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Summary: A young tiny named James lives a painful lonely life. The object of his affection, Leah Scarlett, is his best friend's mom. He hopes to eventually get the opportunity to act on his impulses, immoral as they may be. Will everything go according to his plan?
Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38443 Read Count: 330275
[Report This] Published: June 02 2017 Updated: February 26 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 07 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor

What happened to the story???  This one is really, really great, I hope it doesn't get left to the wayside.

For that matter, I hope all is well with Necromanswer. 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 20 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor

Very Nice! Jamesy as Leah's bikini bottom, definitely a beautiful image; but wouldn't Jamesy be begging and pleading with Leah to keep wearing him rather than buy a new one?  Perhaps she could decide to only buy a sarong skirt to hide him for the ride home.  What other clothes could Jamesy be for Leah to wear?  

It would have been nice to read more detail about the short experience in Leah's butt crack.  Still, very entertaining.  Hopefully we'll be experiencing much much more of Leah's butt crack in finer detail, hopefully {smiling}.

What happened to Stacy is pretty hot.  It would be nice if Leah gets constipated with Stacey and she's stuck in Leah's butt for a few days.  Stacey and the missing Ms Myrtle would make a cute pair of living flip flops for Leah; rubberized and face up beneath Leah's feet with their arms and legs streched into straps.  I know you said you have the story writen already, I'm just day dreaming scenarios so please don't mind me. 

I do have to ask, did Leah "shrink" Jamesy down to two feet tall before making him her bikini bottom or did she "grow" him up to two feet in size?

Oh by the way, I know it's not Wonder Woman's golden lasso, I was just trying to be humorous previously. ; )  



Author's Response: There will be a big surprise at the beginning of the next chapter. Also, she grew him from 2 inches to 2 feet in order to make him her bikini bottom

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 18 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Leah's Little Boy Toy

Finally a tiny who realises quickly "Hey this is pretty hot, sit on me!"  Pulling Wonder Womans' golden lazo from her clevage aside (how'd she hide that) this story is really terrific.  One has to wonder what Leah does to or did with the rest of her indestructable tinies.  Did she swallow Ms Myrtle knowing she'd pass through her harmlessly, or did she spend all that time wedged in Leahs' butt as I hope?

Wish you would post the entire story; but it is yours' to torment us with the wait.  : )   Thanks for writing this!



Author's Response: Not to be confused with Wonder Woman's Lasso of truth, Leah's Lasso of Lust can shrink or grow to any size she wishes. While she usually uses it to dominate tinies, she can also use it to take down giants. Also, Leah is still wearing her bikini top, so thats how she was able to hide it.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 09 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Wet & Wild

There are so many different paths this story can take, it's really a nail biter.  

Who exactly did Leah mean when she said "Don't worry, honey. Soon, you'll be with me... with us."?  Was it her and Jacob, or does she have others we don't know about such as the missing Ms. Myrtle, and at what size?

I realize you said this is all already writen; but if Leah had Jamesy bend in half at the waist so he's touching his toes, Leah could slip him up between her legs {his face and chest facing her stomach and breasts, his legs up her spine, his pulvis as her panty liner so to speak} and have him wrap his arms around her waist and over his own legs, then a little bit of cordage to bind his forearms together tightly and she could wear Jamesy as her living bikini bottom.

My only complaint, and I think others may agree with me on this, is you have to post much more frequently.  Yes, you got us addicted to this story and we need our daily fixes. {sarcastic smile, again, only serious}

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 05 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Sleeping with Leah

Egde of your seat anticipation.  Why did you change the name from Lovely, Leggy Leah?  No matter, excellent story.  Seems there might be some shrinkage after all. {fingers crossed}  

One has to wonder what, if anything Leah did with Ms. Myrtle; or better yet where Leah "might" have her presently after those "The crack of her beige shorts was hidden between her cheeks." and "...wearing only a bra and the same shorts from earlier" lines.

This is really a great story.  Your writing style, word usage, imagery; it's all spot on.  Very well done! 



Author's Response: I felt like i was overdoing it on the alliteration. And thanks

Author's Response: I felt like i was overdoing it on the alliteration. And thanks

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Lusting for Leah

Nice writing style.  This story could go anywhere.  Are their heights the extent of their size difference or can she shrink Jamesy or grow herself?  Did Ms. Myrtle take ill or did Leah shrink her to get her out of the way (where would Leah have hid her if she did)?

 

Leah sounds hot; but hopefully her butt and thighs aren't big as in cellulite but rather muscular and tone like skull crushers (make for an interesting workout scene).

