Seems like Melanie is torn between her potential love for David and becoming more of a monster. I hope she decides she value's his happiness more than her desires in the end.

This was extremely well done all the way through. It was great to see a different side of Erika. She is still her normal cruel and dominant self, but seeing her give commands to a responsive tiny like Julie made it even better. I loved the ending how Erika can't resist toying with and tricking her tinies before she eats them.

Her relationship with Julie is very interesting. I wouldn't put it past Erika to betray her later just to see her reaction, but I would love to see their relationship develop further. Maybe Erika has some twisted semblance of a heart after all? Either that or she just finds interacting with Julie to be very ... Stimulating >.<

You sound like a lucky man to have married a wonderfull woman and have her discover your fetish later and embrace it. I love how you've described the characters so far in this story. Intrigued how you plan to introduce conflict later on since you've engaged your main characters in a relationship so early.

Wow Megan is an awesome character in a true cruel and sinister way. This story is moving very quickly while still doing a good job developing characters. I love the quoutes that you insert in Italics as well. Lends a certian weight to the story. Hope to see more soon!

Cool, that's kinda what I thought about the Tyrant. I'm glad you did it that way, leaves it open to interpretation, or maybe a potential sequel. It certainly seems like she is either more forgiving with Ambrose, or had that planned the whole time.

I'd like to see where this could go after what's happend. Ambrose should hate her, but is obviously attracted to her. She seems to like playing with him more mentaly than physically torturing him for now. 

This has to come back! You've gone on to write some great stories after this one, but the Sam/Lyria dynamic remains one of my favorites. 

Wow, wasn't expecting this to happen on Sally's first day in the appartment! Something tells me things are about to get very problematic O.O  I wonder if Sally has it in her to accept Lyria's darker habits. Winona is also about to get the most sever punishment ever I'd imagine.

Wow, Leth's gone and we hardly even knew him. Now I'm curious if the same is to come for Winona or if we are going to get to see her go through a dramatic character change. Wasn't expecting that so soon, Sam being opposed to it, but agreeing in the end shows his true devotion to Lyria. He must be feeling relieved he never tested her limits in such an overt way as Akane or Winona.

Hey, sorry I wasn't able to write a review earlier. I've been out of town and really digging your story on my phone. Every day I've been looking forward to the next chapter. I'm a big Shadowrun fan so the setting is already up my alley. Lyria is like the perfect dominant character as well. You are going to think this is funny, but I feel like Sally is the primary antagonist right now lol.

I really have empathized with Sam with the way he tried to resist Lyria as I feel alot of men would in that situation in real life. Now I feel like just as he was starting to feel close to Lyria Sally is pulling her away. And at the same time Lyria now has 3 other pets and I'm intrested to see if she will treat them any differently going forward. If I was Sam I would be questioning whether Lyria see's me as any different from them when they willfilly and knowingly wronged her. While he was tricked and his friends died in the process.

I'd consider myself typically a hopeless romantic while reading these stories so I'm hoping Sam can convince Lyria to see him as something more than a Pet going forward. I'm also keeping my eye on Sally, I'm thinking (hoping) she might turn out to be evil and stab Lyria in the back. For the quality of your writing I'm amazed how fast you are churning out chapters. Keep up the great pace! 

Damn that was some sexy unaware interaction (destruction) at the end there. I'm glad you are doing a Growth story now. While I love your other 2 shrink stories I've always been a fan of the destruction a full grown giantes can inflict on the environment and on man made structures. Iona was very sad about what happend to her village and her brother, but she's already ruined another families lives through a simple lack of coordination with her new body. I can't wait to see what kind of havoc she will wreak later.