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Summary:

The Shrinking Disease is not inherently fatal, but disobeying the relative giants who find you certainly can be.  This is a lesson that the small suburban Cooke Family was forced to learn at the hands of their immense and Immune neighbors.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Entrapment, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Slave, Unaware, Odor, Mouth Play, Legwear, Instant Size Change, Humiliation, Giant, Couples , Footwear, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89269 Read Count: 550042
[Report This] Published: April 01 2015 Updated: July 12 2016
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter, this story is superbly written, very enjoyable to read. Great scene where she torments him with her mouth. I disagree with the other poster, Neds story line is great.

Keep up the excellent work!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Interlude 3

Probably my favorite chapter, I'm starting to like Jeremys story line better. Glad to see another character added to Neds story, it felt like it was getting a little stale with all the shoe cleaning, except for when her sister gets him, she seems a little more devilish. 

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Date: March 22 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 16

Just love this world you have created! And the treatment the tinies receive! Now the girls are drinking too, an already dangerous situation just got even more dangerous *weg*

 

Fantastic story, so glad to see this back. 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

Definitely my favorite story going on this site, love all these girls. Definitely getting intense for Jeremy, talking about eating him and crushing him, nobody has actually been killed off yet, makes me wonder if things will get worse for the shrinkees. 

 

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: June 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

@Tomspeedy, I cant recall any story where the tiny kills themselves, they must be really short stories. Most people have an engrained sense of survival hardwired into them, no matter how dire the situation. 

 

Brittanys thing is having her shoes clean, there is plenty of other subplots with other characters to offer other varities. And she threatened to eat Jeremey this chapter, so thats different and her friends have abused him in other ways too and now she has given him to her sister. 

 

I like that all the girls abuse the tinies, way too much gentle on this site for my liking, and the stories that aren't, are usually poorly written. GTSW is one of the few who does a good job. 

 

Hope to see more of this soon, really want to see what Lana does with Jeremey, I think things just got even worse for him. 


 

Size Matters by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

An evolutionary rift causes millions of seemingly ordinary people to decrease in size.  Stripped of far more than the right to be called “human,” the victims will find themselves in a very large world of hurt, or maybe just in a very large shoe.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Size Matters
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32102 Read Count: 206885
[Report This] Published: April 05 2015 Updated: August 07 2015
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2015 Title: Chapter 12: These Shrinkers Were Made for Walking (Part 2)

Love Sallys treatment and attitude towards her sister, thoes are going to be some comfortable shoes! 



Author's Response:

They definitely are. Thanks for reviewing!

Shrunken Couple by muammar Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Jeff and Amanda have decided to shrink to 1 inch tall and see who finds them first! Young couple have been dating for a while, they met on a macrophile fetish board. Both want to be shrunk, so now that they have the opportunity they've decided to shrink themselves 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Middle Age (50+), Couples , Feet, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28104 Read Count: 18689
[Report This] Published: April 06 2015 Updated: April 06 2015
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is awesome, I very much enjoyed that. I didn't care for the shift to male content at the end but I figured it would make an appearance at some point given that there was a description given for 6 people at the beginning.

Have no idea if this is your story but I'm glad you posted it. If it's not yours, you should mention that and give credit.

Now I'm wondering if this story was ever finished, would love to see more of it. It had great dynamic between Ms Morris and the couple, which I hope continues to be the focal point with just the three of them.

Queen Bee by Xxana Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Kira decides that the Delta-Phi sorority could use new leadership, and deposing the current queen bee proves to be even more fun than she could have imagined.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17473 Read Count: 67880
[Report This] Published: May 07 2015 Updated: May 09 2015
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Trash

How did I miss this story, great read, love the ideas and treament of Maria!

Good development, you set the scenes up very well, easy for readers to put an image to the story.

Need more stories like this on this site!

Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 281453
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life After Carly

Jacksmith, you are a very cruel man, making us wait to find out what happened to Carly! :)

 

So glad to see this continued, Carly is one of my favorite characters, I hope like crazy she regains the upper hand! Very interested to see how this unfolds because obviously, she will be the first person they look for if Jack goes missing, assuming she regains her height.

 

Great work, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I promise the wait won't be long. And I'm pretty sure wanting Carly to regain the upper hand makes you very cruel as well! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

Ha, love how Carly can be manipulitive even when tiny, and I agree with AdamX, how dare that guard, lol. I think Adam and I are her only fans. Seems she will have to endure some hard times though, I would not have put together who that was who took her if you hadn't mentioned Toy Teacher, nice tie in.



