A witch and a wizard, old friends, reunite after several years as sworn enemies. This is the last time they will meet. A witch, alone, decides to embrace her destiny.
This was really well written and this is the vibe of stories I really like, but to me these type of endings are just too sad. I wish she would wake up the next day with regret that she killed someone she was so close to and use all her power to bring him back. Nothing wrong with you telling your own story though. Tragedy does make it more unique in a way.
A billionaire vigilante's efforts to track down a reality-warping villain lead her to Japan. There, she comes to terms with the fact that evil and power don't always appear as one expects.
This story was loosely inspired by an RP I did. This story is pretty heavy on omni themes, and features some same-size powers-play. However, it still has a lot of size content in extreme scales. It also features a good deal of clean sweat as subject matter, as well as some vore and clothing-crush. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!
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Hey Vivetta, I have to say I was never rrally that into Omni before this story, but this one worked really well. The way that tension was built up between Etsu and Lauara really worked well. I actually took a break about halfway theough when Etsu was showing herself as a god to Laura and thought about how the story might wnd and the endless possibilities Omni brings. I thought of the same thing you used that Laura had no chance and if etsu wanted she could torture her for 1000 years in a second, but ultimately Laura is just intrestinf to Etsu. Which is enough for Etsu to spare her and let her go unbroken as for the girl who can have anything something unexpected and unpredictable to her is of the hoghest intrest. I liked the open ended ending. Not sure if you will revisit but it leaves it to the reader for now to if we think Etsu will return to rampage in Laura's city, or maybe given enough time Laura will realize how Etsu actually being quite nice given what she could do. I wonder if Etsu's desire to keep some level of human experience means shes looking for a relationship of some kind with a human like how she flirted woth a kiss or this could be a last hurrah sort of thing where shes getting whatever memories she can oit of earth before acending. Its all very intriguing given i thought those sorts of characters stories quickly became no stakes when everything can be done with a whim of their will.
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for your comment! I am happy you seemed to enjoy the story. I am pleased you were able to enjoy this story's omni content it seems! It is usually quite nice to read that someone who isn't usually into one theme or feature can find enjoyment in a story with said things.
In particular, I'm happy you liked all the dialogue on the omni stuff. I mentioned it before, but I thought some people might be a tad put off by all the dialogue and such. I am happy that is not the case, at least for you and a few others haha.
Anyways, thanks again for sharing your thoughts!
If Gigantopia is supposed to be a perfect city for all sizes, the truth is often darker. Crime exist here as much as in other parts of the world, but it often goes unnoticed by the larger citizens, who care very little about the plight of their smaller brethren. it is usually calm, but when an unknown player start to take in an older gang, things heat up and the darker side of the nation comes to light.
Warning. This will be my darker story by far. There will be some consequences (physical and mental) for the characters involved. If you have problems reading about physical arm, maiming, neurological disorder etc. it may be best to sit this one out !
Very nice Break from the action chapter. Are chapters 8-10 available anywhere? your patreon doesn't seem to exist anymore.
My USB key haha !
I deleted the patreon because I felt bed getting money for the amount of writing I can produce now.
But each time I finish a chapter I'll try to post one of the others, and I'm focusing solely on this story for now, so hopefully it'll be quick !
Traversing across the empty expanse of space, a lonely and somewhat obsessive goddess sets off to an intergalactic journey to find her soul mate. The giantess will do anything to get with her one true love, from pampering, world domination to otherworldly fun. Will the two of them last?
A small tale of a gigantic goddess and normal sized human in their exploration of love on whether If such a strange relationship can truly stay afloat.
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FINISHED STORY
First off, great work so far!
Secondly these are my favorite types of stories where the giantess is confident and proud of her power and not afraid to use it on the random hapless tinies yet has unique feelings for a certain special tiny.
If you are looking for ideas based on where the story is at the end of chapter 4. I think it will be interesting to explore her powers once she has full control of his soul. We don't know too much about him yet maybe he's had certain fantasies she can now help him explore to develop a bond. Of course she will always be the dominant one in the relationship but if it's going to be a loving one it will be cute to see her getting to know him and figuring out what he likes.
Now as to what I'd like to see. Maybe she can put his conciousness in different parts of her body. Like her toes, feet tits, pussy. Etc, and go on some galactic scale rampages showing him what shes can do.
She's resolved not to destroy his planet but maybe in a fucked up way as he falls in love with her he'll grow to feel bad for her because of that and tell her its okay to do what she wants because he'll be so over the moon for a gorgeous giantess goddess.
