Steven needs to know if his wife is cheating on him, but did he think it all out or did he jump the gun?
love, love love love this one <3 unaware transformation rocks. what a great plot.
Hey dude, hope you will do another ass/anus tf story again it is still one of my favorites of the year!!
When a villain shrinks Simon and Jenny and they are unknowingly swallowed by a hot mean girl, they must find a way out of her belly. Can they escape, or will they be digested?
lovin it so far, great cliffhanger, lovin the idea of a bitchy character swallowing totally unaware and digestin them, it's even more humiliating. would be so funny if tommy gets around emma having a chit chat and not the slightest clue his former friends melting away inside of her. lookin forward for the next installation.
Glad you like the premise, thanks!
cant wait to see how its continuing, enjoyed this a lot so far, especially how the girl is a total bitch, would be so badass to see tommy not making it in time or messing things up. one litle plot hole I think though was the time window from the detention to the girl meeting her friends. shouldnt the two be digested by that already, dont know it seemed like there was some hours in between that. but still great work keep it goin dude
Thanks for the review! As for the plot hole, i guess it didn't make it clear enough that it was only a few minutes when Emma walked over to her friends because the evil teacher let her out early now that his job was done. and Simon and Jenny are supposed to be floating on something she ate earlier to prevent them from being digested, but yeah i could probably work on my details better
OMG what a superb finish!! Loving the Tommy chapters the most, the best part was where he shrank by accident the agent, landing on his butt and having a confused look of where the guy went to, then stepping forward and noticing the tiny guy at the bottle opening. I loved the fact so much how Tommy must have leaned forward with a confused face expression, the tiny screaming for help, and then Emma just taking a gulp, and Tommy standing there dumbfoulded just be like "Uh...", so great! And the ending is great too, leading to very interesting plot twist, I guess Tommy wouldnt be too amazed to find out about what Emma recorded.
Thx 4 the review! Glad you liked that scene and for how Tommy reacts to the big news, well itll all be revealed in the new one!
Shrunken Personal In Extreme Situations. When the job seems too big, sometimes you need to think smaller.
loved your newest story! it seemed though a bit short for every fatality mostly because of lack of time and numbers of the spies. would love similiar plots of tf, maybe some spies or single character accidentally or on purpous tf into some object for the mission but ends in an unfortunate way for example as a toilet paper sheet, underwear, a food like a peanute or single oat meal or cereal or cocoa pop, or a flak inside a fish food box and be eaten by a goldfish, a large dog, or even smaller sizes like dust or pepper corn size.
After a shocking reveal that shatters two relationships, Tommy and Simon must make amends at Emma's sleepover party. But things get complicated when they are pursued by a top-secret black ops team and a sexy rogue assassin who wants to eat them all or feed them to the other girls.
verry well done like it a lot so far
Thanks!
He thought he was breaking up with her gently. Now she will break him.
I totally would love to see a second chapter to this, you ended the story at the most inresteing part haha :-) Amazing plot. I've missed some good ass insertion stories, they are too rare to find. I would love to see a second chapter seeing the guy literally becoming a shit particle the size of a dust mite, maybe even include some horribile torture for the dust mite guy like releasing a fart, but not just in an ordinary way, maybe even keep the gas bubble in her rectum while she knew he was inserted before and even shrink more and more over time, totally a 2nd shell of his former self, gagging and vomitting with a white face, getting smaller and literally becoming a shit particle, and a little bit later meet his ex next bowl movement, literally ends the plot for him as a flush in her toilet. You totally have great talent in teasing and writing out a thrilling humiliating plot. I hope youll continue to write after this story. Really enjoyed it (so far).
so hot! what if the son shrinks even more inside her arse. loved the jump in part.
loved the ass plot so much, please more!! especially the toilet part was soo good. and her farting and the son totally gaging and vomitting, and became totally list in her arse. totally adding and following, great work. I like unaware ass plots the most!!
Two teens enjoy their yearly back yard campout until waking up tiny the morning after.
wowser, lovin this. i love male stories so good to see them still exist. the site gives option to post them but this is a gts community 99% so. really hot plot man.
A very stinky punishment for a deserving step-son.
What a fantastic second chapter! This story totally is now a favorite of mine. I have not read such amazing ass plot in a long time. The details, pure humiliation, irony and toilet humor is just perfect, please continue like this!! I totally can't think of any criticism, except the boy maybe could had cursed and mocked his step mother after her asking him with a "smile" how his sleep was, and her totally getting annoyed and pissed even more. and him be like no no wa- Im sor-...
I loved so much how you have a great talent of filling the plot and describe the moment. So many authors on here rush and never write out details or enviroments. Your details of what's going on inside the rectum is awesome!! The part where he stick out his head out of the turd and was greated by a "kiss" of her rectal wall, amazing. Things like this totally make the whole plot vivid and the reader can drift into it.
I like the sarcasm of the step mother so much with her dark, evil characteristic, and how she seems to enjoy and like to torture her step son.
The part of her masturbating through her queef canal feeling for her son through inside in her rectum and kneading through, fantastic idea!! And how it lead to the boy having an orgasm too by his penis gets stimulated and erect, so good, so humiliating. Him being in hell and having an orgasm inside his step mothers rectum...
