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Summary:

Two students get more than they bargained for in a game of love, control, and domination. 


Categories: New World Order, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Futanari, Gentle, Violent, Slave, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/m, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37120 Read Count: 72928
[Report This] Published: December 29 2018 Updated: February 16 2019
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Date: February 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Cat and the Mouse

Damn it!

Can't a small prey enjoy one, ONE, movie ? 

Anyway... Another excellent chapter. What interest me the most is that apparently, Futanaris are a rather novel thing in this world. I wonder then who will end with Rembrandt. I can't see a trio ending with them, but it'll be a funny ride anyway.

Please, keep going !

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Date: February 15 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Virgin Lost

Oh God... it's the future ! Someone fucked up and added some extra-spice to the MAJORS and some girls ended with dick! Damn it!

I hope it's not the Matthewson Foundation's doing. But then again, with how much Shannon love having an anal on ALejandro, I could see her pushing for women being able to grow a penis...

By the way, if you ever want to use any of them, I have some names already set for Shannon and 'Rando's children. Grand-children and all the rest are fair games, so run wild if you feel like it :) !



Author's Response:

The future???...You're imagining things. I haven't typed "MAJOR" once. "Matthewson" is a very common name. There's no one we know with the initials I.I.! Any similarities you've observed are just because I'm uncreative. 

[Report This] Published: January 22 2019 Updated: August 20 2020
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Date: January 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Odds

An excellent story, even if I'm kind of afraid of what it'll turn into, now that Jason has appeared.

I'm a big softy at heart, and I don't want Ben stuck as a dust mite when Jason and Heather e probably ending playing Gods together. 

Well, we'll see how it turns out I guess, so keep the good work coming ! :)



Author's Response:

I make no promises, of course. But I do always root for the little guy :)

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Date: July 21 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Odds

Another excellent chapter.

I can't help but wonder what would happen if Ben said to Heather that it was over between them, because he saw how she clearly was attracted to Jason.

But I know that whatever you'll write will be incredible so I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Summary:

A story about a human living in a world where the Police are all Giantesses. He gets convicted of a crime and sentenced to death or live as a slave. He chooses life as a slave to hopefully prove his innocence against beings that are never wrong. He may regret his decision...


Categories: Incest, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57367 Read Count: 79929
[Report This] Published: June 09 2019 Updated: March 19 2020
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Date: June 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Usually, cruelty isn't my cup of tea at all. But here it works smoothly because of the larger story and the development of the characters, who aren't just shallow asses.

I wonder, however, how the truth will break out. I guess the true criminal could have hacked into the house cameras - if there is any - and send it for the world to see. It would utterly destroy the Giantesses image of benevolent and wise rulers and qhatter the souls of the two main women of the story. In any case, it seems that the end is nigh and I can't wait to read it.

Summary:

A story of life and love and a bunch of things actually. The sequel to MAJOR/minor and probably Rembrandt Logan too honestly or whatever who really gives a shit right? 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41089 Read Count: 184590
[Report This] Published: February 22 2021 Updated: May 01 2022
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Date: February 24 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Hey sandman579 ! I can only speak from my pov, but Howard's take was totally based on how I understood NotSirk main's story ! But also, NotSirk's stories are the main canon, whatever isn't picked up there doesn't happen as far as I'm concerned ^^



Author's Response:

Don't sell yourself short Kuro! Your stories are great contributions to the MAJOR/minor universe! Stuff I couldn't even think of. 

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Date: January 31 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: SIZE/disparity

Stellar chapter. I feel bad for Rose. magnolia ? Magnolia Rose ? The big giantess, Elliot's mom. I hope that at some point, she'll be able to break and armor and really show her son how much she loves him and she wouldn't trade him for the world. Hopefully it wouldn't necessitate him being in danger, it'd be great for Mom to do so in a more subdued way (perhaps sharing an evening watching something Elliot wants to see and opening up at that moment?). 

Can't wait to read more.

Also, is Hilda the only decent member of her family ?

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Date: January 29 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Mother's Duty

Bloody hell !

Rose's almost twice as tall as Shannon... TWICE !? That's a CYCLO among CYCLOS XD


Greta to have one more chapter of this story by the way ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you! Rose is pretty tall but I also think CYCLOS may appear taller than they seem in this regard. 

Money Matters by fosmat Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

In a society where the amount of tax you pay determines your size, Drew must learn to survive within his growing world and find a way to get his life back on track before he dwindles down too far beyond repair.

