I loved this chapter and the return to Abby and Eve together. Now that Abby knows Eve’s story, there’s a lot more understanding between the two of them. I’m also glad that Abby didn’t immediately accept being her mate. It gives a bit more gravity to the decision.

The one thing that felt off to me was that it seem like Eve was being more precise with her gang than should be possible given their suze difference. At Anny’s size, it seems like it would be impossible for Eve’s fang to pierce the skin of Abby’s check with piercing the entire cheek and going into the mouth.

But putting that aside, I loved it. I loved how Eve was able to do exactly what she needed to to nring Abby to orgasm. And I loved her teasing. Not giving her release until she said she wanted it was a fun little intimate thing to help on the road to Abby’s acceptance. But the most fun thing was how Eve was describing what Abby’s life would be like once she’s given responsibility to provide essense for all the girls in the cave. It’s going to be very erotic lol.

I look forward to seeing more physical sand emotional intimacy between Abby and Eve in the future. Hoping for some action with Abby getting to interact with Eve’s private parts. Anyway, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts foreignkanto :D I’m glad you’ve given me some input on how it played out, it really does help. :3 As for Eve piercing Abby’s cheek, I meant it more as she broke her skin a bit like a slight scratch, not an actual wound. I’m sorry if that didn’t rely properly. I’ve never tried a scene like this before until now. I’m hoping it was still a great scene to read none the less. As for Abby getting a bit *closer* to Eve, don’t worry, I have something in mind already. ;3

That was a good chapter. We got a really nice moment with Casey, Emma, and Ella at the the start. It's nice to know ho wmuch all of them care abut Abby. The relationships between all of them have really grown.

But when Ebon shows up, oh boy. I hope Casey is ok after we didn't see the outcome of the fight. And I was seriously worried that Ebon might end up killing one of the imps. I sure hope they're both alright.

But I really have no clue who this new girl might be, or when her previous cameos were. She save Abby just in the knick of time though. I'm guessing this new girl must know Eve in some way, but their response saving Abby was too coordinated for them to not be working together it seems.

But Ebon is in real trouble now, boy. Eve is angry, really angry. I do hope she doesn't kill her though. I was hoping that they might be able to get her see the lght at some point, and that she could eventually learned to live with Abby as well.

I'm always  excited when I see updates for this story. No matter how long it takes to put chapters out, keep it up!

I love it. Love the relationships you are buidling with Abby and all the different girls. And how Abby is slowly but steadily realizing that humans are the real monsters in this world is being done so well, especially with this chapter. I look forward to this story all the time, and when I see a new chapter, it's the first one I click on. Abby now has yet another Ally. She's gaining the trust of all these bestials and hominals, I hope she's able to earnt hat trust if it is ever tested.

I hope to see the next chapter soon!

Just wanted to let you know I liked this chapter, and the whole story in general. Abby is in for quite the ride, if she's going to be providing energy for the whole group. I wonder if they'll just gather everyone together and tell them about Abby that way, or if they'll introduce them to her individually, like has been happening. Anyway, I like where the story is going. Keep up the good work, both you and Franchise Writer!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your input. It really might not seem like it matters but it does to me. It makes me happy to know you like it and it's going as planned. :D Thank you for taking the time to say this Foreignkanto. I promise you the rides far from over, for both you, and for Abby :p

Hey man, loved the chapter. It's a cool thing you're doing with Abby, as she's slowly starting to enjoy being used for her energy. And those imps were so fun. Their energy was such a cool thing in the orgy scene. And this new mistress seems i teresti g. She doesn't appear to harbor I'll will towards Abby. I'll love to see what she does.

Author's Response:

Did you review me twice?

Hey man, loved the chapter. It's a cool thing you're doing with Abby, as she's slowly starting to enjoy being used for her energy. And those imps were so fun. Their energy was such a cool thing in the orgy scene. And this new mistress seems i teresti g. She doesn't appear to harbor I'll will towards Abby. I'll love to see what she does.

Author's Response:

You'll find out shortly Foreignkanto. Preperations are already underway for the next chapter >:)

Loving the story man. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks man, :D

Sarah sure moves fast. 5 minutes alone and she puts Sirius fully up her ass. I wonder what Sirius wil say once he comes to.

I can't wait to see what Eri want to do.

Only the first 2 episodes of S&M anime are out in English, but you can watch the first 9 episodes in Japanese with subtitles on YouTube right now.