The play between fear and love is the sweetest of all for me in these stories so my advice is dont rush to him beeing all in love too quick but dont keep him a distant afraid whi er too long either.
Your doing great so far so I'm sure I'll enjoy whata coming next.
Author's Response:
Wow, these are all the ideas I could of ever wanted. Thank you very much!
Since she does have mystical powers I’ve walked thought of adding more tags and genres, like you mentioned stuff like transforming into body parts of objects come to mind. Anything can really fly too i guess as long as there is some justification for it.
Also yeah, so far it’s just been a prologue with getting his soul, the real fun starts after. Although I don’t wanna mess up that part so I may be slowing down my releases for that.
The idea of Rampaging through earth sounds great too, perhaps a little bit of fun would fly but I’d rather not turn her completely cruel when she doesn’t need to be. (Although in this universe civilisation outside of earth does exist so…. There is possibility of cruelty like that.)
and yeah, so far I’m trying to keep the play between fear and love. Of course since there is barely anything on our male lead so far he is mostly fearful for now.
once again I’m thankful for the review!
So while I'm likening the relationship so far. I think you may want to introduce some conflict soon to get the story going. Maybe show one of the other Giantesses who is more disposed to pure cruelty, and have Lena not really be fazed while her husband is more put off due to not being bound to the other giantess.
Idk if you want to have him do something that will make her punish him in a sexy way.
If you make her too kind too quickly, I just fear the story wont have any where to go personally but its your story. :)
These are 100% fair points and criticisms. As of this chapter there isn’t really a strong plot line going, and there really been much done to either of the two leads towards one another. Both of your potential solutions or things to do, both add a sense of conflict and will progress the story I think, so honestly they are worth considering.
The other giantess coming in and adding a new plot like of having Blyke witnessing more cruelty is something I’ve considered, but for later as I wanted a few moments or chapters of relief between the two. I’m not completely sure if a Lena could be considered kind though, she does act like such towards Blyke and always has, but has been rather awful towards anyone else. Whether she slowly changes to more kinder or not is something I also should probably consider.
Regardless for the critical review. These help make sure I know if I should add something particular or when I should. From this review it seems I may need to slow Lena being nice and speed up the pace somewhat.
Tom wakes up in an unknown world and must try and get home with the help of a she-demon who sees him as nothing more than a snack. This is a story mostly vore where our hero is asked to blur the lines between being simple prey and a willing meal. Can he survive his demonic dealings?
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I must say this story could not have started any better for me. Placing our protagonist Tom in this hopeless scenario is a great hook to the story and Hinba is an awesomely powerful, ominous dominant giantess while still being very sexy.
I have some unique tastes when it comes to giantess fiction as I've read so much now, Pure violence doesn't work as well for me, and pure gentle doesn't either. I love these types of suspense stories where we don't know how the relationship between Hinba and Tom will progress. Can't wait to gradually learn more about her and see if she has any type of heart or mercy in her. I love how she totally outclasses him, with her size, strength, magic powers and even can outsmart him. He's powerless and you aren't relying on the trope where he can just asspull his way into being useful to her.
Those last two chapters 3 and 4 were wonderfully suspenseful in that aspect.
I do hope for a happy ending as I have to admit as much as I love the torment and teasing I do like seeing cruel giantess women open up emotionally in a relatable and earned way more than anything, but I know I will enjoy this story either way as long as you keep it going.
Wow this is just getting better and better. You have me right where you want me as a reader. Much like Hinba with Tom.
The suspense is killing me, the two of them have such good chemistry together it would be so painfull if she ended up eating him at the end despite all of the adventures they are going through and how the two of them are exploring their feelings through her powers.
When it comes to the stone, if I was Tom I would be tempted, but its not like I've been properly trained on how to use it. The best thing will probably be to just come clean to Hinba and hope she appreciates it.
Staying on her good side seems like the only course of action.
Its interesting, too that the naga broached the subject of life as a pet. Maybe she's seen Hinba do that before. Maybe she thinks I'll of Hinba for something she's seen her do before. Personally before she said that I was thinking that's Tom's third and best hope beyond being eaten alive, or having his soul consumed. Spending time with a powerful beauty like Hinba would be amazing for anyone reading this story I'm sure, and maybe she can be nice as long as he's a good boy.
It would make her seem incredibly ruthless if she's able to get to know him so intimately through her powers and just eat him after that. Maybe that makes his soul feed her more though, we just dont know what her demon kind are really capable of.