After an injustice is cast upon him, he just might have a plan.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49311 Read Count: 125447
[Report This] Published: September 12 2021 Updated: December 03 2021
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Date: October 23 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Party Time

Should have started commenting here because the chapters are all excellent. It rekindled my drive to write, even if I don't think I can compare myself to that level of technique !

 

Really feel sorry for poor Drew - he was probably a little intoxicated himself with all the alcohol he got on him and breathed, plus the whole insane situation. And even felt a tinge of pity for Casey : peoples of her bracket and above are such dicks that the idea of forging something with them beyond a few friendship with the dumbest ones like Ariel seems all but impossible. Obviously she'd end being attracted by Drew in a way. He fulfils all her fantasies and then some.

If I had to hazard a guess, I'd say that Drew's situation will remain largely the same until the next census. Casey won't be able to bring him there of course, since his friends will probably at least have filled a missing person report. And Taylor will probably have reached another milestone, perhaps even entering Casey's bracket? Giantess rescue mission and a kaiju battle, with Drew looking at them in the distance while telling the earrings men "Let them fight" ?

A man can dream XD



Author's Response:

Very flattering, thank you!

The amount of alcohol that was spilled on him may have helped the fact too haha. 

It really is tough for Casey, would be difficult having to live around such pretentious people. Seems like she certainly sees something in Drew she's never seen before.

Drew has had no way to earn any money so I wonder what will happen at next census, if he even makes it to next census...

Lmao Taylor vs Casey would be great. 

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Date: November 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Shitty Day

Oh boy ... I hope Drew will be able to calm down Casey and convince her to actually help him in his mission...

Meanwhile it seems Austin is fuelling Taylor's god complex ! Will she turn into a nutty because of him ?



Author's Response:

If Drew can make it back to Casey I'm sure they're about to have a very interesting conversation. 

Hmm, she better not let that undivided affection get to her head.

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Date: November 17 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Little Errand

Golly, Susan's really completely insane. Like, Joker-level crazyness. She basically married someone just to remain tall. Like, what the fuck?

I hope Casey will get revenge for her dad and will also grew up figuratively - and literally - in future chapters !



Author's Response:

Susan definitely has a few screws loose... let's chalk it up to a bad upbringing. Does explain why Casey is a bit out there too haha.

Not sure how much room Casey has left to grow but I'd bet she is gonna put her all into getting revenge.

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Date: November 29 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Mundane Memories

Ouch. 

I wonder who shrank who...

Also Taylor's will get more than a little obsessed with her little sub, won't she ?





Author's Response:

Who knows...

It does seem like Taylor's enjoying the attention huh.

Summary:

The sequel to Omega: Inheritance.

Lexi returns home two years after wrongful punishment in the hands of her titanic adoptive sister Bridget, ready to make things right again by any means necessary.


Categories: Vore, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 96497 Read Count: 70949
[Report This] Published: October 20 2021 Updated: March 17 2024
Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: December 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

After having mulled over it it seems that one of the reviewers of Inheritance was right when he (or she) suspected that Bridget was done with being an Enforcer.

It even seems possible that she is done with believing in the dream of Kayla and thus her situation is all the more painful : her individuality doesn't believe that Betas are inherently good, that Omegas also are and that Alphas are an unpredictable variant... But the Fire in her does.

Sanctuary also seems to raise an important question : what do you do with immortal half-gods who have, for whatever reason, stopped believing in the Dream of Kayla ? And how many are there after barely a century or so of existence for the Omegas ? 

Perhaps it's precisely their hability to still relate to humans around them (mostly Alphas but also Betas) in a human way which hurts and compromise them, in which case it means that the older and more detached they'll become, the less they will be prone to this sort of rejection of the Fire.

Which is worrying in itself of course. Both because even younger Omegas may have difficulties dealing with their older peers and because it'll make the world order more set in stone and unable to evolve as needed.



Author's Response: Interesting thoughts. Bridget has indeed not been doing any Enforcing since the incident.

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Date: July 25 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Catch

Okay, so Lexi HAS a death wish XD 

Another stellar chapter, I feel so bad for Bridget and damn, I was afraid for Lexi even. I can't wait to see what'll happen now :)



Author's Response: She's definitely willing to take risks when it matters

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Date: May 25 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Kin

Stellar work, as always. I honestly wondered what Alma's role would be in this story when we started focused on her and Jenna - who really is both frightening and distasteful as a human being also, but I wonder if it is her fault of a sad result of how Omega were created. 

I'll be interesting to see Lexi going to seek out Bridget now, even if I expect her sister to still put up quite a fight instead of giving in to her wish to come back home.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. And yes, it's a fair guess that the story's not just going to end happily ever after right there as soon as Lexi and Bridget are in a chapter together.