Author's Response:

Haha. Carly doesn't have many fans, you're right. Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2409569
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Monday Afterschool Delight

This story is fantastic, Janine is such a sexy giantess, love her attitude and treatment of Tom. One small critique, I think Tom would have been a little worse for wear after spending all day in her panties, would have liked to seen some descriptions about that as well as his time spent in there and being orgasmed on repeatedly. But you've already churned out 15 chapters and written a ton so I get why you may not have wanted to do that, lol.

 

Just being greedy because this story rocks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read the story and give it a review. I appreciate your input and have tried to make up for overlooking all day in the panties and being baby fresh. I sometimes get ahead of myself and miss some of the minutia that gives the story the extra pop. Thanks keeping me on my toes!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Tess

Nice twist, wonder how good a freind Sam is? Will she try to make Tess a pet? Maybe pair up with Janine? Or will Tess shrink Sam to keep her grandfathers secret?

 

Can't wait to see what Janine has planed for Tom next!



Author's Response:

*wringing his hands together* muwahaha new depths for Janine, well maybe for Tom...

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Just caught up on last two chapters, love that Janine! Great scene with the hairbrush. So want her to keep Tom to herself, hope she can snatch him away before Karolina gets out of the showwer, Janines been rough on Tom when shes not even angry with him, would love to see wht she does to him while mad *weg*



Author's Response:

Twists and turns, but we'll see where our little hero winds up - hopefully he doesn't get stepped on :-O

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Karolina

Knew that was going to happen, was hoping it wouldn't and that Janine would get him back first but figured you'd have interaction between Lina and him. Not my cup of tea, I hate gentle but still very well written.

 

I'll just have to hope Janine is clever enough to get him back! Curious to see where you go with this, still have something cooking with Sam too I think.



Author's Response:

Janine is very clever and now motivated. We'll see if Sam gets a shot to play with tiny Tom.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Tess

Apparenty giantesslover missed the fact that Tom is enjoying his time with Lina and doing this willingly. Lina is the complete opposite of Janine and although his time with Lina has been titilating, I can't wait for Janine to get him back, because unlike carycomic, I find theres no such thing as too much of a devilish girl *weg*



Author's Response:

And Janine is oh so devilish, :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Lina

Lina is a bit of a hypocrite, after giving Janine that speach about respecting each others boundaries, here she is lying to her daughters face and stealing soemthing that belongs to her, yes "belongs", he was her birthday present. 

 

Wonder what the resolution will be though, will Lina relent and give him back, will they share or will Lina flat out refuse. Cant wait to find out!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Misdirection

Damn it, thought Lina was going to relent. This is where Janine should have been keeping Tom at all times, why the heck did she ever bother putting him in a glass. I almost want Janine to swallow Tom like she thought about for running away on her like this. 

 

Cary, if Tom didnt want to be a present, shouldnt have been in Janines room on her birthday molesting her breast. ;)



Author's Response:

Hang in there don't count Janine out yet she's not one to relent.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Janine

Oh Tom, I almost feel sorry for you, almost. Can't wait!

 

I'm wondering though, just how much Tom will still enjoy being in Linas panties after a jog, might not be all he thought it would be ;)



Author's Response:

You would think it might get a little off putting being trapped for a 10k jog, but Tom is a true poon hound, maybe too much...

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Fallout

I don't care if it's Janine or Sam but someone needs to knock that smirk off Toms face and put the fear of giant women back in him! Insolent pup, lol.

 

I don't think Lina will be winning any mother of the year awards, lying and deceiving her daughter. Whole family is dysfunctional but at least Janine is my kind of giantess ;)



Author's Response:

He is pretty insolent isn't he? Hmm, fancy that. There is a chess game going on between mother and daughter, both are equally complicit in perfidious behavior to keep/get what they want in an attempt to outmanuever the other. We'll see where it goes and who manages to capture the little prize in the end. Pun intended.

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Date: October 13 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Tess

Ok, Tom needs to be hurt, hes a smug bastard and a creeper. Looks like Sam is just going to give into him too, although she did have darker thoughts. I dont see her doing anything bad though because of her friendship with Tess.



Author's Response:

He is a bit of a perv in need of a serious comeuppance, don't worry though, karma can be a bitch