BEST. STORY. EVER. I made an account just to comment this I legitimately have never seen a story on this website or any other as descriptive, well worded, and overall amazing as this one. Personally I would like to see Tom with some unlimited time with Janine again to see if she truly has changed or will revert back to how she was before (I would prefer the later) I give this story a 50000/10

Author's Response:

Thanks again :)

I've been reading through your stories (after reading Tom's story I couldn't stop) and the thing that's stood out to me is that other than a few small things your stories don't really show any evidence of coexisting in the same world... I think once you finish off Tom's story have him back to his full size and ready to go to college and he ends up going to the school Property of Omega Pi takes place in. Maybe have a few chapters of his perspective as he first moves in and as he learns by himself what the pink bands mean (what they allegedly mean) and gets excited when he gets three then when he finds out the truth it's bitter sweet since he gets unlimited access to 20 of the hottest girls on campus but also realizes there's no (easy) way out of this one... but he uses his usual charm and experience to amaze the girls until he figures something out. Also maybe something about how his charm gets him the bands faster than anyone else in the history of omega pi.
Again this is another of your instant classics and I can't wait for the storyline to unravel more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to check out my other stories! I know I need to finish many them, but i do get sidetracked fairly easily. there are usually a number of links tying them to gether subtly but typically I would like them to start apart. That would be quite the surprise for Tom to grad and wind up on the Omega list. I guess it probably be a shock both ways!

It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.

It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.

Please write a sequel

Author's Response:

I likely will, just not in the near future :)