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Date: February 08 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Visitation

God damnit, I almost missed two chapters in a row ! What a dunce I am !

Another stellar chapter (well, chapters). A little surprised we aren't seeing more of Bridget since I kind of expected her to have a bigger role since she had a whole chapter to herself as soon as the second one, but I can honestly live with that because this story is just too well written to be mad at anything.

Like, each Omega got a real depth just from the way they stood in comparison to Lexi. And that last bit about Bridget breaking down because of what Lexi said, which was meant to be something positive ? I'am crying, I ain't lying about it !

I can't wait to see the two of them reunited, and also I'm pretty sure that they have more than sisterly love - at least Bridget has. I alreayd kind of felt that way in the original story, that she acted more like a scorned lover than anything else, but here? That's cementing it for me, that's my headcanon from now on/



Author's Response: It definitely is mainly Lexi on her own in this earlier part of the story, but Bridget will still have a major role to come. Thanks for reading.

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Date: November 29 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Trees

Oh the goosbumps ! 

I guess it's only natural for Lexi to feel like that about Evelyn who, in the end, never hurt her directly. Also, it seems she suffered quite the odreal during all those months trying to hold to her dignity until she realized there was no shame using Kayla's money.

But damn... Bridget in Sanctuary ? It feels like she still is in a mental health facility then...



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: November 12 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Nightmare

I'm less harsh on Bridget that some of you for a few reasons :

  • Kayla's the one who created the Omegas to be biased toward Betas and unrelenting
  • Bridget is a young Omega who believed wholeheartedly on the system in place - which was crafted by her parent's generation
  • She probably shared Evelyn's idea that something had never been dealed with and healed about Lexi's past and that it had simply accumulated until she broke
  • Lexi didn't live with them for quite some time and while they were close it's entirely possible she fell in with a bad crowd who had ignited something bad in her
  • Finally, the sad idea that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree can have played a part

All that isn't to say that what she did was okay. It wasn't. But when you're inside a system and that you benefit from it (and let's not beat around the bush, Omegas benefit tremendously from it, what with being immortal half-gods and all that) it's extremely hard to see the flaws and even more to correct them or oppose the system.

Now, unrelated to it, I'm extremely intruiged by the fact that Lexi's the one seeking out and the Instant Size Change tag. I've got two ideas around it : either Lexi will ask Kayla to make her a Beta because she wants to entirely sever her ties with Alma, or Bridget will ask to be made an Alpha, even temporarily, to try and better understand her sister.

Also, I still maintain that Bridget's not loving Lexi only like a sister.



Author's Response: You bring up good points. Lexi suffered much more than Bridget in the last story, but Bridget also was never meant to feel like a villainous force. The instant size change tag will definitely have an important part, or even part(s), in this story

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Date: November 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

Well now wasn't it worth the wait ? 

There is something quite interesting in Bridget's guilt crafting this sort of nightmare because, in a sense, it could well be the way Omegas would go, down the line. If they live, say, ten thousand years, how will they see Alphas ?

Betas are protected by the Fire but Alphas aren't. I guess this story will be exploring what drives the Omegas and will force them to confront ugly truths about themselves. I do wonder how far you went just for the title alone, honestly !

I'll probably read this chapter several times over in the 'ext few days but I can say it was supremelly interesting to see that even after two years Bridget can still suffer so much from her guilt... And that she can still try to wring a martyr complex out of it.

Can't wait to see Lexin confronting her sister just to make her understand that her so called penance is just a way to avoid dealing with the consequences of her actions.

Also, quite intriguing that Bridget wasn't offered some excellent psychiatrists. I suspect a part of her do believe Alphas are impure and Betas are innocence. The Fire in her talking perhaps. But you'd expect her kind to want her back in good shape sooner rather than later. As it is, it's almost as if Omegas didn't know how to deal with that trauma and are thus loosing a previouy excellent Enforcer who is, clearly, not fit for the job right now.



Author's Response: Interesting thoughts. I do think it's likely that Bridget would've been offered help, but either refused it, or attempted and found it didn't help.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed
Date: October 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

What's great is that you know you're reading a Jacksmith story when you read an answer to a review and you can simultaneously "Don't you dare go that road!" and want to see it played out at the same time. 

Yeah, I'd be done for a vengeful Lexi a little, if only because seeing a Omega squirming to try and get forgiven would be interesting !

Keep up the good work Sir, you're an inspiration to many here :) !



Author's Response:

Thanks very much