Nice story you have here, like the interactions between characters. I only don’t understand why hebe is called ‘they’ as it was confusing at first.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I am assuming the girl would grow up to 1,000 times their size, there could be a scene where Aoi uses the link and speck size compared to the other girls unable to grow back due to the watch not working with the Mc much smaller. 

There is a few scenes which this can work on like the Mc getting lost in another girls shoe and yae finding him or being stuck in a bento with even the smallest of food towering over him.

I like link concept and I hope it is expanded on or used more.

I find the concept from the summary interesting, I understand that you are trying to set up the world in chapters 1,2 and I love how detailed your description is but even after reading through both chapters twice I felt that there is a lot of parts which can be shortened as they are dumping a lot of information which are not needed, it is alright to have them but I feel that there is too many of them.

For example in the paragraph which starts with Brad blissfully extended...

There is a portion which states that his house lies just outside of the inner city and it is a 20 minutes walk, I feel that there is no point in including both as either one already tells us that it is a short walk. Also I doubt that this info will be relevant in the future chapters(From the end of chapter 2 I assume he is transferred to some other location) so you could just gloss over it(along with a lot of other information which does not expand on the character or is relevant in the story).

This is just my suggestion, I am not a writer and I wouldn't say that my opinion is right. 

Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for the story.

The hardcore gaming chapter is great, the show of difference in power between him and the weakest mob before being crushed unaware underfoot by his very friend. Hope to see another story with this premise maybe one where the hardest difficulty player barely grows a few inches(relative to his size) at most even gettiing to level cap while his friend gets to level 100 or has a friend who is massive where the mc could get into all sorts of situations partying. Or one where the mc gets to a high leveled town and he has to survive a town bustling with npcs, a farmer's daughter stepping on grapes to make wine with the mc in it, trapped in some body parts of a blacksmith with many others such as maid or knights.

Great chapter for helping the readers understand the world better and expansion of elizabeth character.