Penname: randomchaos [Contact] Real name: Jonathan
Member Since: November 03 2007
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Powershift by Beneathyou Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

My friend Kierin wished she could be a giantess and a goddess. This is what happens when I make her dreams come true. 

 

 

(This is my first story, so any constructive criticism is very much appreciated!)

 

(Dont let the number of chapters turn you away, they are short compared to most stories)

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15892 Read Count: 129902
[Report This] Published: March 06 2012 Updated: April 20 2012
Reviewer: randomchaos Signed
Date: April 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

This is fucking amazing. Thank you, thank you for putting this up. I keep reading this again and again. I'm looking forward to seeing more by you in the future. You've got talent.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Charmed by Firestone Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A wizard binds a succubus for a bit of fun.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7286 Read Count: 18329
[Report This] Published: April 13 2012 Updated: April 15 2012
Reviewer: randomchaos Signed
Date: April 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really well done. The writing style, vocabulary, choice of words and general flow of ideas were excellent.

It's easy to read and it creates a vivid image in the mind that really helps you lose yourself in the story.

Also, if I could point out one thing that excels, it's your dialogue. It's believeable and powerful and enhances the immersion.

I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'll do my best to not disappoint!