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GH-X2 by imagin8 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: GH-X2 Universe & Spin-Offs
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 138078 Read Count: 789968
[Report This] Published: September 12 2013 Updated: March 23 2024
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: May 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Hmm, see i would have to say that when i use the words "cunt" and "bitch", that i use it for both males and females, not really using it for its "intended" gender. And I am in no way a 'macho male' nor am i 'secure' in myself as it seems you believe, they're just my go-to words for when i'm upset; though i'm not angry per se, I guess i'd describe it as a slight agitation at best. And as for why i use those specific words, it's influenced by where i live, not by my outlook on women (i'm writing this bit due to the "because she's "just" a women" bit). As someone who has been around a lot of women, having also been bullied by women, i must say that regardless of someone's gender, both have the capacity and means to hurt; an example i'll give, is a woman that was shorter than me, smaller frame, though much more ferocity, managed to easily beat me to the ground and proceed to kick me (though for no other reason discernibly, than the fact i do not fight back); so forgive me if i'm sounding a tad defensive, but you seem to have interpretted a lot more from my message than was actually there, and seemed to have assumed a lot about myself from it. I'm from an Australian culture, where everyone uses "cunt" for literally everything, and "bitch" as an adjective towards anything; I don't believe for a second that women are any "lesser" than men, nor do i have the mindset that "if some bitch attacked me i could deal with it" mindset. Though i can see how there may have been things that lead you to believe this about me, and my message being as short and brash as it is, would definitely not give any reason to think of me in a positive light, i must stress that you're looking too much into what isn't there and making too many assumptions about me as a person. 

Though you are right that it is very interesting to see how we perceive the difference in impact in comparison to a giantess decimating an entire city, versus this one on one interaction. Though i honestly must say that i don't read often on this site, I cannot handle the very unreaslistic reactions and developments that are rampant in this community, mainly due to how detached i feel from it, nor do i watch much film, so i don't have a built up familiarity with these kinds of gratuitous actions and gruesome developments in terms of story or otherwise.

As for Jack being hard to project into, i'd have to disagree, i find it easy to relate with jack, maybe it's because i've been in a situation where those bigger than me have 'dominated' over me, and i reacted in a similar way. So it's incredibly easy for me at least, to project into this story and be drawn in, though of course, it's not easy to imagine this specific situation. 

But yes, that was me saying 'well done', you've definitely made an interesting story, and i think that you've done really, really well in terms of how you've written it out. 



Author's Response:

Cheers!

(I wasn't singling you out for criticism or anything, there have been a few reviews along the same lines - I just chose to talk about it in your reply as it had been a while since someone had called Caitlin a bitch directly in their review).

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: May 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

This is extremely fucked up, but it possesses such talent. I'm a mixture of emotions, on one hand, well fucking done with writing what you have, it's brilliant, but on the other hand; FUCKING HELL, what a bithc, amber is a cunt, i want them both severely injured. 

All i can say is this is fucking amazing, and amazingly fucked. 



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Thank you, I think!

It's fascinating for me to read the comments from people who get supremely angry and frustrated at Caitlin's (and Amber's) actions, and don't get me wrong, it's very flattering that the depiction is powerful enough to bring out such a response. It's meant to be hard to put yourself in Jack's shoes; Caitlin's psychotic - the kidnapping, the forced sexual stuff (rape), the casual disregard for his emotional and physical wellbeing - it's brutal. Horrible things like this do happen in real life, with the genders reversed notably. Most horror films, or cinema that has difficult-to-watch torture or rape scenes (I dunno, gangster movies, psychological thrillers etc) will go way beyond this level of discomfort for the viewer. I acutely dislike blood-letting, serious injury and dismemberment, some lines would need to be crossed here for anything like that to occur. I'm also not so sure it's 100% 'fucked up' to depict this; it's an exploration of a reality within a universe where there are a few vulnerable half-size men, and this is something that I predict would happen in that context.

