After having little success with the ladies, a young college student is shrunken by his attractive but mature boss, who is looking for a serious relationship to fill a void in her life that she desperately needs filled….
This story was very well written and paid, and there was a good balance between the parts...thank you
This is how Doug grew up at the feet of some lovely women. It gets really interesting after an accident at a research facility.
I hope everyone enjoyed my first story.
Hi.. it was a good story and thank you for it.. but the ending was obviously rushed and messed up! I hope to see stronger endings from you.. good luck my friend
In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.
It was a good story, but it felt more suitable for teenage magazines. The plot had great potential for erotic scenes, which the author unfortunately ignored."
This is an updating huge collection of stand alone shrunken people stories. The first chapter is the world's foundation and introduction, and every other chapter is a stand alone story happens in this world. With each new story I write that takes place in this world, I'll add a new chapter, so come and check it out every now and then.
The main idea in most of the stories is Vore (soft + hard, sometimes with digestion, sometimes without), but also other stuff like cruelty, humiliation, crush, scat (with early warning on the relevant stories), sexual stuff, and other stuff.
The most common narrative is cruel and unwilling, but sometimes it is softer and more willing, or at least partially willing. Also, beware of unexpected evil twists.
The stories are also available on my DA page (check my bio).
پایان بندی دوم سادیسمی و احمقانه و خلاف انتظار بود و گویا نویسنده نقش خود را با نویسنده یک داستان پلیسی با پایان بندی غیرقابل پیشبینی اشتباه گرفت
Author's Response: האמת שזו הייתה הכוונה מההתחלה. רציתי לכתוב סיפור עם סוף לא צפוי, שיהיה טוויסט נחמד. בנוסף, רציתי לצור חלק אינטראקטיבי עם הקורא, שתיהיה לך אפשרות בחירה, שתוכל לשים את עצמך בעיניים של הדמות. אני מסכים שהסוף השני היה אכזרי ולא צפוי, אבל זה בדיוק מה שרציתי. יש לי סיפורים אחרים שהם יותר קלילים , אני מזמין אותך לחפש את עמוד DeviantArt שלי, יש שם הרבה יותר סיפורים.
תודה על הביקורת.