Penname: sporadicx [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

There once was a family, a very successful family that owned a very successful family business, located in a smaller town, that was on the outskirts of a major city. Jack, Jr. the eldest son of the founder, Jack Simms was now the Operations Manager. Jack Senior had passed away several years ago, so his wife, Barbara and her mother, Katherine, had taken over the daily operations of the company, doing all of the tasks the Mr. Simms had always done. The work required many long hours for those first few years, but now that everything was going along so well, a bit of free time had made itself available.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28760 Read Count: 153229
[Report This] Published: October 25 2008 Updated: February 02 2009
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: March 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the micro! Super awesome story!

Summary:

This story is quite a bit different than any story I've ever read before, so I'm not sure how it will be received. Its basically about a teacher who shrinks her students, and its very violent and sexual and whatnot, so you've been warned.

June 21, 2013 EDIT: Finally updated after over 4 years of stagnation!!

July 12, 2013: Red Valkyrie needs food, badly! :)


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17007 Read Count: 137536
[Report This] Published: February 24 2009 Updated: July 12 2013
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: July 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Enslaved By The Bell

Chapter 5 is NIIIIICE. I wanted to first point out that your writing alone is extremely captivating. As for the story.. I think it's awesome that you introduced the whole Breakfast Club twist, and I love the way that the plot is picking up and being developed. Lastly, do not fret about going on tangents, the pace of the story, and writing too much additional detail. To me, you doing those things actually adds to the quality of the story, and it has me connecting with the story on a deeper level.

As for your response to my last review... Do not worry about my ideas for Amber. Certainly use your ideas that you've already written, and don't go through the trouble of having to redo parts of the story. I'm sure you can easily find a way to use my ideas, or something similar to them, for another part in the future! :)

I cannot wait to read new content soon! Give me a few days to think about some ideas for the characters in the Breakfast Club, and I will post another review regarding those lose ends.



Author's Response:

There's certainly no shortage of possibilities on where to take the story from here. What I think would be really great is if this site had a "choose your own path" sort of option, where a chapter could branch off along multiple paths. If that sort of option existed I could have went off in different directions with some of these prior chapters. I think that would be a really great feature for this site, and I have proposed the idea to Asuka. I hope he can find some way of implementing it.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: July 03 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Enslaved By The Bell

It never gets old, even after rereading it several times. Really hope to see a chapter 5 soon...

 

I have wondered this for a long time... Other than being tall, how would you  describe Harriet both physically and mentally? Is there a famous person, certain look and style, or character that Harriet resembles? Do she act like them also? Does harriet have a sensitive side, other kinks? etc.



Author's Response:

Ever heard "Show, don't tell"? Writers are supposed to show things rather than just describe them. With that being said, I can't really think of any famous person off hand that exactly resembles Harriet. She's actually based off a teacher I had in I think 8th grade or so. Can't remember exactly... I don't even remember her name. I do remember one time she was eating crackers with peanut butter and I would watch and imagine there were tiny people on the crackers as she was eating them. :) But her personality was nothing like Harriet's. That is completely fiction on my part.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: June 29 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Enslaved By The Bell

Part 4 is awesome. You made no mistake with the direction you chose! Really looking forward to a part 5!!!

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: July 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Enslaved By The Bell

This is my third offering of advice, and I am back-to-back with posts. Hopefully, I am not the only one who is this excited to see the story continue. I actually have yet to grow bored of rereading this story on a monthly, sometimes weekly, basis. The writing, for me, is literally that good.

When I think about this story, I grow more and more excited about the tiny girl that was over-shrunk and stuck in her ass. I would love to see Harriet uncontrollably lubricating at the end of her next work day and come across the tiny girl stuck to her cum smeared panties. I would like to think that Harriet gets bored with her current, larger, playtoy while she's working and 'move on' to another. It would be awesome to see her get so over joyed from the sight of that tiny girl struggling to free herself from her panties that she wants to obtain more people of that size to have her way with, and maybe possibly gathering multiple-sized tinies. I imagine Harriet having no idea as to how the micro sized spec ended up in the situation she's in, with little rememberance that she had previously inserted a person of that size into her asshole, or so she thought. From the details I've gathered, I wouldn't be surprised if Harriet made a simple flick of her tongue over her cum soaked panties and swallowed the tiny girl without any hesitation. All she would have left on her mind is finding more, fueling her corrupt ways, and giving zero fucks about everyone.