A lot of 'evil' giantess fiction I've read deals with women who destroy cities with buildings full of innocent lives, or torture, crush and eat shrunken tinies who are curiously tolerant of these capital offences for the sake of their fetish. I don't mean this in a disparaging way at all, it's just really interesting that when the giant is big enough, or the tiny small enough, that the psychology and humanity of it isn't as noticeable. That's kinda the crux of this size ratio, and this scenario - Caitlin and Jack are almost at a liveable scale difference (imagine a very tall woman and a real life homunculus or dwarf) so it is quite visceral and 'real' to see prejudices and abuse depicted on someone more 'human' in scale to the person mistreating them.

In terms of the 'karma' you hint at, and the very gender-specific insults you've thrown at Caitlin and Amber - this is very, very easy to do from the position of a full-grown 'macho' male, secure in the knowledge that if some 'bitch' attacked you, you'd be able to teach her a lesson or whatever. This is not the case for Jack, these aren't bitches and cunts who are inferior to him (I hate those words used in this context, but I can appreciate why you're using them), it's almost genderless, he's a tiny animal unable to protect himself from much larger, stronger animal, whether they're female or not. That's the horror, he finds her incredibly attractive, but she's debasing him, does that make it ok, does it even make it LESS ok than if an Alpha man kidnapped him, because she's *just* a woman?

Anyway, just my thoughts on it. Thanks for the comment.

. by GTS33 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23 Read Count: 295697
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: March 13 2015
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: January 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: 1

This is a really nice story, well done



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you keep reading it to the end.

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: January 29 2015 Title: Chapter 14: 14

looking forward to ore man

Summary:

Rick, a young and jaded NYC lawyer, becomes fed up with life. Things take an interesting twist though when he meets a woman with magical powers at a bar.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41127 Read Count: 294642
[Report This] Published: December 14 2014 Updated: August 08 2015
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: January 25 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Outlook Changed

Great story man/woman, it's been really cool to read, and really nice to see a story that doesn't just have wooden characters.



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm also glad that you liked the characters. Without them, I would have zero motivation to write a sequel. P.S: I'm a man, not a woman in case you were curious.

Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2426817
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: October 24 2015 Title: Tom's Story

This has to be one of the greater narratives that has been graced upon this site. It's got a lovely sense of characters and development, while still mixing in great amounts of Gts material. Honestly well done, looking forward to the next lot of chapters.

Summary:

Dean's happy highschool life is over and he has to grown up faster than he planned, while his friends are off to college he must stay and work to help the family. When he upsets the wrong girl he quickly finds that his friends leaving is the least of his problems.

 

It's a slow shrink, but it's immediately unaware which I hope makes up for that.


Categories: BBW, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10812 Read Count: 95465
[Report This] Published: August 01 2015 Updated: May 30 2016
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: September 10 2016 Title: Chapter 6: A touching moment

I would love to see this continue, though i know how busy life can get; so at the very least i hope all is well for you. Thanks for what you've done so far.

Summary:

A day in the life of a compulsive liar who just happens to exist in a world where failing to tell the truth results in shrinking, leaving him at the mercy of his family, friends, and teachers.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Truth or Shrink
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27818 Read Count: 316887
[Report This] Published: August 27 2015 Updated: December 22 2015
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: November 23 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run

You're doing amazingly well, it's got simple yet descriptive language; some really strong plot development (in terms of how characters feel and interact with Tom).

 

My biggest question if i had any qualm with this, is that i can't see where it's going; it might still be too early in the story, but it seems to be very repetitive in terms of how all the angrier characters are like "you're small, that angers me" and then proceeds with otherwise great depictions of punishment; so i guess what i'm asking is what are your plans for this story? will we see this godess of truth?

 

Past that, it's one of the best stories i've read.



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it. We're actually much closer to the end than the beginning here. I hope it doesn't seem too repetitive; every character has a slightly different reaction to Tom's actions, even if they all enjoy playing with him to some extent. The last chapter will give a better picture of the point of all this.

