First time ever actually writing a review for anything on here (shame on me), but after seeing that second chapter I felt it would be a disservice not to pass on some much deserved praise, as there's not been nearly enough so far.

I really think this story is really shaping up to be something immensely special, and I can't give you enough credit for that. I also can't imagine the amount of time and effort you've put into building this story, particularly into the implement of all the 'world building' that seems to be going on (descriptions and functionality of the technology and kit that Riley has, as well as the wider society).

I've been a fan of your writing for a while, and I must say it's far more intricate and meaningful than a lot of stuff on here. You really seem to have a great grasp of how important it is to tease out the main focus (suffering/torment/scent/sweat all that stuff), whilst also never forgetting how vital it is to build up the tension to something so the payoff is really something.

Personally I'm not the biggest fan of the more maternal based foot-stuff, although I certainly can't disparage those who do, however the prospect of Riley being the focal point of the torment of Tom or others, particularly with the inclusion of size manipulation, is infinitely compelling.

Really looking forward to what's in store next, especially once Riley or size enters the main picture (maybe both at once, who knows), and full credit to you man.

Keep up the fantastic work and can't wait to see what comes next!

This is absolutely fantastic work!

Really impressed with both the creative flair on display, as well as the willingness to allow suspense to build and payoff for certain events, such as with the vileness of Candis' red sneakers. Also, with just how readble and well-characterised the whole story is.

Just out of interest, do we have any idea how tall either of the sisters are, or possibly either of their shoe sizes? No worries if not, but I just thought it worth asking as I know that sort of information can add a little something extra for some people (like me).

Can't wait to see where things go from here, and all the best until then, man!

You know, I really didn't vibe all that much with the last chapter and it's more extreme levels of violence and gore, although of course not without its high points still, like the shoes in the aftermath of Candis' day and such, but more broadly it just wasn't really my thing (not a critique at all, just explaining my own perspective).

However, what a fantastic chapter to follow up with. Candis and Jocelyn putting much of their sadistic ways to good use, whilst also roping a fellow giantess into their games, unbeknownst to her.

Absolutely love the broad focus on feet and in-shoe, especially with the setting which pretty much guarantees plenty of sweat/smell orientated torments for the tinies involved, as well as even for the other giantesses exposed to it. Also, it's really impressive how you manage to ride the line when it comes to comparable levels of smell between different characters, which is a hurdle I think a lot of people struggle with. By which I mean, having someone like Candis, whose feet and shoes are notoriously and incomprehensibly ghastly in regards to their stink, and yet still making the comparatively less terrible odours of Jocelyn and Gillian still powerful and something to be feared. Absolutely brilliant stuff!

Plus, it's always nice to see Candis diversify her arsenal with another pair of horrifyingly pungent shoes for her tinies to dread.

Oh god yes…

Given the setting and context that’s now arise, along with the justified fury that fills Casey, I feel like we might just get her totally unchained now - assuming she’s able to get her way. And given what we’ve seen Casey do so far, even casually, Susan’s going to be in for a hellish existence if she ends up shrunken.

Keep doing what you’re doing and I can’t wait to see what direction you taking things in from here, mate! I know it seems like the vast majority of people are waiting for some Susan content with baited breath, but I’m still gonna hold out hope for some Casey-inshoe stuff, cause those damn boots are too good to waste!

Always amazing to see you back with another chapter, man!

Loving where the plot with Drew is going, especially how casual Casey's become with the variety of treatments she puts him through. I wonder if he'll take the chance at escape... and what she might do, should she catch him...

And it's great to see Taylor back too! Looking forward to seeing what the plan is with her and Austin, particularly if it takes on a different approach than between her and Drew.

Brilliant stuff!

Things are really getting going now, and I'm all here for that, especially the dynamic between Drew and Casey. Although, I can't imagine it'll be a particularly pleasant relationship from his point of view.

I also can't help but hope she finds a reason to shove him inside those boots sooner or later, given just how intense her feet seem to be outside of them. I can't imagine Drew would fare particularly well, even if only as a short-term insole.

Keep doing what you're doing, man, still loving where you've gone with this!

Really great stuff so far, man!

Solid concept with some very good potential and written quality behind it, so looking forward to seeing where things go.

Also, the establishment of Casey and her boots is already a thing of beauty!

Holy fucking shit, what an outstanding premise! Not only that, but executed spectacularly too!

It's honestly so rare to see a GTS story that seems so fresh, whilst also being genuinely well written and conceived. Fair play for that, excellent work!

Would absolutely love to see more from this, is that's a possibility down the line, but regardless, amazing work!

Awesome to see more stuff from you on here, and already enjoying the direction and content of this!

Looking forward to seeing more in the future!

Are my eyes deceiving me, or is the best damn fetish author making a triumphant return to this site?! ;)

Seriously though, it’s amazing to see you posting here again, mate. Your stuff was sorely missed (although I did try to catch your non-size related stuff on TheMousepad from time to time), and I’m certainly looking forward to what you may or mate not have planned from here.

This chapter’s still as good as it was on DA and I think it makes for a solid jumping off point if you’re doing a new anthology. Can’t say MomDom will ever really be my thing, but the quality of your stories makes it real hard not to appreciate nonetheless.

All the best, mate, and can’t wait to what comes next!