 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 10 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Leaving Lee

Not quite where I was hoping it would go as I liked what happened to Stacy and James; but then again I was worried James was going to wake up laying next to home plate after being beaned in the head by a fast ball back in the beginging of the story which mean none of this happened.

There's still the strange disappearance of Ms. Myrtle.  Did Leah shrink her?  Did Leah turn her into one of her many 'DDD' bras or the shorts she's wearing.  Perhaps Leah turns people into her bottom clothing like the shorts she kept wearing and Jamesy the red bikini bottom.

To bad Stacy never happened as such.

Where will this story go next?

Summary:

This is a new world order setting, where men never grow past one foot tall. It contains BBW giantess as a leading character, butt crush, unwilling victim and a taste of misandry as well as a little breast smother. In future I want to add some more violent crushing, vore and humiliation. Anyways, hope you have fun and don't be afraid to leave some critique. Oh, and one more thing. English isn't my native.


Categories: Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, New World Order, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 787 Read Count: 6296
[Report This] Published: June 04 2017 Updated: June 04 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A pretty decent start.  My only critisism would be the line spacing.  What ever format you are using to write it the short lines of text make it a bit difficult to read.  Other than that it's a fun sounding story.  The guy in the cage lost in her clevage is a great idea; makes you wonder what other cages she may be wearing in the hidden places of her body.

Keep writing this!

Cold Case by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Straight out of Quantico, special agent Abel Stafford is assigned to the mundane world of cold case missing persons. His new partner, a much older and decidedly eclectic agent believes a series of seemingly random unsolved disappearances are related to a single perpetrator. When his partner vanishes from a busy crowded street, Abel gets drawn into a cat and mouse game with the woman his partner was pursuing.

  

 


Categories: Vore, Adventure, Insertion, Entrapment, Butt, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13198 Read Count: 54822
[Report This] Published: June 29 2017 Updated: August 23 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 30 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Contact

Really interesting X-Files type story line.  The fact that Lily is probably actually answering Abel's questions without him realizing it is a nice twist.

My only critical comment would be that neither Abel nor Tom admired what I hope is a Beautiful "smooth hairless vagina".  

Lily?  As in Lilith, Adam's first wife?  You have put other religuous references in your story, so just curious.

Yet another excellent story by you.  Thank you for writing these. 



Author's Response:

Another clever catch, Lily, Lilith, Lilitu hmm one never knows.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 30 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Contact

Tom Speedy

I like this story.  I like it alot.  But I have to agree with Tom.  I really like and very much apprecaite your stories Duggernaut; but was extremely disappointed when "Bang Your Head... (Mo's Story)" and “Shoebox” got dropped to the way side.  I would joy in reading the rest of "Cold Case"; yet am affraid it may take you away from your other fine works.

 

Hey I'm guilty of the exact same thing, even more so.  I start things and never finish them, that's just who I am. 

You also don't owe any of us anything, though we owe you our gratitude.  It's just, rather than being left hanging of what could be, we all like a Happy Ending!  {Ha Haaa}



Author's Response:

Thanks for the insight and all I can say is I haven't entirely abandoned most of my unfinished stories - currently revising Bang Your Head and stepped away from Shoebox trying to decide if I want to change the early dynamic of that story. I sometimes get ahead of myself. Please enjoy this one for what it is. :)

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 07 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Second Contact

"I don’t doubt you would be quite a handful." HA HA HA HA HA HA HA   One of the best and funniest foreshadowing lines I ever heard. {Also an assumption on my part}.

Hmmm, sounds like Gil is currently passing through Lily's bowels.  Hopefully Lily will be sending Abel a photo tomorrow of her poop; perhaps tied up the exact same way Gil was in that first photo.  Will Abel make the connection?  Again, just guessing on my part.

This story is addicting; yet such a tease, it needs longer chapters.  A+++++



Author's Response:

I love using that kind of language during the foreplay aspects of the story. Pretty plausible guess on your part.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 13 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Dream Weaver

Good chapter, I liked it.  To bad there wasn't a little buldge struggling in her tummy that she could have patted while moaning "Mmmmm".  Hopefully I'll have such pleasant dreams.

There is one critisism and I hope you do not get upset that I state this.  Especially in light of the fact I look forward to your postings of this story because I enjoy it so much.

My critisism, and I only speak for myself on this, is your word choice.  I like reading a story that flows with simple verbage rather than a story where I have to stop to look up words such as "tenebrous", "verdant", "fuliginous", "corpulant" and "ebon". 

My personal opinion is that your time would have been well spent on a quick proofread.  Again, I really like your stories and hope you do not take my comments as insults; they are not meant to be.  The story itself is fantastic.