Summary:

You harness a magical power to transform into absolutely anything, only what will you transform into?


Categories: Vore, Object, Giantess, Butt, Unaware, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1478 Read Count: 23058
[Report This] Published: December 12 2015 Updated: December 14 2015
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: December 14 2015 Title: Chapter 2: "Time to change"

Alright, review round two, I think this time I'll be more objective. Firstly, As with chapter 1, there is still an absence of detail, there is no description of smell, taste, touch, there is sight but it's too basic, describe the rooms/bodies to a bit more depth.


For example; the man shoving his erection into the plastic body, there could have been a better build up, maybe a description on what it's like inside of the box, the smell of plastic, the rigidity of the body, the panic or nausea that might've taken place in more descriptive detail. If it were something like "I could only see the dirt covered vinyl of the floor, the mans large hand gripped my back harshly making my body erupt in pain." it paints a slightly clearer picture in a sentence, whereas I literally cannot picture a thing in this chapter, it's too vague. 


The length is arguably toshort for what is meant to be a normal story; a short story this may be fine, but it skips into too many different places and interacts with too many people to be considered a short story. In which case, you need to give some expansion to what you're trying to write, this is in my opinion, middle school writing level; which I think makes it seem even more seeming that you're not trying. If you were to again, even just expand on the details further I think the length may just barely skim being ok for what you're trying to accomplish. 


Overall, maybe I'm being too harsh, and I would hope you take this with a pinch of salt like all internet criticisms should be; past that, hopefully the next chapter sees something promising.



Author's Response:

 A few things. 1) I'm having to retake english for a third time I'm sorry that i'm not an A* student, 2) What the hell is middle school? and 3) I do this in free time which is not very often so I don't have time to do much for this so i'm sorry if it's rushed.

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: December 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I've never said you needed to be an A student, i ain't an A student, all i want is to see description, which is the basis for a story. I will admit however, that if you are doing this in spare time, then sure, it will impact the quality; in which case, maybe don't post as quickly and clean and expand chapters before posting; better to release a good chapter a week than a bad chapter a day. 

Middle school is before highschool; it's primary level. In reflection, that's a little harsh, but i'm trying to get a point across.

I'll leave this alone from now on, i believe that i'll honestly just end up being a thorn in your side, and frankly it benefits neither of us; in which case, i would again hope you've taken all with a pinch of salt, and have a good day/night.

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: December 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Look, i'll be very frank, i dislike this story. It feels as if no effort has been put in, it isn't that creative, it doesn't really depict anything in detail, and is honestly quite dull in general. I'm sorry if this annoys you, but it really feels like you haven't tried at all.

Summary:

Ethan tells the readers a story about his view of the world and how it and he himself developed throughout time. He reveals his secret fascinations and what experiences he made because of them.


Categories: Insertion, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Mouth Play, Unaware, Entrapment, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52257 Read Count: 359686
[Report This] Published: December 30 2015 Updated: February 28 2016
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: January 04 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Struggling with Reality

I'm really digging this story, it's really well done man, I hope you keep up with it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much it's comments like this one which keep me motivated! I'm pretty slow in writing right now but will release the first part of the next chapter today.

Summary:

It was a normal day for you when your parents decided to go to London and all alone with a Maid, what could go wrong?


Categories: Vore, Butt, Crush, Feet, Legwear, Lesbians, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 878 Read Count: 15466
[Report This] Published: June 13 2016 Updated: June 13 2016
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: June 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The shrink

i won't read that, i appreciate that you've tried to add to the community; but please use some punctuation. Use paragraphs, sentences with comma's, uuse something that allows this to have readability. 

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 

Drake Dobson stumbles onto a strange object that his best friend has found. Unfortunately for Drake, the object was not so user friendly to him.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Unaware, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71285 Read Count: 495494
[Report This] Published: July 07 2016 Updated: December 30 2017
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: July 14 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Mind if I Butt In?

