Penname: Defiad [Contact] Real name: Josh
Member Since: August 27 2016
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Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 471225
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: September 26 2016 Title: Chapter 21: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)

I do have to wonder what Brooke means by "This... is going... to be... AWESOME!" Does this mean incest and threesome to come?



Author's Response:

I think she's reacting to the prospect of her best friend joining the family. Incest with blood relatives I consider disgusting. She is kinda of a freak, though. Lots of opportunities for deviant behavior from her. 

Stepdaughter in Charge by Tiny Jedi Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

James, 35, lives with his new family which includes his beautiful 17-year-old stepdaughter who despises him.  It doesn’t help that she has magical size-altering powers.  And it certainly doesn’t help that he has a secret shrinking fetish.

(size reduction to 1 inch)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26561 Read Count: 178870
[Report This] Published: August 19 2016 Updated: November 02 2016
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16

Oh my dear god. Tiny Jedi, this chapter was fantastic. I love how teasing and clearly into it that Addie is, power and domination seem to come extremely naturally to her. You are doing a stupendous job, keep it up man! This story is easily one of my favorites on this website.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your nice comments.  Addie loves her power... and what she can do with it.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: September 29 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16

Finally!!! Not to sound like a loser, but this story is almost always the highlight of my Thursdays. I'm glad to see that we're finally going to get some size interaction, I am so giddy that I cannot wait! I have never been this excited for a story, kudos to you; Tiny Jedi! Keep up the amazing work.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your nice comments.  The story should get interesting.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: September 08 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16

I am anxiously awaiting playtime with Adelaide. I always feel a surge of excitement when I see this story updated. Mooooore :D



Author's Response:

I have a sense of when James will become small, and how it could happen.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really REALLY like this story so far. I'm hoping it doesn't go down the stupidly cruel route that some size writers seem to love, but I am definitely looking forward to future chapters and updates. Keep up the great work, Tiny Jedi.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review, and I'm glad you like the story so far.  I'm not planning on the story getting too cruel... it should be more playful than that.

Words by El Rodrigo Diaz De Vivar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Loke learns about some strange words that when used by other people will shrink him down. Together with new friends and enemies he is forced to find out what being shrunk means...


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22694 Read Count: 58331
[Report This] Published: September 23 2016 Updated: October 01 2016
Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: September 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I have to say that I agree with Pdawg. This story seemed extremely promising, but I'm going to be giving it a pass from now on. It went from being great and having a nice, interesting premise to girls shitting on him for shallow and transparent reasons that would never happen and shatters my suspension of disbelief.



Author's Response:

Thanks to you too for your honesty. It helps me developing my further stories.

YouTube: Eli's Channel by SpookyTaco Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

A boy shrinks, and his sisters document the experience on YouTube.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93512 Read Count: 241155
[Report This] Published: October 03 2016 Updated: July 07 2017
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting so far. I'd like to see more, what categories are going to be featured in this story if any at all? Given the PG rating, I'd guess feet and possibly mouth play? It really does seem like a great start to a slow shrink story. Keep up the great work, Spooky.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Defiad. I do have several platonically fun situations in mind. :)

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: October 10 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hm, so he's lost three inches since the beginning of the story. So, was he taller than 5' 4'' before the story even began? Or has he only lost three inches in height so far? It's a good story so far, though I look forward to the later stages.



Author's Response:

He started at 5'5" and has lost four inches so far. The later stages should indeed be interesting. :)

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: December 16 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Amazingly written story, I hope to see more updates for this one. Hope you're having a good holiday season.



Author's Response:

Had a great Christmas! Decided to dabble in 3D art to add some pictures to the story.

In Over His Head by Mouseyman99, Raziell Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Do you play Skyrim? Do you mod? What if that crazy, custom, bouncy, busty, nearly nude world you made through combining all those mods came to life..and had it’s OWN story? A story with giantesses, sexy monsters, powerful beautiful women, sex, and "unbirthy"ness/"vory"ness! But also a story with romance, adventure, comedy, and an epic saga involving Daedra, gods, and many of the most powerful forces in Tamriel, all set in a time just after the events of Elder Scroll's Online.

It begins with a peculiarly small Bosmer, far far north of the main Skyrim province, in a small but bustling Nord town, on a remote, frozen island in the middle of nowhere...