Such a sweet ending I wouldn't have had it any other way. Ultimately she made him submit to her, but she fell for him as well and had mercy in the end.
Amazing how over the 5 years Tom had rather than trying to live out every life's fantasy, he dedicated himself to finding out more about her and her village, and decided he wanted to be with her even though he gave himself a way out.
Ultimately the bullet he left was itself a message to her, to show he had outwitted her and committed himself anyways.
I hope she can help him heal his skin a bit with her magic. I think they will have a long and happy life together now.
Its been a long time since a story on here effected me so much in this way and I can't wait for the duo to return.
So I'm not an author, at least not in the "I'm good at this" kinda way, but one interesting thing to see is when a reader has a different interpretation. I'm not saying you're wrong in ANY SENSE but it's this weird realization for me personally to know that I am only responsible for the words themselves. Like I know the idea I had when I wrote them but to see someone come up with something else is deeply cathartic. I really do mean it because one thing that my Wife was telling me was to avoid "hand-holding" the reader too much because it leads to stale writing. it was my goal to leave certain elements up to interpretation and I feel vindicated. Thank you, kind sir.
So I wanted to elaborate on my previous review and reply to some of the others reviewing. I didnt mean to imply that hinba wasnt cruel the whole time or that she was decieving tom when she ate him. To me what happend at the end was that their Pred/ prey relationship ended with her eating him, and when he wakes up it will be the start of a new kind of relationship. Given that Hinba is a high class incredibly powerful and selfish deomoness him surviving the deal is a huge win. Its like a 100-1 boxer pulling off a draw. Yes he had to submit to her and forfiet his agency, but as a gts fan maybe thats something I'd want so its purely positive to me lol. I dont think their new relationship will neccesarily be all roses at first, but I think Tom is interesting enough to her especially with her decision at the end to maybe let him rest instead of tormenting im with a fake afterlife, that they may grow out of this lopsided potentially abusive relationship into one that they both truely enjoy. I will clarify I am always an optimist, but i can appreciate tragic storys as well. If i didnt have a gts fetish I guess id see the ending as a phrrhic victory. So there is some bias in that I'd love to be in tom's position and dominated by hinba so there's that lol. Anyways loved the characters, the dynamic, the tension, and the clever ending. Hope to see what's next soon even if its more tragic and brutal than I'd hope for.
Hmm "pyrrhic victory" is good. Yeah, I like that description.
And yes this is definitely an abusive relationship… If your giantess ever treats you like this, please seek help from the Gentle Giantess Propaganda Agency (GGPA™). They have safeguards in place to prevent such treatment… or something.
This is a continuation of Dealings with Demons. If you have read that story then you should have a good idea of what you're in for. If you haven't read that story then please do so before reading this one as you might end up spoiling the fun.
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Haha glad to see my favorite duo back!
Already digging the new dynamic a lot. Hinba is a natural sadist and incredible at it. Tom seems to be enjoying it a bit more now too as much as he denies it.
I feel like this story will be much more unpredictable as we don't have the end game of him being eaten any more.
I feel like the dynamic of her reading his thoughts keeps him on his toes 24/7 it make even the internal dialog intense.
Love this story progression. Hinba is keeping her dominant sadistic personality even as her attachment towards Tom grows.
Whereas the entire first story was Tom trying to escape his fate and ultimately convincing Hinba to spare him this story now seems to be Hiba trying to get Tom to accept and even enjoy his new role.
I am very curious to see how hunger she actually is and how she will sate her hunger eventually.
I SO LOVE THIS STORY.
You've kept true to the up the characters of Hinba and Tom very well this whole time. At the same time the relationship has totally been developing. We're back to only getting Tom's perspective on each chapter since the epilogue of part 1, yet it comes across very well that Hinba's care and attachment is building. It would be way to simple and would end the dynamic if she went full gentle anytime before now, and keeping to her demon tendencies while protecting and caring about how tom perceives her as not abusive has been perfect. Every chapter whether its plot or sexy based has been top notch.
For what's coming next, I am eagerly anticipating Tom's upcoming decision on if he's going to break the Worldstone on the earth or demon side. Its a huge climactic moment in him trusting Hinba long term, and she better damn appreciate it if he chooses to stay with her.
Such a beautiful chapter and perfect conclusion. I was legitimately brought to tears by the ending.