This is great so far, looking forward to more

Summary:

Mike’s life turns upside down when, at age 15, he gets the incredibly rare shrinking disease.  His stepsister who is 17 finds the whole thing amusing that Mike shrinks whenever he becomes sexually aroused, as small as an inch tall, lasting 24 hours before returning to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34149 Read Count: 138254
[Report This] Published: July 15 2016 Updated: November 04 2016
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: August 06 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 14 ... 8-5-16

Really liking it so far, well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I appreciate it, and thanks for reading.

Summary:

 

Read Ella's short stories about her tiny life as she's struggles being born tiny and squishy as everyone around her is unaware of her existing or forgeting about her.

You can also use my story for the Writing.com Interactive Stories, but please read the Everyday Tiny for informations and rules I've given.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Object, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Part, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27402 Read Count: 76837
[Report This] Published: April 10 2021 Updated: March 13 2022
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed
Date: April 12 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Ella the seat cushion

A really strong start. I definitely enjoy the unaware theme, I'd love to see some more descriptors though of feelings and thoughts of your character's internal dialogue. 

Summary:

     After Tim mistakenly drinks a mysterious, secret potion his mother brought back from a research trip to the Amazon, he winds up shrinking to a mere 1-inch tall; now, while his mother frantically works to formulate a cure for her tiny son, Tim is stuck at home in the care of his aunt, who starts taking advantage of her nephew’s “little” condition.


1/29/2024 — Based on the feedback I’ve received, I’ve decided to go ahead and write an epilogue to this story. I’m not sure exactly when it will be finished and posted, but I’ll be working on it as well as a few other small projects as I prepare to write my next novel. I just wanted to thank everyone for all their support and honest feedback. This story was just supposed to be practice for my novels, but it’s certainly taken on a life of its own.


Hooray for 175K reads! 🥳


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 151215 Read Count: 193481
[Report This] Published: February 06 2023 Updated: January 23 2024
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday Evening

I absolutely love the mom adding to his sufferings completely unaware. I would love to see Tim getting trapped in her clothes at some point, even if Julia puts him there as some sort of punishment. 


Overall it's a great story so far, very engaging for sure!



Author's Response:

Well, as Tim’s mother, Natalie is going to remain extra cautious with regards to her son throughout the story. Natalie loves Tim, and would never to anything to purposely hurt him, so any other “scenarios” involving her would have to be of the unaware variety. However, you have given me some food for thought, as I’m finding it harder for her to remain oblivious towards Julia’s treatment of Tim, and something like this might help keep Tim quiet about his mistreatment.

Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. They’re always welcomed.

Summary:

Following a pandemic that shatters public reality, the world is attempting to adjust to the new normal as seemingly random individuals are afflicted with a virus that reduces them to around 3 inches in height. Ryan Miller is stunned to one day find himself standing in his own home, shrunken and helpless with no one around to keep an eye out for his well being. Given a number of other recent struggles in his life, Ryan opts to call the one person he knows that he can still count on, his sister Amanda. 

Follow along as Ryan adjust to his new life at three inches tall. 


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39428 Read Count: 24126
[Report This] Published: March 26 2024 Updated: May 25 2024
Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2024 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I absolutely love your attention to detail, you've got a great level of description both of the physical but also emotional state of the protagonist. It also comes across as a very believable family dynamic. 

The unaware action is especially my favourite and I'm enjoying how it comes across very natural. Really cannot emphasize how much I'm looking forward to more chapters!




Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much! I'm glad the story speaks to you. The person who has been commissioning this piece has very specifically noted that they are a fan of detailed interaction scenarios. Hopefully it continues to please!! 

Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2024 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another fantastic chapter. Really liking the characters being introduced and looking forward to seeing more situations develop.


Just wanted to take a moment to really commend your writing though, you were really well and it's easy to read, flows naturally and is descriptive enough that it's well above he standard of a lot of the literature both on this site and others as well. Fucking props to you!


Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Well thank you so much. I'm glad that my writing inspires such kindness. Thanks for reading!!