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124462 Read Count: 157456
[Report This] Published: October 19 2016 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2016 Title: In Over His Head

This is an amazing story! Usually I don't read stories with this little of a height difference, but your writing style and world building (with Bethesda's tiny bit of help) is fucking amazing! One of the best things I've read on this website, great job!!! I'm going to be avidly waiting for new chapters!

Lessons in Seduction from Little Sister by Tiny Jedi Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary:

Guy, 19, has the shrinking disease, and his sexual thoughts shrink him.  His 16-year-old sister offers to seduce him to strengthen his resistance to sexual thoughts.  But she has her own plans for fun after he shrinks.

Size reduction as small as 1 inch.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67636 Read Count: 468973
[Report This] Published: January 18 2017 Updated: August 29 2018
Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: September 01 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Ep 5 Ch 3

This is a pretty good story. I'm kinda sad that you're pausing it. Mostly because when you pause stories, they tend to die.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  I thought I'd say I was pausing the story instead of saying nothing, and have people check for weeks to see nothing.  But you're right.  Motivation is tough to continue stories.  I tend to like new ideas, but sometimes I continue previous stuff like I did with this story and Stepsister's Delight after pausing them.  Thanks for commenting.

Mediation by Ecstacy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Born with a genetic defect that's caused him to shrink throughout his life, we follow the story of  3 1/2 inch  tall Tanner and his adoptive family consisting of his high achieving step-sister Ingrid and widowed step-mother Ivory as they try have functional lives.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90488 Read Count: 333912
[Report This] Published: March 01 2017 Updated: November 05 2020
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Last Minute Packing

I've read this story from the beginning and as much as I like Tanner, I really hope no one catches Marcelle

Little John by kamperkonkel Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A boy that was born small is having desires. How will his family and babysitter deal with this?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23059 Read Count: 56796
[Report This] Published: May 19 2017 Updated: September 18 2017
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is honestly a great story. I absolutely love it so far and it's so well written! Great job!! I'd love to see more chapters and more content from you :)

Super in power, small in size by Stevie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After suffering an accident in his scientist father's home lab, Jason finds himself at 4 inches in height.  Now he must use his brain along with his brawn to get rescued.  The only thing in his way. . . His sisters.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 112362 Read Count: 273180
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: October 21 2018
Reviewer: Defiad Signed star
Date: October 26 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: the hills have eyes

It really is disappointing that the vast majority of giantess/shrink fiction is filled with sociopathic to psychopathic characters. Your story, while fairly well written in terms of prose and vocabulary seems very shallow to me as just torture porn. But that might just be me, I've read so far hoping that some kind of interesting story dynamic might hit or ya know, the characters would act like actual humans, but sadly it is a hit and a miss. Instead, all I've seen is "Jason tries to be reasonable/tries to escape his sadistic tormentors. He fails, he gets beaten the shit out of him by people who are supposed to love him." over and over and over.



Author's Response:

I appreciate an honest opinion, although it would be a pretty short story if things just worked out.  If characters don't hit a low, then any rise means nothing.  You're right that there is really only a couple sides to the fetish, but what would be the point of having large size without the power that would come with it?   That being said, I am working towards something bigger. 

 

Thank you though.  Any comment or review is better than nothing. 

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: October 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not critizing the story because it doesn't "cater to my fetish", I'm fine with stories that have cruel/slightly sadistic characters in them when it makes sense.  Get off your high horse, it isn't rude to critize a god damn story.  Assuming makes an ass out of you and me. 

You want me to praise this story? Fine. The details of what Jason does and the environment around him is very vivid and a delight to read, the descriptions of what happens to him can easily be seen in the mind's eye. Stevie is showing us the story, not telling us the story, which is a plus. The writing of the other characters is...well not good though.

I won't stop myself from reviewing a story because some arrogant arse has a self righteous opinion. Yes, there are almost too many gentle stories, but realism is important if you want most people to take the story seriously or even to stay interested. Real siblings would NOT do this to each other, and if they would...well they need to be put into an asylum. I apologize, Stevie; this is just my opinion on the story. Please, don't be discouraged by my review though, my intent isn't to shit on a story, its to give you a reason to think of what to improve.



