He must have really upset her at that party last night. Or she's just a merciless bitch. Either way, he never thought his relationship would end with such a mess.
Oh my o0 This was one of the best stories Ive read in a while on here... Thank you SO MUCH for sharing it!! Good and well written scat + micro plots are literally died out on here, sadly. This story reminds me a lot of one of the best series ever created: http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2151
I would love seeing you write more!! You just have to. You're mostly the only author left right now in this genre, and I miss reading good plots like this one. Would love seeing an unaware story maybe, with some digestion, ass insertion. I love your kind of humor and irony so much mixed with a very dark touch, please more like this.
Fantastic story.
Thanks for the kind words! Yes, this is definitively my style- no happy endings and the girl working up a healthy body count is really what I go for.
My name is Andrew, I'm married to Lucy two years, have no children, took a good life. One day I was returning from the service when meeting a candy seller at the lighthouse, she sells me a candy and says he has special powers. I did not, I ate sweets and went home. On Next, I woke up and something was different. Huddled next to my gigantic wife without her knowledge.
I don't want to be rude, but what the heck is this? I didn't read much because I couldnt find a single sentence I understood. Grammar all wrong, logic meaning, nothing makes sense. I guess your mother language isn't English, so like mine. But Geez... Or did you use Google translator?
Yes, google tradutor.
Rewrite it than in English or find someone doing it for you. It's totally not readable in this form, sadly.
Six friends break into the home of a shrewd businesswoman while she is at work, hoping to net themselves quite a haul. However, they find themselves shrunken while inside; even worse, the lady of the house returns very soon after...
well done. I like 1 shot plots if done right way more than short chapter based stories where the author maybe never will continue. would love to see more like this in the future.
Thank you. :)
I think both have a sort of appeal, but I do agree that it's a letdown when an author starts a longer story but basically abandon it. Admittedly, I'm guilty of doing that myself, but I do fully intend to get back to updating them.
In a world where a small percentage of the population falls victim to a shrinking disorder, one teenager gives in to her darker desires.
And then convinces her friend to do so as well.
I have a new favorite story now <3
Sorry for the double post, I just had to write this. The critism of Chozo is total nonense, why? He comes up with some "logic inconsistencies", I can understand if they were plot issues, but he uses examples which are totally fine in a story like this. Seriously? This is a shrinking story... Also, where does a shrunken person "travel through someone's digestive system" in the plot? It is totally plausible there is breathable air in the stomach or even the small intestine, it's not a vacuum... it's the same atmosphere than outside, and nothing in there exhausted the o2 or produces co2. So a shrunken person, regard the fact, that a shrunken person couldnt breath at all becaue of the change of size of the atoms..., ooh logic flaw..., could be able to breath in there, and if the stomach's exit "gulped" air with it, there would be some in the small intestine too, like gas bubbles.
Also the part of "would have been better if Madison had eaten her siblings unknowingly" is nonsense too, because that happens in 99% of the other stories on here, and it's fun to read something like this.
It really all comes down to suspension of disbelief. Some are willing to accept a certain number of liberties, but not others. He's entitled to his opinion, and I don't hold any ill will towards him if he wasn't able to enjoy the story due to a coincidence too many, or some other details that annoyed him.
Thank you for defending my piece, though, and I appreciate your kind words.
In the not so distant future humanity conquers the speed of light, but at a cost. Anyone wanting to travel in hyperspace must shrink to nearly microscopic proportions. A deep space flight program is created and the new Micronauts are humanity's most extreme explorers. This story follows one Micornaut's journey to the stars.
This is one of the longest non shrinking intros Ive seen so far on here. Well done! I love longer stories actually. I just hope youll stick around and finish this story. It would suck if you just stop after "nothing" interessting happened :-) Hope the mid and final parts are at least as long as the intro is.
Adam tries to get his girlfriend a gift that neither of them will forget
Fantastic new story! Had to save this one in my favorite story folder. I liked the ending so much of him going through it over and over again in a loop, what a fantastic nightmarish hell "hole". The part with her secret lover was so hot, especially of the panties in between them. So happy to see you wrote again and then bam, you came back with an explosion. I don't agree on the reviews of people asking for him becoming a insole or shoe thats so boring, and so many lame stories like that already exists... why cant people stop trying to destroy the rare jewels like the ones you create? Hope you stay on the way more erotic and twisted TF around a girls ass or even worse, going inside of it. Keep writing. FAV!
This story follows Allie as she enters the Tiny Adult Film industry. Along the way she is forced to make some diffcult moral decisions.
Brandon trys to uncover some dirty on one of his victims, but he shoud be careful at what he might find.
hot. wouldhve been so ironic if the bully actually turned into the boys anus, and how he would vomit out of his "mouth" every time the boy had a bowl movement, or sits in class in his tight jeans having to go through hell for the rest of his life.
The part with the boy letting his dick rest in the "toys" ass over night was the best. Can't think of something more humiliating and as an act of power over someone or something.
how all brandons friends, the girl he wanted to bang so badly, all "betrayed" him, that was just great. will there be another chapter?
A girl wakes up, unsure of where she is or how she got there. However, she soon realizes that she's not as big as she used to be.
hope the story becomes more cruel, the tags suggest it but it was a bit too mild for my taste so far. I like it more dirty and people suffering, keep it up
I love unaware ass inseriton and humiliation parts the most. Enjoyed reading a lot so far.
After Claudia's same-sex relationship with Karey is exposed, she seeks revenge with the help of a shrink ray... Meanwhile, Tommy and the new Rays Club continue to work on solving the grand conspiracy behind it all.
hope to see more soon. always loved your work
Thanks! Nice to see you back!
Sammy is bullied in school all the time by the upperclassmen. What kind of revenge will he seek when giving the power to do so?
Another gorgeous chapter. So good outplayed and well thought. I always liked the love struggles Sammy goes though, it is like a true story. And the cinema idea was a good one especially with the popcorn eating, and I even remember some teens did this to me too. Rude!!! And I can't get enough of bullies get what they deserve, this one literally had a shitty end in sight, eehh. I have to say i enjoy your chapters the most, where the transformed bad guys stay living, like in some eternal hell, that is soo much better. I also thought of for a second one ending as Lucas poo the other as Sammys ehh.
totally still wish you come back maybe after the summer break, and if autumn begins or winter, and you may have write again. this story is just too awesome.
Great start into the new year, happy to see you write on. The story is one of my favorites and I enjoyed the sex scene a lot. So ironic how Sammy isnt aware it wasnt his best friend. And just Bobbys shitty gf ends like this. Wish to see way more chapters in the future, and you keep the mood, this was really well written and had better length than 99% of the usual plots on here. Could you maybe do more of the panties tf of the victim stay inside without fading to nothingness. That was so great. I would also enjoy some pure object tf too like the panties, or part of an object. Fleshlight would be a good one, another condom, toilet paper, little part of a boxers. Maybe get another teacher to "vanish", or some bullies. I liked the idea of the party and Sammys fear of it. Maybe have some bullies invite him but this time it goes horrible, at least at first for Sammy.
loved it espescially the vore and food tf
Oh noes the story is finished! ha. it was a great one. I have totally put it on my fav list and you should write a sequel or something else with Sammy maybe, he was so cute and how he acted and all just made the plot so great. But also the bullies and bad guys ending as his waste or worse was totally deserved and also made the plot great of him being unaware. The ending was a bit disapointing but still, overall, amazing story.