Author's Response:

Wow! I would guess you are the biggest fan of this story, or at least the biggest fan who has come out of the woodwork anyway. :) With that being said, don't worry, because I have been quietly working on Part 5 over the last week or two and I think I am just about ready to post it, and will probably do that tonight if all goes well.

I REALLY like your idea, but that wasn't what I had in mind for Amber's fate, and I think with what I've written so far it might be too late to change course without having to do an extensive rewrite. I haven't actually mentioned Amber at all in Part 5, but I think when you read it you will probably be able to guess where I'm going with that. Sadly, you might be disappointed...

Summary: In the world of Gulliver and Gullivera 500 years on the sizes are just starting to mix and live amongst each other. There were bound to be bumps along the way.
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6905 Read Count: 102741
[Report This] Published: April 29 2009 Updated: April 29 2009
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: March 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it. Wish to read more.

Summary: You have been having trouble with your manager, Melissa, coming on to you at work. When you decide to go to her office and confront her about it, you shrink to a quarter of an inch when you touch the handle of the door. How will she notice you now and what will she do if she finds you?
Categories: Unaware, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9267 Read Count: 217944
[Report This] Published: June 14 2010 Updated: March 10 2013
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: March 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Melissa goes from boss to giantess

Excellent story!! Hope to see some more content soon!

Summary:

A girl keeps a tiny city in her room and uses it to satisfy her own carnal desires.  She lets her friend in on her secret and worlds change...


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10113 Read Count: 265025
[Report This] Published: June 15 2011 Updated: August 11 2013
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: August 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hell yeah!!! Super happy to see that you have decided to get back to this story. I started thinking that it was a goner for sure! I love that you're inspired by Cities in the Cellar, such a truly amazing and wonderful story. Good choice of direction, BTW.

Stay persistent! No reason in the world why you can't write nice and developed stories like the ones you are inspired by.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: August 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the latest addition. Hope you continue writing.

Summary:

This story is based on the world created by the author minuss between Brobdingnagans & Lilliputians, specifically between a Lilliputian female and two different Brobdingnagan females (so far).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36589 Read Count: 213368
[Report This] Published: November 24 2011 Updated: June 10 2015
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: November 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating

Love this story!!! You are an awesome writer! Please keep the story going!!!

Broken Sky by lfcfan Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The destruction of a civilization at the hands of a goddess. A sci-fi fantasy tale.


Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Crush, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore, Sci Fi / Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46161 Read Count: 197813
[Report This] Published: December 04 2012 Updated: September 15 2014
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: March 31 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I see where you're coming from with there being so much to cover that time simply cannot allow for you to cover it all and also live your daily life. It has been a great story, and I (and many more) have really enjoyed the interesting twists and turns you put to it. Can't wait to read the final chapter!

Perhaps we will see another story from you?... hopefully one that doesn't grow too out of control for you? 



Author's Response:

Well, I've made it a mission for me to write 100k words in 2013, so, I hope to fullfill it by writing GTS stories and leaving my footprint here. Expect a lot from me this year... I hope. :D

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: January 22 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the new chapter. I like how in the story you keep her "toys" at micro size. I don't really have any suggestions for the actual plot of the story. I think that that is going very well. However, I would love to see more detailed singled-out, or one on one scenes with the goddess and one of her captives. I can't speak for others, but personally I love when the focus is on the tinies, and how she humiliates them.