It was a perfect bittersweet moment though. This whole story development from unwilling prey, to willing but sad, to now willing and fully accepting it only to have her no longer find any enjoyment from consuming him is one of the best culminations of a vore relationship stories ever in my opinion.
Hoping Hinba will find some solace in the epilogue. It would be a dream if there is some magic left in the worldstone that can save Tom for a true happy ending, but either way this was a very well done emotionally affecting story. Excellent debut for your first time writing!
He made it!
Look forward to Hinba x Tom reunion / full on love.
War is going to be a hell of an arc too I can only assume :) .
Fallout multi-chapter Fan Fic with Scalie/Scaly giantess content. (For those that don't know Scalie/Scaly is Furry for lizard people)
After years of hardship, life had finally given Drew the break he needed. He had a beautiful girl, good friends, and a home in a small pre-war town just north of the border in Canada.
All that had ended when the Greenskins AKA Super Mutants had attacked. The love of his life as well as half the town was either taken or killed. Those that survived left and Drew along with his friends Jack, Amy, and Jarik found themselves in a town known as Colville.
There they rebuilt their lives, but the pain and memories remain and now, there is a new threat, one that may threaten the whole region
This is where the story begins.
Note: this is a fetish story with fetishized characteristics. Inspired by the Domclaw pics that are out there.
I've felt like this was where the story was going for a while. I'm very interested to see the upcoming developments and conflicts finally play out though.
Will Gemma be another green deathclaw?
How will Drew's friends react to his growning bond with the green deathclaws.
Wondering if Drew and his friends will be overwhelmed by some other threat in the area and the deathclaws may ultimately help them.
Anyways can't wait to see how these questions are answered.
Also just the general vibe of this story is great. The green deathclaws are portrayed as naturally dangerous and scary but their intelligence and compassion is still there with them.
Through great trial and effort!
And continued talk of bringing them back...
Gilah and Jason return. The love story between a mundane human and his titanic monstrous girlfriend continues. This time, however, they're not alone. Gilah isn't the only horror in the deep. And really, how far do the Depths in which she lives actually go? Surely there must be an end, right? Otherwise, there's no telling what sort of monstrosities might be lurking beyond the gaze of man.
-Love in the Depths has now been completed-
Excellent world building.
Excellent world building.
A knight leads an elven princess through human lands, but she proves to be quite the handful.
Excellent start! Love the balance between Talia's horny desires and her development as a character. I think its a perfect fit for what I look for in stories on here. These types of powerful gts and interesting and relatively capable normal human are my favorite. I think Myra being unaware was a great place to start and to explore how much Talia can get away with before Myra notices. I'm sure it will be an epic moment. I'm glad Talia already seems to be warming up to her in a real way.
“My name is Pierre Dupont, and I was sent here to kill you.”
The gray woman licked her lips. “Hello Pierre Dupont, who was sent here to kill me. I’m Silvia Le Succube and this is my castle.” She raised her hands to space around her. “You’re not going to leave this place alive.”
This is a short one-shot that I've been working on while I battle writers' block on other projects. I hope you all like it and please let me know what you think.
Finally justfound this gem months pate while checking for part 3 of dealings woth demons. You've identied something in this story that i think is under expored in giantess fiction. The chase of a giantess after a very capable prey can be very thrilling and engaging. We all know that Silvia is not only far larger than Pierre but far more magically capable yet she let him dig deep and use every ounce of his power, ingeniouoty and physical capabilities to resist. In a way she's going easy on him but in another shes dragging out his torment by extending hope. She also built an emotional connection with him by talking to him while he still thought he had a chance. It was more gold from you for sure. I think its tough to write a character like Silvia whos both cruel and yet understanding of Pierre's plight and desparation. I don't think it would be out of the realm to her to decide to claim Pierre like Hinba did Thomas just purely out of affection for his will and thinking hes cute. It could also be that she just going to eat him but since she doesn't resent him in aby way shes trying to give him a bit of comfort befor the end. Its a perfect self contained story that lets the reader decide what they think or hope happens. Avoided cliches and was true to the genre while being original too
Everyone knows the goddess, but do you really know her? Follow her daughter's blog for the inside scoop on the goddess both when she's kind and when she's turning cities to dust, although you might have to deal with her daughter venting her teenage troubles as well.
Sad to hear that about Tiffany you seemed hopeful she might share in your empathy. Thank you for remaining a caring and nice person despite all the circumstances pushing you the other way. If you ever visit my city i'll try to get to a high rooftop and wave.