Alot like the movie with the usual evil twist that andrew nellis puts on his stories.
1. Keep my attention the whole time.
2.Great story with great events.
3. Didnt go on and on about unimporant thngs.
Great story man ;-) keep writting
eat someone and meet someone else.
good story, you really are a mastermind at coming up with them.
Author's Response: thanks man! its always nice to hear back from the reader :)
hey man dont worry about the grammar, this is a great story just get that next part done.
Author's Response: Thank you SeallowMeAlive. I intend to do so. I actually wrote the next chapter but my computer did not save it so no I must rewrite it. Then of course I posted an addition here that was meant for the story the Resort. Cant get any technical stuff right lately :( Don't worry. A new chapter should be up here soon. I just have to make myself sit down and rewrite it. Thanks for the review and encouragement. :)
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