I.e., smearing them into her pussy, sucking them off her fingers, and or both... sprinkling them on her body, etc.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review again! Actually, I was now going for a more personal touch now, singled-out scenarios as you say. The giantess will get to know some of them more personally, they will have names etc. Right now, I'm writing the plot that leads to it, so that it makes sense in the end. To be honest, the plot is my primary focus, I just want to learn how to write and I can't do that by just writing about giantess interaction.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

HOLEY MOLEY BABY!!! This is GOOD, GREAT, EXCELLENT! Please continue this story. Don't stop only a few chapters in like many writers on this site seem to do. I'm sure it's hard to complete stories and obviously takes much dedication, but I am sure you are capable of it if you just keep at it! Anyways, such a thriller story! The only thing I might suggest is to please include more "singled out" scenarios, like that of the woman that was fighting for her life on the nipple. You are very good at those descriptive scenes. Maybe it's just me, but I find those small stories within the story to be HOT and full of sexy detail. Thanks for what you've wrote thus far. I really really enjoyed these first two chapters. Cannot wait to read more!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, I didn't expect such a good review. I obviously plan to complete this and if this is a success, to write a story about how it all began. I hope to add a new chapter every week or so, depending on how busy I am, but of course reviews such as this always encourage the writer.

Also, I think there will be a lot more 'singled out' scenarios in the next chapters since after the capital is destroyed, most of the population will disperse into rural areas out of fear, collapse of trade and general unrest. We have to wait and see :)

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: December 27 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved chapter 3! The writing is good, and so is the story itself. Dont stop now!

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: January 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice job on the latest chapter. Hope to see more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It seems like you're the only one who really cares to write something here. It looks people here don't really like stories that have lots of gruesome violence in them. I really don't get enough feedback to know if I'm doing a good job or not. 

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: February 01 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The plot is getting deeper and you're improving with the writing, which is nice. It keeps the story very interesting. However, don't forget that you still need to include some "sexy stuff" here and there when you decide to jump into the real meat and potatoes of your story. I know it can be difficult to do so, especially when there is so much to cover, but just keep in mind that this is a website for GIANTESS stories.

I admit, I am a very "encounter-loving" reader when it comes to the stories on this site. I get the biggest thrill when there is giantess interaction, detailed scenes, micro-level scenarios, etc. That's obvious from my older reviews. However, I just wanted to share with you MY opinions/suggestions. My intention was everything but to be mean and unhelpful!



Author's Response:

Thanks again. Of course I understand that those stories need to be Giantess stories, but I find it hard to restrain myself from babbling about the story part too much, I still want everything to make sense and I'm still on the process of learning how to write, so sometimes when I write a chapter, it gets so big that I decide to cut the story and the sexy stuff part in two pieces, like this one. So, I guess there are going to be chapters in the future where I'll write just to move the story along, but still most chapters are going to be about Giantess interaction. Maybe I just need to write longer chapters, so it includes both. 

Also don't worry about being unhelpful or anything lol! I find it that you learn the most from constructive criticism, something which is apparently lacking here. Other than from you and a few others, I don't seem to get many reviews compared to other stories here, even though judging by the read count its popular enough I guess. I still don't know how people feel about this. But oh well, as long as I have the time, I'll write. 

Also, thanks for the suggestions! I'll keep them in mind. :)

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: February 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent work on Chapter 8! I really like how things went! Love how you left things unanswered at the end of it all. It makes the next chapter almost unbearable to wait for!



Author's Response:

There's a lot more to reveal, it's just that I have to think hard about how to do so and keep the integrity of the story intact because afterall this is a GTS story and GTS interaction is the primary theme here. It's definitely a lot harder to write a GTS story with a plot. 

Unfortunately, I have some important exams coming up and I'm not sure if I'll be able to update this until March...

Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 414310
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: February 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

Finally you are back! The newest chapters are so amazing. Very well done in all respects. Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Exploring

Nice!!!! Loved the ending of this chapter!!! Whatever you do, DONT STOP WRITING!

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: December 13 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Goodbye

I'm not sure what you enjoy writing, but I certainly suggest you implement the "grain of salt" idea. Would love to see more ACTUAL "micro" on this site. I dont exactly believe 1 inch, or even 1 cm for that matter, should be considered micro. It's a shame that not that much X/R-rated micro is on this site. However, with all due respect, there's still at least 30% of the total content on this site that I have yet to view. Anyways my point is that so far, I've only come across a handful of noteworthy stories that involve the micro scale and have at least some provocative chapter or scene. My vote is not based off of whether you choose to go this route or not. I already love the story and it's just now starting to pick up!! Excellent job by the way. I cannot wait to read what you come up with next!