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Summary: Two beautiful sisters possess microscopic civilizations in their bedrooms, but neither knows of the other's treasures. 
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2907 Read Count: 39628
[Report This] Published: April 05 2007 Updated: April 09 2007
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Date: April 05 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction and beginnings

I have always liked these micro civilization stories. Good job thus far someguy.

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Date: April 06 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Lesly Ventures In to Lauren's closet

I really digged the descrptions of laurenville and peek into there lifestyle. This is fantastic.

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Date: April 09 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Devistation of Lesley

I loved the way this chapter ended, very powerful. Keep it going.

Summary: I have been shrunken to a fraction of a millimeter in my girlfriend's bedroom, and I am being subjected to her every will.
Categories: Adventure, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 932 Read Count: 13445
[Report This] Published: April 11 2007 Updated: April 11 2007
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Date: April 12 2007 Title: Chapter 1: My escape and capture

I was hoping for a bit longer unaware scene, but its still a great start. I hope you continue your other story as well.

Summary:

Candy is enjoying her life as a lap dancer and her new found status in the town


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2005 Read Count: 9984
[Report This] Published: April 16 2007 Updated: April 16 2007
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: April 16 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Just a couple of things, why does your story start with chapter two.

But anyway, I think your story would be better taken if you add in some paragraph breaks. Anytime somebody talks should be a new paragraph. No matter how short it is, and then anytiime you are expressing a new idea.

Right now, with the story as one paragraph its kind of daunting. 



Author's Response:

Chapter one is there in the archives, thanks for your comments, i have only been writing for a year so your input is very helpfull to me.

Kind regards

 

Rory   

Summary: In the 1870's a Marshall and his posse are shrunk while trying to apprehand bank robbers.
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14154 Read Count: 66469
[Report This] Published: May 13 2007 Updated: August 13 2007
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Date: May 27 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Joining The Tribe

This is really a differnet story then i first thought it was going ot be when reading it. I am really enjoying where you took this one. It's nice to see a story that isnt just another gts story.

Author's Response: thank you...a review from you is like being Knighted by the Queen.

Homosizeuals by Chozo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A very short SW story taking place in a society different than our own, and mostly centered around a conversation between two tiny women.
Categories: Giantess, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1557 Read Count: 11240
[Report This] Published: May 29 2007 Updated: May 29 2007
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Date: May 30 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is a pretty unique take at the whole gts thing. I for one enjoyed it alot as it was so fresh and unlike what i had read before and best of all it was written well toboot. great job.

Summary:

A young married couple's relationship dramatically changes during a camping trip after the wife expores new ways of satisfying herself...


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2830 Read Count: 29629
[Report This] Published: June 09 2007 Updated: June 09 2007
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Date: June 12 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Squirm With The Sperm

Really unique take, i loved how you fit characterization into such a short amount of space and you still managed to write a interesting tale. good job.

Summary: Alex finds himself a place to belong
Categories: Giantess, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4346 Read Count: 13227
[Report This] Published: July 10 2007 Updated: July 10 2007
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Date: July 11 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story, it was concise and cohesive.

Summary:

A boy gets shrunk and must seek help from his friends sister. Will she help him?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4820 Read Count: 120874
[Report This] Published: July 20 2007 Updated: August 18 2007
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Date: July 21 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Will She Help or Not?

i like what you presented but the lack of proper spacing made it a chore to read.

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Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Less than Normal Night

glad to see you reformatted the story, its much easier to read. Keep up the good work.

Summary: Twelve years ago, Carrie Schultz had a father... a father she never thought to be alive. She was the daughter of a man who incredibly shrank to the point that he was thought for dead. But now after all these years, her father is believe to be alive.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12490 Read Count: 131366
[Report This] Published: August 06 2007 Updated: March 14 2008
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Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

I love the plot to the story thus far, Its nice to see something that feels like an actual story. That isn't done as much as it use too. I hope you continue this, its great, and the writing mistakes can be easily overlooked for the overall enjoyable story.

Summary: A man on a secret mission is shrunk to less than 4 inches. He finds unexpected help from a woman, but his savior is having her own "romantic" agenda...
Categories: Incest, Giantess, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16532 Read Count: 45175
[Report This] Published: August 23 2007 Updated: February 07 2008
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Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start, the writing here is of a extremely high level. Its still seems a bit early, so i will hold off on further critque until i get more of the story. But im definately digging whats been presented thus far.

Author's Response: thanks you so much for the review, Asukafan! i'm awfully glad you enjoy it ! :-)  i've started the second part. poor Max hasn't seen anything yet, i'm affraid ;-)

Summary:

A shrunken man in the 22nd century ends up in the hands of a cruel college-aged taskmistress


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3318 Read Count: 11720
[Report This] Published: September 02 2007 Updated: September 02 2007
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Date: September 02 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting tale, i feel kind of bad for the guy and would have liked to see the thought process that led him to accept his face.

Summary: Narrator gets shrunk to 1 cm and goes along for a ride while trying to get Monica's attention, a girl in his class.
Categories: Insertion, Feet, Instant Size Change, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15743 Read Count: 319512
[Report This] Published: November 01 2007 Updated: March 21 2009
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Date: November 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Under Her Shoe

excellent start, some good descriptions. i hope you continue it. I always like a good unaware story.

Summary: I am punished by a hot girl after I check her out.
Categories: Adventure, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11654 Read Count: 73144
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: June 12 2009
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Date: November 06 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: This sucks

another good chapter, iliked the vaccuum. it was suspenseful and the injury made him seem more human, it created  abit of sympathy for him where before he was just kind of portrayed as a pig.

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Date: November 04 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Ashley

so far so good, i like the adventure feel this story has.

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Date: November 07 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another very enjoyable chapter. I am enjoying how you are really bringing some humanity into him, and making this  brittany kaplan out to be evil one.

The other thing i think you are doing well, is the pacing. The excitement has really been increasing each step of the way, building up.

The only real complaint i have, is how many people have found him, and then lost him moments later. I think the story may be better served if he is struggling to gain the attention of his friends. However, thats really up to you, and what you are doing now is working more then fine. I for one can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary: A really random story, I sit on a bench at school and shrink down to miniature size.
Categories: Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1302 Read Count: 5269
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: November 02 2007
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Date: November 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

excellent light heated tale. I didnt know you were such a writer, but i find myself enjoying your stories.

Summary: A hot girl challenges me to pool and the stakes are my size
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 669 Read Count: 6488
[Report This] Published: November 03 2007 Updated: November 03 2007
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Date: November 04 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The pool game

Nice short story, i wish you would have ended after the there nightly escapedes but its a enjoyable read.