acts or fantasies, the story always keeps us ground with reality - taking care to portray the harm that can be done. Not only does this bring maturity to the work, but it makes those acts all the more tantalizing.

A great read, and one to remember - heck I've archived it!


Minor spoilers ahead:
If there is any room for growth here I'd point towards the main protagonist who never quiite transcends into being something more than a vehicle for the plot, though it's a close call at times!
My recommendation would be to hint through some interaction at Amber's private feelings - we almost always see her through the lens of Eve. As such it's never quite clear if it's about status, fear, pleasure, or all of the above.
A single, unfettered, scene showing Amber as she is in private before going of the deep end would really drive the character home I think.

Thanks Greenanon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. I'll take the criticisms under advisement, they're all pretty fair. I will say we will see a bit of Amber in the final chapter, though obviously far her height, no pun intended. Overall I'm really glad that people enjoyed this one, it was a bit of a different one for me since most of my stories are fairly goofy over the top adventures or straight gentle stuff.