What a very beautiful story. About everything. Alan did a fine job with Naomi, Paul and Rachel. Those people really got what they deserved. 10/10

@minuss. This is an excellent story. This is how a shrinking story is done. So realistic al those situations and feelings. Outside of the exciting sex, what a frustrating feeling it must be. Very believable reactions and actions. What hard this must have been on the family and Karen. These are genuinly good people who made mistakes in the heat of the moment and where sorry afterwords. So realistic. You can feel the pain of his wife and daugther too. They have done things to Scott they will never forget.
I like how you've done Karen too. You wrote each shrinking state in so much rich detail.
One little point of critic. At the end of the story, I miss the fealing of sadness and fear with al his friends en family members when he is ready to shrink away and die. A miss the point where they actually realise that their father and old collegue is going to die and the fear he must be going through. The moment where it is not funny anymore to make fun of Scott.
Excellent verion of the Incredible Shrinking Man.

Thanks for this experience!!! 10/10

Good story.  Shocking part where Anna breaks Ashley limbs to make a point and Tony will never see his friends and family again. Helen and Kevin have done horrible damage to Anna, Alison and Ashley. The relationship between Alison, Ashley and Tony will be an interesting one. Ashley got the best deal. She's alive and her bad parents are gone. Her life as a pet will be much better thanks to Alison.

Beautiful story. Sarah's problem is that she couldn't stop the torture. She had a right to some revenge, but than goes overboard. Her carelessness put her brother in danger and ultimately his demise. She learned her lesson in a terrible hard way.

Seeing her brother's face in fear before he explodes. Knowing it was her fault and that she tortured him before that event. Her relationship with her parents not as good as before, because I can't them see loving her a much as before. That's a lot of pain.

Hopefully her son doesn't go the same way as James. She already failed as a sister. She better try not to fail as a mother as well.

Peter and the people around him come over as dumb now. I like how you write psychological scenes, sometimes onesided and sometimes with the right mix. But this transition is just weird. The choices don't feel relatable.

Annoying Mandy makes her appearance.
Simple everyday life is a grand adventure for Peter. A gigantic world full of wonders and dangers. Doing something as simple as watching a movie in a movie theater is an enormous challenge.

Another aspect of what could happen to a teenager in a world of giants. This friendship is over. This is a good lesson for Peter to avoid young children, because they don't think about consequences.

Excellent adventure and love stories between brother and giantess sister, giantess and lover. What's sad is that Valdan seems to dislike his older sister because of Sylvie. His older sister is a saint.
Sylvie is just a child and a brat. Not evil, but her actions will have far reaching consequences on how Valdan look at giants. I just don't see him fully embrace his sisters. Tolerate them a little more than before, but I see no love.
It's good that Belena gets to rule instead of Valdan or Sylvie. Lorek is a lucky guy.

What a beautiful story. I like the evolutian in all your stories. You decribe the transformation in great detail and what it really means to be a giant(ess). The wonder, amazement and joy it brings.

What a super scary experience this must be for this family. Quarter of an inch. A mother and sister who must watch their son/brother disappear to certain death. Exciting. Will Gabriel be saved and at least be allowed to be 7 inch tall or will he vanish completely?