I may not have the most expansive vocabluary of any of your readers; but isn't the main goal of writing that of successfully communicating?

I once asked a man a question using a bunch of fancy, $10 words I had learned.  The man responded with one word, just that single word and I realized I was being such a pompus fool that in my arrogance I completely failed in even remotely asking a simple question and was left embarrassed for all to see.  His responce: "What?"



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review DW, I appreciate the feedback as it help me understand how my words are being interpreted. No offense taken by any means. I once asked a man why he was trying to spend ten dollar words when he only had 2.50 in change in his pocket :)

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 20 2017 Title: Chapter 5: The Morning After

One can't help but wonder if Lily's secret to being stealthy isn't her ability to change her own size, walk under doors and stand right there in a room with you completely unnoticed.

Will we find out if Lily really did eat Gil and poop him out today?  Where will she poop him, on Abel's pillow still all tied up?  Is Albert Kinney next to be all tied up in a text message picture from Lily to Abel's cell phone?

All I can say is Lily needs more victims.  Ha Ha, perhaps send Abel a picture of a bunch of tied up men and as he tries to figure out who and where they are he notices it looks a lot like their inside of a lunch pail or a stove pot.

Glad by last critique was not offencive {at least I didn't have to look up Oedipus complex this time, ha haaa}.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 24 2017 Title: Chapter 6: The Neighbor from Hell

How many more times will his phone go off before it's Lily on the other end or a picture of Albert tied up just like Gil was? 

I only wish you could post more often.  The suspence is driving me nuts.   

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 09 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Without a Trace

My only complaint is that I have to wait for the next chapter {Boo Hiss}  Another good one, and possibly an Amy snack in the near future.  Wonder if she'll ever return from her night out???

It would be funny if Lily told Abel as she is releasing Albert where she is, perhaps Albert's own apartment bathroom which confuses Abel; or a secluded place and when he gets there, there is only a pile of poop with a toothpick stuck in it with a card, like a mini protest poster, with the name "Albert" writen on it.  He He He

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 23 2017 Title: Chapter 11: A Penny for your Thoughts

Hmmm, why would Lily take all that time and effort to join the FBI?  If anyone, the female professor that he is about to meet could be Lily.

It would be nice if for once Lily showed a picture of her pussy with a tiny hand or feet sticking out, perhaps even someone's head.  Seems too late for Albert though, sounds like he died in Lily's pussy; didn't Gil survive her pussy and live until she finished digesting him?  Of course you never actually said so; one can assume quite a bit until proven wrong. he he he



Author's Response:

Logically it doesn't make sense for her to have gone through training just for the sake of the hunt.

 

Right now Abel is just starting explore other possibilities so sending a picture as you suggest would validate the game sooner than she wants. There will be a scene coming soon enough where she let's him in on the secret and him alone...

Summary:

Read along and find out about how my life went from 0-100, real quick.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3789 Read Count: 17050
[Report This] Published: July 07 2017 Updated: July 09 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 07 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The change

Good start even if a bit on the short side {ha haaa}.  Just do a spell-check before you post and please continue this story.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 09 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Waking Up

You have a really great story going on here. 

I like how you seem to be making Leslie a passive dominant; she talks softly but her every word is a command.  It would be nice if she were more conniving and manipulative; perhaps a bit more physically abusive in a playful way like when you had her tapping him on the head.

I hope you continue this story.  My one complaint, as I mentioned before, just do a quick spell-check and proof read.  Other than that, pure joy to read.

Summary: When you shrink to a level barely noticeable, what do you do?
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 619 Read Count: 4100
[Report This] Published: July 15 2017 Updated: July 15 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The awakening

Nice start, lot's of places to go with it.  It would have been nice if the main reason he couldn't get out of the bra was the shear size of the bra cup, HUGE!

If I could make a crtitique, do a quick proof read to clean up some of the spelling and grammar before posting.  Other than that you have a pleasant writing style.  The plot and words flow together to make reading your story highly enjoyable.

I especially like the little witicisms, "I'm not a scientist, sue me." is funny.

Keep writing this.

Summary:

Disappearences of ships, people, and other strange things happen on a remote mysterious Island. A 20-year-old college sophomore visits the Island for an internship at a facility... Powerful forces put her at the forefront of life-changing events and some events that could even change our world forever.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82447 Read Count: 167004
[Report This] Published: July 23 2017 Updated: April 26 2022
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 31 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 02 - The Intern

Really nice story.  I like it so far; though the grammar is a little off.  Please keep writting this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks for review and liking this story, D W. I will try my best to improve.