There are so many possibilities of more torture how this could go on. I would love seeing him shrink somehow more, maybe the step mother is behind it or even worse, unaware about it. And the boy becomes a mere "shit speck" lost inside her rectum. And even when his dust particle body would emerge embedded inside a turd she wouldnt see him anymore because of his tiny size. This could be extended so great of his speck body glued on her anus while wiping, a toilet paper pressed to her anus and the poor boy inside between the shit stained paper and her anus, and then she would fart hard against the boy and paper, pressing the toilet paper a bit later inside and drifting it around, letting her anal ring blossom like a flower and swallow the speck again.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. Please write on. It was so much fun already :]
Yes!! Finally some great ass plot again. This is the best scat based ass insertion plot Ive read in a while, in a long time... The details are amazing. Please continue!! The shrinking size is good too. I would love nano sizes even more of him shrinking further to the size of dust particle or ant size and become an ass parasite.
Mira is just a 17 Year old Senior in High School, who finally is getting her Wish for her Birthday: A Large Scaled Slumber Party, and the best part is..Mira's parents are out for 3 weeks!! The Problem? Mira has two little Brothers, Adam and Noah, who just so happened to invite 3 of their friends over, Jake, Josh, and Lucas.
What does Mira do? she decides to make them a shrinking meal, so they won't bother Mira and her 6 Friends, however, theres an Even WORSE Problem, or, make that two: They didn't even PLAN to bother them, and 2? Miras brother and friends are Shrunken and helpless against Mira and her unaware friends..
Why hasnt this like 1 star rating? The plot is total nonsense, the grammer is horrible and the chapters are like 200 words long. Why Are you Writing every 2nd word in every Sentence in Capital Letters? Stop That Please. Thank You
um, you DO know that this is my first story on this site right? I'm merely a freaking beginner, and honestly, I thank you for the critisism, because it helps me improve.
So I bring a new addition to my Penny series for any fans of my work that might be out there. Today is a gruesome ironic story of a mother and father fated to have an encounter of the cruelest kind. Beware the Penny, do not speak the magic word, and try not to get cursed.
Of course the story can be enjoyed stand alone without prior knowledge to the series. So enjoy.
Ah, yes! Loved it as usual, nice to see you write again. Really good ending, I wonder what the fathers consciousness was after this, him "split" into several pieces, most of them being reduced to a soupy paste in his daughters digestive tract and becoming her poop, some of it stuck in her womb, a tiny bit of it swallowed by the dog, some juices of him soaked up by her panties. This is the hottest thrilling thought of the story in my oppinion. Great idea of the mother panically calling her daughter and its turned off. You come up with the best plots. Welcome back man.
Thanks for the compliments, as for the status of her father, I leave that up to all the readers immagination.
This is a response to Lumberpanda's "Shrunk in a factory" challenge. A man somehow gets shrunk while working in a factory producing feminine hygeine products. The hapless victim ends up where you'd expect.
Even this isnt tagged as transformation and it's no real transformation, I still love it and see it like it. I am a huge fan of TF combined with unfortunate endings, humiliation, shrinking, watersports, scat, irony and sarcasm. For your first story this is amazing, Really brilliant and unique plot idea. Good TF plots are so damn rare on here, keep it up man. One issue I saw though was, you said he was shrunk half his size by the shrinking light? That wouldnt really get him the size of a tampon, no? I also like smaller shrinking sizes way more, though this totlaly got my attention and will follow it. I would love seeing you write more in the future, maybe get on the TF train, someone turning into a single sheet of toilet paper, or inside the back area of some panties. Totally looking forward for chapter 2!! Giving you 10 stars for this, because I found it so damn hot to read the shrinking and "tf" part of the unfortunat eguy becoming a tampon.
He held onto the pole, and so spent much longer in the light than usual. :)
Thank you for the kind comments.
A short stop at a motorway services ends badly the following day.
Loved the plot. would you maybe write a story about a girl "flushing" her ex-boyfriend, of him shrunk to ant size and she inserted him in her ass and let a turd embedd him in a horrible death. I really like humiliation, micro/nano shrinking and scat, not too many good stories out there like that.
You wake up one morning shrunk to half a centimetre and in the bedroom of one of your male classmates. Then that night, some interesting things happen with him and his twin sister...
Interesting tags, I doubt though this story will be continued. Surprise me for the better.
I shall :)
A Film Studio, a shady director, and an unknown shrink factor. This is a world in which the famous actors start as nobodies. And the nobodies of the world are the unknown actors who never become famous. Here in this Studio, Director Jack Thomas puts on a show that his clientele are interested in. Shows where the Actors think their alone, when their anything butt.
Todays participants come from just next door today. And boy are they in for a treat!
So please proceed up the stairs after I buzz you in, for this story, you may choose the right or left door, it's your choice. But if you choose to leave, make sure you stop by for the complimentary free lunch first, to give your complaint to me, the Chef.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
That would be sweet actually, I totally believe in it happening sooner or later :') Nice little adding you did there!!
huge fan of your work, especially the first stuiod plot is one of my favorites stories. Sadly this one wasn't much for my taste. I hope you still will write in the future. I love your penny series more than anything. I would love seeing some nano/micro size shrinking or tf taking place, some vore with digestion. Your last penny plot with the cucumber was one of the hottest plots I ever read. would love seeing some food tf or some anus tf. keep it up.
Thanks a lot GTSFan91! Seeing a review helps me to write more. This story was something I wanted to try and be creative with, but alas it was half written when I was horribly sleep deprived, was rushed and failed to be edited properly. Today I tried to correct this, so hopefully you might like it slightly better now? Anyways I'm sure eventually I'll write something again which you will absolutely love. But anyways thanks again for the review look forward to more stories when I can get the time to write them.