Author's Response:

I'm not discouraged.  Personally I just think that you have an odd place where you choose to draw your line of disbelief.   You're reading a story of giants, shrinking, and super powers and how the siblings act is what bothers you.    I have things in the works that seem to be far beyond the credit you're giving the story.(as arrogant as that sounds, I know).  Everything you've read so far has significance and will come into play.  Just let me tell the story lol.  

 

All I ask is for you to think about what you're more or less asking for.  Jason has accident.  Jason gets Emily's attention.  Emily promptly helps him. Parents come home. Dad reverses process.  Everyone lives happily ever after.    The whole story in one chapter and 22 words. 

Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: October 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry to be rude, but the story is extrmeely hard to read now that you've thrown formatting to the wind. In the first chapter, it was well formatted and spaced out, now its just a gigantic paragraph that morphs together and is extremely unpleasant to read. (Not to say the story isn't good, but that it kinda hurts my eyes to read it like that.)



Author's Response:

I feel you. I'm trying to figure out the system.  Once I get the hang of the uploads I will try to fit it Better. 

A Tomboy's Planet by DankMip Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Follow the adventures of a tiny planet as it gets toyed with and poked around by a kind, yet very tomboy-ish girl

Fair warning, this story will eventually contain some general mild grossness. So heads up :P


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5656 Read Count: 82995
[Report This] Published: January 02 2018 Updated: April 17 2020
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Planet-napped

Glad to see this story coming back, but I will be skipping this newest one due to the toilet content. I am very pleased to see this return though! :D

The DownSizer: Origins by bobobo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Jacob is paired with Sara to complete a math assignment. It's rather mundane and boring until he notices that she has a special machine in her house. A shrinking machine that was rumoured to be in development. Jacob suddenly wonders if his biggest fantasy could come true?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: DownSizer Universe
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46383 Read Count: 59025
[Report This] Published: April 27 2018 Updated: May 20 2018
Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: May 20 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

Loved the story until the ending. Bleh. I know that the story isn't completed, but I'm not gonna be reading anymore chapters. At least put up some violent or digestion tags or something.

United States Shrinking Postal Service by jnbt Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

My girlfriend wants her and I to visit her younger sister across the country, but airline flights are too expensive for us at the moment. But there's a cheaper way to travel...

[Emphasis on hands and feet, and accordingly, fingernails and toenails. me 1/8th of an inch tall.]

[June 5th Update]: I was bored and drew a crude layout of Grace's apartment here:

https://i.imgur.com/R5McPM3.jpg

[June 6th Update]: I'm done. I wrote most of this while drinking, so if there are any big mistakes in the writing, grammar or story-wise, I'd love to hear about it in the comments so I can fix them. Thanks for reading, all you guys supporting the scene are great.


Categories: Adventure, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 100944
[Report This] Published: May 21 2018 Updated: June 06 2018
Reviewer: Defiad Signed
Date: June 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I actually really loved this story. It was amazing! I hope to either see more stories with this premise, or a sequel to this in the future. Great job, super hot, super well written!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Maybe one day there'll be a sequel.

Fire Emblem The Blazing Blade: A Shrinking Journey by Sheograth Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

In this story, Mark, a scholar from the city of Ostia, travels the known world on a research project. During his journey, he arrives at the plains of Sacae, hoping to catelogue their customs. But upon his arrival, something happens that makes his journey much more challenging...

The rest of the story is on my DeviantArt page (still for free!), so go there to view anything past Chapter 3!

https://www.deviantart.com/sheograth10/gallery/71955798/fire-emblem-7-a-shrinking-journey-finished

Also, I've got a Twitter account, so follow me there if you want immediate updates on when I upload new chapters for my stories!

https://twitter.com/sheograth10


Categories: Adventure, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4767 Read Count: 34069
[Report This] Published: July 14 2018 Updated: December 04 2018
Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2018 Title: Fire Emblem The Blazing Blade: A Shrinking Journey

Amazing ending! I absolutely loved this chapter and this story in general! You're honestly getting better and better at writing sexual scenes as well. Thank you so much for everything you do and your dedication to the craft! One of the best size writers to date, in my opinion!



Author's Response:

I can't believe I never responded to your review of the final chapter...

I'm glad you found this story so enjoyable! Since I started with Fire Emblem 7, it was one I really wanted to show some size love to, especially with how awesome Lyn is. And with Three Houses out now, we're in a great time to be Fire Emblem fans.

Take care!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.